Tortoise Poems | Examples

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I am a rabbit by born,not a tortoise

I am a rabbit born to race the wind,
My feet are quick, my shadow never stays;
I spring ahead where others lag behind,
Yet lose myself in strange, uncharted ways.

They say, “Be tortoise—slow and firm of pace,
For steady steps will always win the day.”
But I am neither built for that calm grace,
Nor meant to plod along a patient way.

What fate has cast me in this fleeting mold—
So soft, so swift, so bright in outward show?
A form that glimmers, charming to behold,
Yet falters when the final winds must blow.

I dash through life with promise in my stride,
Yet reach no end where victory resides.

Hakuna metata

Hakuna metata

In the fields
of broiling air
plump lambs gambol.
The daytime star
smiles and whirs;
a lone tortoise toils
in plodding rhythm.
His docile baritone sings
the timeless chorus
“Hakuna metata!”
to fretting lions 
who grapple tousled 
and tangled.

Grandma

Grandma, the tortoise,
lived hundred forty one years
she witnessed many
animals generations
died at the San Diego Zoo


Premium Member Mystery of a Pumpkin

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                                           Mystery of Pumpkin

                                   One upon a time, not far back,
                               Grew in my small backyard garden
                                   A pumpkin, size of a tortoise,
                                 A monster, with weight of a ton
                              And had to be chopped with an axe;

                           Friends wished to have its seeds to plant,
                                   Alas, it was a seedless male;

                             News spread fast in the neighbourhood
                                       Leading to police enquiry
                                      For concealing information,
                                         But after investigation
                                    Turned out to be a mystery.

Premium Member Tick Toking

Oh me, oh my,
How time keeps tick-tocking by!
Each year shaves pounds of days off the next
Unburdened, it races on, faster and faster yet.
We say, "Wasn't it yesterday or maybe just last week?" 
Or "where'd the time go?! Damn the thief!"
Summer break was the Tortoise in our youth, 
but then we understood the stories moral and truth…
That slow and steady… each minute is gone
Until, in not so very long, the race is won. 
At the finish line, where loved ones wait…out of time…
The Clock will stop, inevitable and sure,
 when the hare-swift Tic, is Toking no more.

Premium Member I am a Giant Galapagos Tortoise

I may be almost four foot long,
but you scare me a bit
I shall retract my neck and head into my shell
what are you doing in Galapagos anyway?
you do not look like our usual species
I am the oldest living land animal in the world
yes, I am reclusive, so please go away
I will live to be one hundred and fifty
if I am not disturbed
Hint Hint


Premium Member The Tortoise and the Hare, Revised

    The tortoise ran his race
       far, far off the pace
    While the speedy hare
       zoomed from here to there

    Yet when they tallied up the score
       the tortoise had paused to help more
    folks than the hare, who went too fast
       missed his chance, and came in last

Premium Member Tortoise and the Hare: NEW Poetic Format COMPLETED

Tortoise looked, couldn't see, hare disappeared.
Only him, tortoise win, hare reappeared.

the sportsmanship that
honesty competes often
eludes the cheaters

The Word of Life is joy everlasting.
In the game of life, we win, lose, and die,
patterns reasoning; be glad we're living.
Living for the trice, losers don't comply,
trifles our distractions are ankle-deep. 
Count on time won't add up you'll meet Grim Reap.

Speed misjudged its breaks; odds knew--widow's mite.
Live yond your means, who are your family.
A hard worker, big spender, works in spite,
Jones styles for their smiles, save one--their envy.
Live simple, live smart unlike ducks and drakes,
odds knew--widow's mite; speed misjudged its breaks.

The hare expected to win and the tortoise knew he would lose--too much and too little of themselves, until fate intervened.

One sat under the apple tree until an apple fell on its head, and the other was on top of that tree, simply going out on a limb.

Premium Member Tortoise and the Hare: Part V of a NEW Poetic Format

The hare expected to win and the tortoise knew he would lose--too much and too little of themselves, until fate intervened.

One sat under the apple tree until an apple fell on its head, and the other was on top of that tree, simply going out on a limb.

Premium Member Tortoise and the Hare: Part IV of a NEW Poetic Format

L-Speed misjudged its breaks; odds knew--widow's mite.-a
E-Live yond your means, who are your family.-b
T-A hard worker, big spender, works in spite,-a
T-Jones styles for their smiles save one--their envy.b
E-Live simple, live smart unlike ducks and drakes,-c
R-odds knew--widow's mite; speed misjudged its breaks.-c

Premium Member Tortoise and the Hare: Part III of a NEW Poetic Format

B-The Word of Life is joy everlasting-a
E-In the game of life, we win, lose, and die-b
T-patterns reasoning, be glad we're living-a
T-living for the trice, losers don't comply,-b
E-trifles our distractions are ankle-deep.-c
R-Count on time won't add up you'll meet Grim Reap.-c

Premium Member Tortoise and the Hare: Part II of a NEW Poetic Format

the sportsmanship that
honesty competes often
eludes the cheaters

Premium Member Tortoise and the Hare: Part I of a NEW Poetic Format

Tortoise looked, couldn't see, hare disappeared.
Only him, tortoise win, hare reappeared.

Premium Member Tortoise


The tortoise walks slowly through sand
No rush, no needs to understand
All problems with humans around
Just a stop to look from a sound
Carrying curiosity....
with calm moving steps it can see
The world low to ground  where it goes,
It only carries what it knows
As the sun beats down on its shell
It shows confidence all is well

Heidi Sands

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Premium Member tortoise keyring

I am fifteen , carefree and in love. Our destination unknown ,
the mud beneath us tough. 
A glisten caught my eye, amongst other  tattered stuff.
You looked down at me smiling, pulling at your cuff. 

A tortoise? he asks? as though such gift was not enough. 
Its perfect, I plead and  forever since the memory stuck.
The colours represent our story, ive held onto it as luck.
thirteen years have passed and yet , my keyring makes my face light up.

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