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Suffocating

I turned slowly to capture a glimpse of you but you disappeared and started to fade Where are you? My betrothed My one and only I long for your touch I am suffocating without you I can't breathe...no air...no air My lungs are collapsing Only you can save me and become what I need to survive this torment Your love in turn will be my miracle 10-1-18 Alexis Y.

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Date: 10/2/2018 11:39:00 AM
A sad poem indeed, Alexis, I hope this is fiction as well. John
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Date: 10/1/2018 2:30:00 PM
Words of love and longing..an awesome convincing plea..well written, Alexis.
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:51:00 AM
When you meet your soulmate it can sure have that effect on you Alexis. Tom
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:10:00 AM
Hi Tom, Thanks for being the first to comment on my "sad" love poem. As always I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

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