In fifth grade, I earned first place
statewide for violin
against the girl I half-loved—
her fingers quicker,
her lineage more illustrious—
but that day,
mine did not tremble.
She chose a piece
with fireworks and pitfalls—
something by Tchaikovsky—
I chose Barcarolle—
plainspoken, sweet,
a boat gliding through moonlight.
I played it without flaw.
She slipped once,
only once.
We both knew I’d won
on a grace note—
not brilliance, nor fire—
just a clean line
held steady
while hers faltered.
Afterward,
she turned from me
like a violin
tucked into its case.
A week later,
dad took us to a restaurant
with cloth napkins and candles,
to celebrate my victory.
He smiled too much,
and talked too loud,
and the wineglass
trembled in his hand
just before he threw up
on the checkered tablecloth.
He tried to pay,
but the card was declined.
The cashier cut it in half.
He gave them his gold watch
as a promise.
I wished I could just
be invisible,
and we left without dessert.
Two years later,
I buried my medal in the woods
and never played violin again.
Categories:
tchaikovsky, 5th grade, celebration, childhood,
Form: Free verse
Swan Lake* by Peter Tchaikovsky for sure
success after initial failure
Categories:
tchaikovsky, music,
Form: Monoku
I freely admit I love classical music,
And please don't think me a snob
If I keep my composure
When I mention composers
As Beethoven, Mozart, Tchaikovsky, and Schumann,
And not Ludie, or Wolfie,
Or Petie, or Bob.
And a symphony simply cannot be enjoyed
At just any old time of the day.
I can't listen to them
Prior to seven p.m.,
And I don't mean to brag, but I couldn't be dragged
To a Wednesday or Saturday matinee
Of a ballet by Bizet or Massenet.
My taste in classical music, you see,
Is eclectic, but not meant to shock.
I choose Strauss for the schmaltz
Of a polka or waltz,
And Chopin is my dude when I crave an etude,
But I do tend to doze in my seat in the loge
Through an opera by Wagner…
Or more Offenbach.
Categories:
tchaikovsky, humor, music,
Form: Rhyme
“Dreams Coercing Memory”
You want cherries jubilee
with a little Krug champagne
but soft custard is just the same
when reality plays its game
by the spoonful
morphine comes
to save the day
the light changes
subtle refractions
of dreams coercing
memory
long elegant fingers
poised painted apricots
those false '70s fingernails
tremendous talons
for Tchaikovsky takeoff
gracefully shimmering
glamorously sparkling
eyes smiling, clicking keys
without fear, the notes become
a romantic Chopin mystery
pianola peddles
next to her laughs
and says with glee,
a good exercise
back then, we didn't
have the time, says
the matriarch smiling
just like a mother
come to collect
on the other side
her sister, hand on shoulders
sits next to her
a Nightingale Linnet
the number
at pianola
3
one number
most
profound
one number
devine aligned,
most hard to forget
or push aside
kept close
in Love and loved
for all eternity
this one
as 3
should never hide
(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)
LM/HMM/LJM
17.9.23
mlb, klb, llb
Categories:
tchaikovsky, death, family, life, love,
Form: Elegy
I'd marry you tomorrow
If I could, my dear
The only reason not today is 'cause
Today's already here
Twenty four short hours
Is more than time enough
To put it all together
The small details and such
I'd buy two airline tickets
To somewhere far away
Care not for the timeline
Just plan a lengthy stay
We'll lodge romantic style
In quaint, idyllic suites
At placid, tranquil places
Where music fills the streets
First night we'll hear Tchaikovsky
The Nutcracker's in town
Let's share a clove before we go
And let the world go 'round
As long as you're my sweetheart
You're all my heart's eyes view
So go ahead now, you lay back
I know just what to do
Categories:
tchaikovsky, for her, i love
Form: Rhyme
Peter Ilyric Tchaikovsky
maybe the 'greatest' you'd see
Conhsumat charm&technique
vulnerable romantic sleek
Categories:
tchaikovsky, music, people,
Form: Clerihew
digesting ballet —
prime rib and bacon, waltzing
Nutcracker taters
Tchaikovsky suite crescendo
fork and knife tenderizing
12/25/2021
Categories:
tchaikovsky, christmas, food, music,
Form: Tanka
A girl in the crowd takes a selfie.
Her tam o’shanter sparkles
because of the fireworks going off
in the background, and because it has glitter.
At the gates of Moscow
weary French troops run away
hands over their ears, as Tchaikovsky
fires his righteous cannons.
The girl with the cell
is as pretty as her friend beside her,
but her friend outshines the tam o’shanter
as if it were just an ordinary beret.
She has sapphires in her eyebrows.
Kids in earshot of adults
‘wow’ or mouth age-appropriate obscenities.
