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More fun with ChatGPT

Blog Posted by Roy Jerden: 2/6/2023 1:21:00 PM

 

Here are some more poems I requested from ChatGPT. One thing is obvious and that is ChatGPT was born to write Hallmark cards as Craig commented in the previous blog. I requested no cliches and I got cliches. I requested a Keats style ode and it must have thought I meant Buster Keaton. Have fun reading and commenting.

Write a love poem without using cliches 


My love, you are the light in my day,
The wind in my sails, the beat in my heart.
With you, everything else fades away,
Leaving only a feeling that will not depart.

Your smile brightens up the darkest skies,
Your laughter brings joy to the soul.
I cherish every moment with your eyes,
And I feel truly whole.

You are my home, my safety, my peace,
My love, my life, my everything.
In your embrace, I find release,
From the worries and troubles that life can bring.

I will always cherish the moments we share,
And I promise to always stand by your side.
With you, I have nothing to fear,
For together, our love will forever abide.


Write an elegy


In memory of one now gone,
A life that shone like the break of dawn.
A soul that radiated warmth and light,
A spirit that took flight.

Their laughter echoed in the breeze,
Their kindness still brings peace.
They left a trail of love and grace,
A memory that we embrace.

Although they're no longer by our side,
Their presence still abides.
In memories of their smile and touch,
We find comfort and such.

They may have left this earthly plane,
But their legacy will remain.
In every heart they touched with love,
Their memory will soar like a dove.

So let us mourn with gentle tears,
And hold them close throughout the years.
For though they've left us far behind,
Their spirit will forever be entwined.


Write a poem using the Cinquain form


Dance

Feet tapping,
Rhythm moving through veins,
Soul soaring, free, unshackled,
Joyful laughter ringing,
Dance.

Nature

Tall trees,
Birds chirping, rustling leaves,
Breeze blowing, sun shining,
Peaceful, calm, serene,
Nature.

Friendship

Laughing together,
Secrets shared, memories made,
Supporting each other,
Trust and love unafraid,
Friendship.

Dreams

Wandering mind,
Starry skies, far-off lands,
Limitless potential,
Inspiration in hand,
Dreams.


Write an ode on immortality 


Immortality, oh elusive prize,
A concept that has captivated minds,
For centuries, we've reached for the skies,
In search of a truth we may never find.

The thought of never having to say goodbye,
Of never aging, never losing our grace,
It fills us with hope, it lifts us high,
And lifts the weight of time from our face.

But what does it mean to live forever,
When our world is but a fleeting thing?
When every flower and bird must sever,
And all that once was is no longer seen?

Perhaps immortality lies not in flesh,
But in memories, love, and deeds we leave.
For as long as they live on, we will not rest,
Our legacy a light that will never cease.

So let us live our lives with purpose true,
And leave behind a legacy that shines,
For in that we may find a form of immortality,
And a life that forever in memory will rhyme.

 


Write an ode on immortality in the style of John Keats
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Immortality, a gift beyond compare,
A dream that dances through the mind,
A notion that we grasp, and yet repair,
To find its true essence, so hard to find.

Oh how we yearn for endless life,
To taste the sweetness of eternity,
To bask in the glow of never-ending light,
And free from time's grasp, live joyfully.

But is immortality a wondrous thing,
Or is it but a fleeting, idle thought,
A fantasy that lures with gilded string,
And brings with it, naught but pain and naught?

For what is life, if it be never-ending,
If all its joys and sorrows do persist?
And what of beauty, will it still be pending,
Or will it fade like summer's fleeting mist?

No, immortality is not in life's length,
But in the memories we leave behind,
In the love that we possess and we dispense,
And in the beauty that will always shine.

So let us live our lives with grace and fire,
And make the most of every passing day,
For in that, we'll find a form of attire,
That will forever brighten life's parade.

And though our bodies may return to clay,
Our spirit, love, and memory will endure,
A testament to life's rich, fleeting sway,
And a legacy that shall forever allure.

For Suzette, a sonnet in the style of John Keats 

O Beauty, thou art like the morning light,
Refreshing, fair and with a radiance bright;
Thou fill'st my heart with joy, my soul with grace,
And art the muse that leads me to this place.

Like summer's eve, thou art serene and still,
And yet within thee lies a fiery will,
A spirit bold, that doth my senses fire,
With love and wonder, higher and higher.

Thou art the sunshine of my every day,
The star that shines upon my darkened way;
And in thy presence, all my fears depart,
Leaving behind a calm and tranquil heart.

So let me bask in thy sweet-scented beams,
And with my love, sing sweet and endless dreams.



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Date: 2/13/2023 11:58:00 AM
Yikes! Talk about cliches...
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Date: 2/9/2023 7:12:00 PM
Interesting, the first poem about love is an encyclopedia of cliche and therefore hideous poetry as are most of the rest, yet, the ode in the style of Keats has much more merit---interesting perspectives.
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Date: 2/7/2023 10:15:00 PM
I've been thinking: If I should wish to include this sonnet in my new book, © Su's Little Songs 2023, who does the copyright belong to? Do I credit you and your blog (permission hereby requested, please), or ChatGPT? I think that it would make a fine example of man versus machine.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/8/2023 5:08:00 PM
Thank you:))
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/8/2023 12:47:00 PM
It would appear to be me with the copyright, but as there is currently no case law, I would suggest crediting me with the idea and ChatGPT with the output as that is what actually occurred. Permission granted.
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/8/2023 12:44:00 PM
The Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988 was of course drafted before these judgments, and does deal with computer-generated works. If there is no human author, section 9 says that for computer-generated works, “the author shall be taken to be the person by whom the arrangements necessary for the creation of the work are undertaken”.
Date: 2/7/2023 10:08:00 PM
Thank you, Roy. (Biiiiiig smile!) Yes, sonnets may have about any rhyme scheme you wish. Not only the Shakespearian one that we have become used to. I have now included the rhyme scheme in my Keats Sonnet, When the New Year Looms, for ease of reference. BTW It was a pleasure to read a blog with meat on it. Regards, Suzette
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Suzette Richards
Date: 2/8/2023 5:38:00 PM
It appears to summarize the poem in the final couplet in the style of a Shakespearean sonnet, but it is definitely a Fourteener, which predates Keats. I had to smile at the reference to "Beauty" in line one. I have for years been plagued by a wrong number on my cellphone where SMSs are addressed to "Beauty" (a common name in this country).
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/8/2023 12:52:00 PM
Thanks, Suzette. One additional thing I noticed is there did not appear (at least to me) a volta in line 8.
Date: 2/6/2023 7:56:00 PM
Interesting results, Roy. I notice that in the elegy it uses the now PC generic "they". Regarding Keats: You might have refined your request as a sonnet in the style of John Keats. I echo his sentiments as per his sonnet: On a Sonnet. (You obviously have a paid monthly subscription. The free version is oversubscribed at present and access is limited.) I would love to see what AI will come up with. In the meantime, I will plod on and rely on the ever-aging grey matter to write samples to illustrate the styles of the poets I enjoy. My personal reason for penning poetry is not the end product, but the process - it takes my mind off many things, such as the worrying political situation, climate change, the woke movements, etc. Have a great day. Regards, Suzette
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/7/2023 3:10:00 PM
I had it write a sonnet in the style of John Keats. See above. It’s actually a series of couplets, but still pretty good.
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/7/2023 1:02:00 PM
I have the free version of ChatGPT. I guess I got in before it was too late.

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