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Suffocating


free at last, a sigh escaped the lonely void of space that engulfed them




for the Power of Silence Poetry Contest
sponsored by JBC Brul
written on 10/5/22

Copyright © Jeff Kyser | Year Posted 2022

lonelinessmonoku

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Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2022 at 9:59 AM

I really like this one, Jeff. One of my favorites on that winner list.

October 15, 2022 at 10:08 AM

thanks, Andrea, these things seem so spontaneous sometimes... but, I guess with only 17 syllables, not supposed to take too long to put together...

October 5, 2022 at 8:10 PM

This is an intriguing, poetic pause, Jeff. Nicely done! :)

Caren Krutsinger

October 5, 2022 at 6:37 PM

Delicate and pretty, reads like a sigh.

October 5, 2022 at 2:40 PM

That sigh won’t be heard in the soundless properties of space Jeff, but certainly can be felt in your touching Monoku, clever work, cheers David

October 5, 2022 at 1:48 PM

Wow!

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