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Quills

“Quills”



he sent 
paper planes over 
air waves

dodging 
silver bullet’s brain
some kind of feathery love

poetic sword
plucking at 
the tight-stitched up

like John Donne
unlacing amuse 
voluptuous

for that harmonious chime

(LadyLabyrinth / 2022)




“Poet's Soul Asunder Quill” (Casino Versus Japan-Blue Vacation)
XavieRinato
19.6.2009




qui il
qui elle





https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/50340/to-his-mistress-going-to-bed

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/voluptuous_bullets_1215553

Premium Member We'Ve All Been Forgiven

the force has spoken, today
of all the things to say
stop, having oft with your bother
give more love to your father and mother
those whose in ah, with me
don't need your sympathy
nothings more than satisfactory
I've risen above my condition
I've overcome my circumstances
I've out reached my sins,



I'VE, I  HAVE  BEEN  FORGIVEN


these sins that so easily, beset us
all the panes that leads to mistrust
stop, hating on them you don't understand
grab a hold, shake a hand, take a stand
those whose in ah, with me
don't need your sympathy
nothings more than satisfactory
I've risen above my condition
I've overcome my circumstances
I've out reached my sins,

STOP JUDGING, START LOVING
STOP DODGING, START EMBRACING
START TYING AND NOT UNLACING


I've out reached my sins,
I've risen above my condition
stop, hating on them you don't understand
START forgiving this is God's PLAN
grab a hold, shake a hand, take a stand
Pray for, Forgive all your fellow man
stop, hating on them UNDERSTAND

WE'VE BEEN ALL FORGIVEN

9/18/18
Written by James Edward Lee Sr. ©2018

Val N Tino

Val n tino

Free verse

Auburn curls tussle in the breeze
Softly framing her radiant face 
Large violet eyes spark as he nears
Her body trembles in his presence

Like a honey bee to nectar, he reaches
Embracing her seductive body close
Kissing her moist pink lips with passion
Under the concealing branches of the willow

Unlacing her lavender blouse to reveal
Her stunning bosom made for his eyes only
Laying back into the tall greening grass
Becoming one in this universal moment

She looks into his eyes saying
This special lover’s day was made
For you and I to thank creation
For the marriage and growth of Us”

Heart to heart
Soul to soul
Life to life
My Valentine


Carole Cookie Arnold


Revelation

Your unclaimers
will miss the date
with a lunatic world,

what might
you need
for the final journey.

Don’t stop at midway
to watch the history
taking a turn.

A crispy sun
was waiting in meadows
to welcome bonhomie,

freedom of unlacing
the foes. The flesh sends
upright signals

for releasing the soul.
The incredible smell of bleed
will hang on the solid stings of space.


SATISH VERMA

Once

once, from high in the mountains
your song rained down on me
drops splattering my soul

I got lost in the fantasy, thoughts
of you tied with fragile spun dreams
bound by the depth of your love

unlacing the ribbon, you look within
with tenderness, you take my heart
uniting it with yours

now, this love blooms, flowers strewn
nourished by the rain and sun
in the valley inside

Revelation

Your unclaimers
will miss the date
with a lunatic world,

what might
you need
for the final journey.

Don’t stop at midway
to watch the history
taking a turn.

A crispy sun
was waiting in meadows
to welcome bonhomie,

freedom of unlacing
the foes. The flesh sends
upright signals

for releasing the soul.
The incredible smell of bleed
will hang on the solid stings of space.

SATISH VERMA


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