Suffocating Poems | Examples

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The Desiccated King of the Catscombs

An ancient, desiccated 
pharaoh awakened within
the subterranean labyrinth 
of his limestone sepulcher,
Tattered, resin- soaked 
bandages unfurled like 
skeletal fingers from his
withered, emaciated frame.
A hollow, sarcophagus- born
shriek echoed through the 
claustrophobic, dust- choked 
corridors of the tomb.
Intruders trembled as the 
reanimated monarch 
exhaled a foul, millennial 
breath of decay.
The curse of the scarab-
engraved scarification 
manifested, binding the 
tomb- raiders in paralyzed 
terror.
His empty, shadowed 
sockets burned with a 
malevolent, incandescent 
hunger for vengeance. 
Grizzled, mummified hands
reached out to drag the 
trespassers into the stygian 
darkness.
The heavy stone sarcophagus 
lid slammed shut, sealing their
horrific, suffocating fate.
Now, fresh blood seeped
through the ancient linen,
feeding the eternal, undead 
king.
The labyrinth reclaimed its 
silence, guarding the pharaoh's 
newly fortified, immortal slumber.

Why Am I Suffocating?

Why is this happening to me?
What is this suffocation?
What is this feeling inside me?
Why can't I just be myself?
Why can't I be happy?
Why can't I enjoy myself?
Why do I always have to find reasons?
Why am I searching for them?
Why am I trying to satisfy myself with them?
Why do the things I enjoy become the sins of my life?
Why am I trying so hard to find reasons?
Why am I trying to become someone else?
Why do I feel like I am a sin?
Why do my deeds become sins?
Why do my thoughts become sins?
Why can't I be happy?

O existence, please tell me.
Please help me become myself.

A world without them

A world without them- BB Baloyi

How happy could we be,
Free from the suffocating grip of patriarchal might.
Living in harmony, with hearts full of light,
Full of life- sure we won't lose 
In the hands of our "protectors".

Living in a world we call home,
Where we are not objects but humans,
Where justice rolls like thunder, shaking the ground,
Where we're free, confident, and unafraid.

How happy could we be, as women, 
To live for our dreams, not just to survive?
To live in the present, not fantasize about tomorrow-
A future we may not see but only imagine.

To live in a world where oppressors are held accountable.
Where speaking isn't ridiculed
And our voices aren't just loud and clear but HEARD.

How happy could we be to exist, 
Not as enemies of men, but friends of life?
In a world where our happiness matters,
Regardless of the ovaries we're born with.

How happy could we be?
Not in imagination, but in this nation.
How happy could we be?...

Yet, we'll keep living, hoping 
For a better world for us.


Suffocating Act of Living


Breath becomes a fight,
World's weight presses on the chest,
Longing to break free.

©bfa051725

The Suffocating Pressure

Anxiety. 
A feeling that overwhelms your senses.
Blood pressure rising. Breathing becoming uncontrolled. You feel it in your chest, a pressure so heavy you can’t help but give in. A pressure that consumes your mind, thoughts,your body. A feeling that takes over your senses. You feel in within yourself. Tasting the bitterness on your tongue. Choking on the acid before you can speak. You see it when looking at others. Hear their whispers as you walk the halls. Can’t help feeling judged, outcasted, different. You try to ignore it but your eyes wander. Seeing their smirks, hearing their chuckles. You beg it to stop but it won’t; it can’t. Because Anxiety is a fatigue within one’s mind. A fatigue that won’t go away with a snap of one’s fingers. Anxiety consumes. Obtains everything in its path. And there’s no stopping it until you face it.

Suffocating Sunflowers

a river raging
suffocating sunflowers   
ripping up the roots


Drowning

Suffocating
By my own hands.
Falling apart,
I’m my own demise.

When last did I breathe?
Why can’t I now?

Falling off 
The edge of the cliff,
Failure to grasp
Onto something;
anything.

Beneath the water
I plunge,
Sinking down.
Should have learned
How to swim
When I had the chance.