The limp body of a teenage messiah
is elbowed and pushed around by his disciples.
Several rows back, a woman is laughing
as she cranes her neck skyward;
from the chin up, she looks like Greta Garbo,
only she is short and fat.
Rockets fly like fan-dancing ostriches.
The truncated 1812 Overture burps to a close.
My lens can’t capture the woman
or the girl, or her friend
who now all shine like diamonds.
I can’t fit all of this into 12 mega pixels.
The night eventually stops throwing missiles
at the moon,
the girls, and women fizz out,
the kids continue to sizzle
until they are led away by dark-eyed dreams.
Categories:
tchaikovsky, poetry,
Form: Free verse
BE CAREFUL
Be careful what you ask for
One day life is simple, you ask
a female colleague at a partnering
organization not to call you “doctor”,
“professor” and such, then she says
your name the way a symphony orchestra
tears into the finale of a spirited overture
by Tchaikovsky or Rossini and suddenly
your feeling like the primus pilus, the
first violin, the anchor baton, the broad-
shouldered stroke in an eight-oared shell
or the seminal man with genes of genius
in his jeans: powerful, confident, perhaps
dangerously exposed – a burden you
don’t need
If you’re only doing business,
let formality play its role!
Categories:
tchaikovsky, business,
Form: Free verse
Symphonies and ballets
No wonder you are loved.
“The Nutcracker” and “Swan Lake”
Were those ones you dreamed of?
I heard you filled halls and auditoriums
You were good at painting music with soul
A romantic prodigy of your era
“Has a profound tune as a whole”.
Your overflowing melodies and harmonies
They sound like a quaint orchestration
Where everything flows with the beauty
It moves my emotion.
Categories:
tchaikovsky, life,
Form: Rhyme
The tale Tchaikovsky wove that day
Lives on and on upon a stage
Spun by pirouettes ...and plie's
An epic story of love conveyed
Through the beauty of ballet
Prince Siegfried and his Queen Odette
Who gave their lives without regret
To live forever bound together
As beautiful birds of a feather
As two swans upon a lake
Author: Elaine C. George
Authors note: Plie' is a french word
pronounced Plee ay
Categories:
tchaikovsky, tribute,
Form: Rhyme
"The Bolshevist’s Boat"
Where are the words
never heard in the hymn hidden
a broken heart sitting
solitary and questioning
In the Bolshevist’s Boat of Belief
there are questions -
and strange facts remain sticking
in a mind, like thorns embedded;
the circumference
of a circle, whole,
where recalcitrant numbers
are perpetually moving
never ending
(LadyLabyrinth / 2020)
d.18.9.71, b.18.9.99
b.2.3.39, b.2.3.64
b.29.8.35, d.29.8.2010
Pyotr Ilyich Tchaikovsky - “Hymn of the Cherubim”
https://youtu.be/OPlK5HwFxcw
“The One About Belief”
https://youtu.be/5AwSGyZRzYk
Categories:
tchaikovsky, birth, death, i am,
Form: Free verse
it seems thinking
about this time
of year is
Tchaikovsky
nut cracking but
not other
Russians
why fight
with a rat king
knowing exactly
his defeat and
demise why
not try a
satire
by Prokofiev or
better yet
direct and
to the point
atonal music
that any ahole...
nal
anybody
could play
in the most
uncompliacted
of ways know
ing no way
to play
but
playing
the triangle
exactly at
the wrong
time but
when
it was
meant
to be
Categories:
tchaikovsky, muse,
Form: I do not know?
A girl in the crowd takes a selfie.
Her tam o’shanter sparkles
because of the fireworks going off
in the background.
At the gates of Moscow
Tchaikovsky runs away
hands over his ears.
The girl with the cell
is as pretty as her friend beside her,
but her friend outshines the tam o’shanter
as if it were just an ordinary beret.
She has sapphires in her eyebrows.
Kids in earshot of adults
‘wow’ or mouth age-appropriate obscenities.
The limp body of a teenage messiah
is elbowed and pushed around by his disciples.
Several rows back, a woman is laughing
as she cranes her neck skyward.
From the chin up, she looks like Greta Garbo,
only she is short and fat.
Rockets fly like fan-dancing ostriches.
The truncated 1812 Overture burps to a close.
My lens can’t capture the woman
or the girl, or her friend
who now shines like a diamond.
I can’t fit all of this into 12 mega pixels.
The night stops throwing cannonballs
at 1 a.m.
Categories:
tchaikovsky, poetry,
Form: Blank verse
"CITY LIGHTS."
Tchaikovsky
plays into
the night
as the words
crash in
for this
poet and
the whore
sleeps after
the purple
devils
choke her
goodnight.
by: Chicano Eddie
6.28.19
Categories:
tchaikovsky, july, night, solitude, time,
Form: Free verse
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