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Suffocating

free at last, a sigh escaped the lonely void of space that engulfed them
for the Power of Silence Poetry Contest sponsored by JBC Brul written on 10/5/22

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Date: 10/15/2022 9:59:00 AM
I really like this one, Jeff. One of my favorites on that winner list.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/15/2022 10:08:00 AM
thanks, Andrea, these things seem so spontaneous sometimes... but, I guess with only 17 syllables, not supposed to take too long to put together...
Date: 10/5/2022 8:10:00 PM
This is an intriguing, poetic pause, Jeff. Nicely done! :)
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Date: 10/5/2022 6:37:00 PM
Delicate and pretty, reads like a sigh.
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Date: 10/5/2022 2:40:00 PM
That sigh won’t be heard in the soundless properties of space Jeff, but certainly can be felt in your touching Monoku, clever work, cheers David
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Date: 10/5/2022 1:48:00 PM
Wow!
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