Lungs filling up
With water,
Air stolen from me
By the thieves 
Of the sea.

Shackles weigh me down,
To the bottom
Of the ocean.
Not a breath 
Of air
To be found.

Body trembling
In the ties
Around me,
Muscles spasm, 
Tensing 
With fear.

The need to 
Get free,
To find an escape.
But I’m drowning
And shackled
With no one
To save me.

The Song of Strom

There's this little fragile
Betwixt the escort.
Trying to understand
Their psyche,
Their interest.
Are they really the armours
Or the aviary?
And will the dust devil arrive,
Rising from our own silhouette,
Compressing the cage of ribs
With the bludgeon?
Illusion of something erroneous,
Or may be some nave.
Perfect guard,
Guarding the heart,
The cascade of truth
For the so called panoply,
Squeezing the heart out.
Every piece of the jigsaw heart,
Turning out into butterflies
Dancing the dance of freedom.
Breath breath breath,
Screamed the chambers,
Shouts the guard.
Rushing the red ink
To the fragile little heart,
Pumps & paint the canvas,
Red with pure air.
They said it
to be the cage of protection,
And still the heart suffocated
Bearing all the badger in love.
So the kernel continued singing
The song of strom..
(12th April, 2023)

Premium Member Suffocating

free at last, a sigh escaped the lonely void of space that engulfed them




for the Power of Silence Poetry Contest
sponsored by JBC Brul
written on 10/5/22

Rest

I wish I could think
I wish I could cry
Not knowing if this is goodbye

The thoughts are racing
Dont know what I'm

Suffocating Love

I thank the stars for bringing me wishes. I say good morning to you in my evening. 
 I think about bad and you don't even think about leaving. I thank you for being beside me. Your Showing affection never neglecting my message. I'm holding your wishes so highly. Your essence your lessons established connections between us I think of the reasons I won you I'm reading the meaning I'm needing to trust you I'm seeing it eat us away and push us apart I know it won't beat us but see us attaching our hearts together forever in letters for better in person for better or worse in the end 
 Detecting the feelings I'm kneeling preparing those words nearing the surface emerging and working our way to the top for basic amazement creating a basis to change the way that we think about FACES

Premium Member Suffocating

I turned slowly to capture a glimpse of you
but  you disappeared and started  to fade 
Where are you?
My betrothed 
My one and only
I long for your touch
I am suffocating without you 
I can't breathe...no air...no air
My lungs are collapsing
Only you can save me  and become
what I need to survive this torment
Your love in turn will be my miracle



10-1-18
Alexis Y.

Suffocating

  My mind feels so confused by all these thoughts needing  all of them to end 
I never thought I could get this far 
But even my own life didn't throw me a curve ball
At this moment I need to get up and maybe go for a drive to get help sadly no car 
Moods don't know how to handle, don't want to either 
I hate these high and lows don't know witch is better 
Wish I could just shallow a pill, truly I just need to take a breather 
Next thing I know I was writing my letter 
As I write my throat is getting tighter ,seem i can't catch my breath 
Eyes filling up with tears as I grab my pillow and squeeze tight 
I can feel I'm only a hour away from my own death 
Maybe there a chance in the moment towards the end  I will put up a great fight

Suffocating Me

Being in love with you,
Took all of my energy,
And I felt trapped.
Trying to be perfect for you,
Always putting all my effort,
In our relationship,
And you never gave enough.
But for me,
It took everything out of me.
And drained my strength.
Now, I’m tired,
Of trying to love you,
And making you happy!
I’m not fighting for our love,
When you won’t put anything into it.
This was never real love,
This wouldn’t last forever.
There’s no point in trying,
Because this fantasy,
Was wasting my life away,
Your lies were killing me.
You were suffocating me…

Suffocating Thoughts

The lack of breath
Struggling
The touch of fingers
Choking

My bones are cold
Heart breaking

Where do we find the strength
To be strong
And to fight

Scars
Traumas
Fears
Living but not alive

How do we live
To ensure making the best of life?

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