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Deborah Guzzi writes full time. Her third book, The Hurricane is available through Prolific Press. https://prolificpress.com/bookstore/prolific-books-c-12/the-hurricane-by-deborah-guzzi-p-151.html Her poetry appears in Allegro, Artificium, Shooter, & The Foxglove Journal in the UK, Subterranean Blue, Existere, The Ekphrastic Review, Scarlet Leaf Review & Subterranean Blue Poetry, Canada - Tincture, Australia - mgv2>publishing, France Cha: Asian Review, China - Vine Leaves Literary Journal, Australia - The Scarlet Leaf Review - Greece, Ribbons, pioneertown, Sounding Review, Bacopa Literary Review, The Aurorean, Liquid Imagination, The Tishman Review, Page & Spine & others in the USA. 

Ménage à Trois of Lines

Blog Posted:10/10/2012 6:51:00 AM

The Twofer Contest is almost done,

 so here's a primer for THREE [Just for FUN]


Get ready, get set, [one for the money, two for the show]


THREE TO GET READYNOW GO MAN GO!

Forms which can be done in using 3 lines are as follows

ABC, Acrostic, Alliteration, Blank Verse, Carpe Diem, Enclosed Rhyme [aba],  Epitaph, Free Verse, haiku [becareful if I don't think it's a haiku you will be out right away]*, Iambic Pentameter,Than-Bauk, Personification, Rhyme, senryu * [see the note on haiku] sijo

//*[These poems are pretty self explainitory BUT if you need help soup mail me] ABC, Acrostic, Alliteration //

 

Blank verse is H A R D, it's metered verse with NO end-rhyme!

Carpe Diem means sieze the day SO

anything you write which is in 3 lines which pertains to that theme is fine [easy pezey!]

Enclosed Rhyme

[ex: the rain in SPAIN/falls mainly/on the PLAIN]

Epitaph

A commemorative inscription on a tomb or mortuary monument

written to praise the deceased.

Free Verse
If you think it's a haiku but you are unsure I will...

If you are using poetic vehicles such as alliteration, simile, metaphor..

If you haven't rhymed...PUT IT HERE

haiku

17 syllables or less, about nature, in the moment, containing 2 parts

[one of which is a juxtaposed bit of additional sensory input] containing a season word

Iambic Pentameter
The tick-TOCK rhythm of iambic pentameter can be heard in the opening line of Shakespeare's Sonnet 12: when I do COUNT the CLOCK that TELLS the TIME

Than-bauk
conventionally a witty saying or epigram, is a three line "climbing rhyme" poem of Burmese origin.  Each line has four syllables. The rhyme is on the fourth syllable of the first line, the third syllable of the second line, and the second syllable of the third line.

Personification
Give the qualities of a person to the inanimate things in your poem.

senryu
17 syllables or less, about man,written in 3 lines, in the moment

sijo
Unrhymed poetry 3 long lines, each line varies between 14 and 16 syllables, with the middle line often the longest.  The first line states a theme, the second line counters it, and the third line resolves the poem.

If you have a form I haven't listed which can be done in 3 lines IT'S OK

JUST LET ME KNOW

PS Here a location for a whole sheet of haiku Wannabees

MOST are 3 lines ;) 

 http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/index.php?showtopic=1188






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Debbie
Guzzi
Date: 10/11/2012 6:28:00 AM
The blog is giving you a 1 place STOP to SHOP for thought on your 3 line form!
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Date: 10/10/2012 6:27:00 PM
Ohhh GOD ONE- hay(na)ku or janaku..3 lines, line 1 one word, line 2 two words, line 3 three words, unrhymed, the line order can be reversed [no specific syllable count per line]
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Date: 10/10/2012 6:23:00 PM
haikuette -American- 3 lines- 17 syllables or less [no specific count per line], each line MUST be a separate entity, unrhymed, untitled, numbered like haiku
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/10/2012 6:24:00 PM
oopsey NO VERBS!!
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Date: 10/10/2012 6:21:00 PM
Dixdeux O Form- french [10-10-2] syllables per line UNRHYMED - numbered NOT titled like haiku
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Nette
Onclaud
Date: 10/10/2012 3:24:00 PM
yipers!... how about a monorhyme, or a triplet?.. just my 2 cents..:) huggs!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/10/2012 6:04:00 PM
I took out Bio as you suggested Suz, yes 3 lines of monorhyme is fine
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/10/2012 3:24:00 PM
a short bio??
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Debbie
Guzzi
Date: 10/10/2012 1:42:00 PM
For me the biggest trouble in actually writing what could be called a haiku [not necessarily a good one, just one having undeniable aspects of haiku] was learning the difference between SUBJECTIVE and OBJECTIVE, and the HOW to make the leap to the fragmented phrase/line. Because I am a visual person I have less trouble than others who are auditory, or tactile learners, I CAN ..objectively discribe [x] and I KNOW my associations with the images are simply that NOT the truth of the image.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/10/2012 1:45:00 PM
one reason adjectives and adverbs are not used is because they 'color' the moment with the writers OPINION of how it looked, how it felt, and since it is to be A MOMENT/FROZEN there really shouldn't be more than 1 action..sometimes not even 1 verb..but certainly not more
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/10/2012 1:42:00 PM
Once you GET that you can do 2 lines of a haiku fairly easily [not that someone won't say SO WHAT!] it is the fragment which brings the reader IN, SHOWS the AhhhhhhHA! the eureka moment is between the 2 parts, no ahaHA!!! no haiku
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Joann
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Date: 10/10/2012 12:15:00 PM
Kimo sounds japanese, but was invented in Israel.
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Joann
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Date: 10/10/2012 12:14:00 PM
Kimo three lines with syllable count: 10/7/6. No rhymes.
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Debbie
Guzzi
Date: 10/10/2012 11:00:00 AM
Tim YOU can do it!!! I have faith in you!
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Andrea
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Date: 10/10/2012 8:03:00 AM
what's hard about blank verse, Debs? It's just like starting a sonnet but you don't have to worry about rhyme!!! It's strange,I don't believe I ever clicked on a poem labeled blank verse here that had actually been written in iambic pentameter! I think people do not realize what it means. Anyway, this sounds like a good contest idea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/10/2012 2:19:00 PM
well, I don't know if I ever saw your poems but when I think about it, I may have seen just a few actual blank verse poems on this site.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/10/2012 10:55:00 AM
Hey I think I have at least one where I was trying to do iambic pentameter for blank verse!!! :P
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Tim
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Date: 10/10/2012 7:07:00 AM
Just learned how to count to two...now I gotta' go for three, huh?
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