Tortoise Poems

Premium MemberMystery of a Pumpkin

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                                           Mystery of Pumpkin

                                   One upon a time, not far back,
                               Grew in my small backyard garden
                                   A pumpkin, size of a tortoise,
                                 A monster, with weight of a ton
                              And had to be chopped with an axe;

                           Friends wished to have its seeds to plant,
                                   Alas, it was a seedless male;

                             News spread fast in the neighbourhood
                                       Leading to police enquiry
                                      For concealing information,
                                         But after investigation
                                    Turned out to be a mystery.
Categories: tortoise, fun, humor, mystery,
Form: Verse

Premium MemberTick Toking

Oh me, oh my,
How time keeps tick-tocking by!
Each year shaves pounds of days off the next
Unburdened, it races on, faster and faster yet.
We say, "Wasn't it yesterday or maybe just last week?" 
Or "where'd the time go?! Damn the thief!"
Summer break was the Tortoise in our youth, 
but then we understood the stories moral and truth…
That slow and steady… each minute is gone
Until, in not so very long, the race is won. 
At the finish line, where loved ones wait…out of time…
The Clock will stop, inevitable and sure,
 when the hare-swift Tic, is Toking no more.
Categories: tortoise, time,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberI am a Giant Galapagos Tortoise

I may be almost four foot long,
but you scare me a bit
I shall retract my neck and head into my shell
what are you doing in Galapagos anyway?
you do not look like our usual species
I am the oldest living land animal in the world
yes, I am reclusive, so please go away
I will live to be one hundred and fifty
if I am not disturbed
Hint Hint
Categories: tortoise, 11th grade, 2nd grade,
Form: Personification

Premium MemberThe Tortoise and the Hare, Revised

    The tortoise ran his race
       far, far off the pace
    While the speedy hare
       zoomed from here to there

    Yet when they tallied up the score
       the tortoise had paused to help more
    folks than the hare, who went too fast
       missed his chance, and came in last
Categories: tortoise, animal, care, race, success,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberTortoise and the Hare: NEW Poetic Format COMPLETED

Tortoise looked, couldn't see, hare disappeared.
Only him, tortoise win, hare reappeared.

the sportsmanship that
honesty competes often
eludes the cheaters

The Word of Life is joy everlasting.
In the game of life, we win, lose, and die,
patterns reasoning; be glad we're living.
Living for the trice, losers don't comply,
trifles our distractions are ankle-deep. 
Count on time won't add up you'll meet Grim Reap.

Speed misjudged its breaks; odds knew--widow's mite.
Live yond your means, who are your family.
A hard worker, big spender, works in spite,
Jones styles for their smiles, save one--their envy.
Live simple, live smart unlike ducks and drakes,
odds knew--widow's mite; speed misjudged its breaks.

The hare expected to win and the tortoise knew he would lose--too much and too little of themselves, until fate intervened.

One sat under the apple tree until an apple fell on its head, and the other was on top of that tree, simply going out on a limb.
Categories: tortoise, analogy, animal, character, fate,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberTortoise and the Hare: Part V of a NEW Poetic Format

The hare expected to win and the tortoise knew he would lose--too much and too little of themselves, until fate intervened.

One sat under the apple tree until an apple fell on its head, and the other was on top of that tree, simply going out on a limb.
Categories: tortoise, analogy,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberTortoise and the Hare: Part IV of a NEW Poetic Format

L-Speed misjudged its breaks; odds knew--widow's mite.-a
E-Live yond your means, who are your family.-b
T-A hard worker, big spender, works in spite,-a
T-Jones styles for their smiles save one--their envy.b
E-Live simple, live smart unlike ducks and drakes,-c
R-odds knew--widow's mite; speed misjudged its breaks.-c
Categories: tortoise, analogy, poetry,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberTortoise and the Hare: Part III of a NEW Poetic Format

B-The Word of Life is joy everlasting-a
E-In the game of life, we win, lose, and die-b
T-patterns reasoning, be glad we're living-a
T-living for the trice, losers don't comply,-b
E-trifles our distractions are ankle-deep.-c
R-Count on time won't add up you'll meet Grim Reap.-c
Categories: tortoise, analogy, poetry,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberTortoise and the Hare: Part II of a NEW Poetic Format

the sportsmanship that
honesty competes often
eludes the cheaters
Categories: tortoise, analogy,
Form: Senryu

Premium MemberTortoise and the Hare: Part I of a NEW Poetic Format

Tortoise looked, couldn't see, hare disappeared.
Only him, tortoise win, hare reappeared.
Categories: tortoise, analogy, games, life, lost,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberTortoise


The tortoise walks slowly through sand
No rush, no needs to understand
All problems with humans around
Just a stop to look from a sound
Carrying curiosity....
with calm moving steps it can see
The world low to ground  where it goes,
It only carries what it knows
As the sun beats down on its shell
It shows confidence all is well

Heidi Sands

8/8/24

*8 Syllables

(C)opyright
Categories: tortoise, animal, courage,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Membertortoise keyring

I am fifteen , carefree and in love. Our destination unknown ,
the mud beneath us tough. 
A glisten caught my eye, amongst other  tattered stuff.
You looked down at me smiling, pulling at your cuff. 

A tortoise? he asks? as though such gift was not enough. 
Its perfect, I plead and  forever since the memory stuck.
The colours represent our story, ive held onto it as luck.
thirteen years have passed and yet , my keyring makes my face light up.
Categories: tortoise, anniversary,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberTORTOISE AND HARE: FROM RACE TO FRIENDSHIP

“A Tortoise and Hare decide to race. The hare is so confident in the lead that he naps while the tortoise keeps going to win.” Aesop’s Fable

Learning from their practical contest

Hare and tortoise built friendship, really best

Helping each other with kindness’ zest

Complementing one another to the fullest

Hare in running fast, finding nest of sweet rest 

With tortoise sharing provisions for food fest

Thankful to God* for their partnership that's blest.

*1 Thessalonians 5:18 - In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you.

February 29, 2024
1st place, "The Rest of the Story" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Miranda Hawley; judged on 3/19/2024
Categories: tortoise, animal, appreciation, blessing, cheer
Form: Monorhyme

Premium MemberAchiilles and Tortoise

I’d rather cry, but of course
My voice had suddenly gone
You’ve changed today your course
Now I’m here alone
Playing solitaires and stuff
Winning most of the games
Hearing your silence is tough
It puts me to terrible shame
But finally you took pity
For poor me, my love
Your letter was deep and witty
It came out like a grieving laugh
"I never ignore you at purpose"
There’s always a reason, when you
Become an Achilles, and tortoise
Is me, under skies so blue
We're running the same beaten track
Leaving our trails behind
You have no time to look back
So am I, love, so am I..
Categories: tortoise, fantasy, loneliness, love,
Form: Rhyme

Long Life of Tortoise

lions in the forest 
are roaring  loudly 
tortoises look at 
skelton of lions generationally. 

July 18/2023
Categories: tortoise, animal, imagery, metaphor,
Form: Free verse

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