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SMOKE OVER BORDER

ANGER SPEWING FORTH

CANADIAN SMOKE FROM UP NORTH

WE SHALL NO REMORTH


(thanks Sylvester thuffering thuckatash)

Premium Member Smoky Rivers

Smoky Rivers 
Beautiful places to visit 
A long way from home 
Mesmerizing by flowing current 
Turn the page , dive into the next chapter 
Meditate upon treaded waters 
Weather storms brewed is cultivating 
Your smiles are breath taking 
All take you with me 
Wherever we go freely 
Smoky rivers breathe transparent 
Emotions runneth torrent 
Just between the two of us 
Romance under the sun set 
Bridges lead us somewhere 
No one can ever replace you 
Calm rivers past the horizons flow 
With open arms 
The velvet sky carries us

Jukebox Requiem

ANGIE, that last slow dance in smoky haze—
you slipped UNDER MY THUMB like twilight’s ache.
The Rolling Stones crooned fate through tangled days;
I tried to PAINT IT BLACK for mercy’s sake.

But YOU CAN’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU WANT—truth stings—
just loaded TUMBLIN DICE in neon towns,
chasing HONKY TONK WOMEN on borrowed wings
while WILD HORSES dragged dreams to thorny grounds.

O RUBY TUESDAY, ghost in sequin sheen,
your laugh a roulette wheel’s bright, spinning sound.
The jukebox plays what might-have-been,
where every win was loss, and lost was found.

Stones still roll… but honey, in the end,
the house takes all. Even diamonds bend.


Premium Member Towards the Inevitable

Did you dance on 
the porch this morning
avoiding the invisible 
ice and the broken glass?
Could you see 
through the smoky hat’s brim?
In your mind you climb clouds 
like a resin rock wall
looking for a view 
of a place beyond perplexity
Fingers squeeze 
scraping the raincloud's face
Will you let their tears
surround your silhouetted trace
to wash your mind clear?

Smoky Sunset

Smoky sunset over the plain
Is it time for a verse?
Your breaths caress my neck like rain
Will our goodbye be terse?

We're in a pandemic
Words that were once magic
Useless to lives tragic

I lose a bet
Smoky sunset

September 15th, 2021
Quietus

Premium Member Smoky Bar

The smoke lingering 
laced in the sweat on my skin,
the bar walked me home.


Premium Member A Smoky Memory

Unable to sleep I remember-
My mind flashes back to many things;
Such wonderful gifts – our memory,
Salvation and life with all it brings

It is nighttime of long ago
Before electricity the coal oil lamp burns
Sitting up on the mantle that’s dressed
With a white embroidered skirt

Snuffed out when time for bed and sleep
The smoky scent of coal oil remains;
Soon sleep comes lasting to morning
When the scent of coal oil and coal awakens

The bedroom was in the living room
Nearer the coal burning stove and heat,
Soon the coldness of winter would come
As under the thick covers we slept

My mind remembers but I wonder
“Why is this so?” It was long ago;
Yet, it seems precious that old scene
My mind’s eye sees and recalls aglow

The irony is that the heat was temporary
While the night’s sleep was continuous
Now, the heat is automatic,
But the sleep is strenuous

I sit to write out my memory
A septuagenarian night gone by
With only a coal oil lamp flickering
In the recesses of my minds’ eye
                            -Evelyn Pearl

Premium Member Smoky Dreams 'Neath Rainbow Rings

Smoky Dreams ‘Neath Rainbow Rings

Oh, you are so cool,
opaquely bright,
clear prism shattering
true light

				And you
				red glowing sweat
				condensed containment
				flaming tears

Draw near to me
let me consume
your crystallized
angelic plume

				I dare not
				lest I extinguish
				the molten core
				of lava’s anguish

You fall into
a silent night

				You rise upon
				a roaring light

our lives
		but aimless
				wanderings

smoky dreams
			‘neath
					rainbow rings



©12/30/2017

submitted to STUNNED - Poetry Contest

Smoky Moosh

 I lived away in the Aussie bush, 
grey Cat escaped a smoky moosh {face},
 he was eating Brown Snakes,
 brought Rabbit for his Doggie mates,
 a smoky kind of Puss.

Puddys can be fierce hunters,
 they usually jump 3 feet in the air,
 when a brownie strikes at em. 
Quick or dead?

Don

Native of Smoky Mountains

The moon glows with its silver blue light
The light is like pearl shaped tears
In the curtain of night
Soul yearns with wild desire

In the mountains dew arises to the sky
It creates a pale mist
Beautiful but eerie is this scene
Almost supernatural is shadow ancient trees will cast

The reflected in the sun pale mist looks sublime
The ocean of trees rather than green looks blue
One can almost see the passage of time
Young Cherokee warrior stands in the light of full moon

His soul enters the sky like a dream
The howling of a wolf can be heard for miles
In the light of Pleiades young warriors’ essence will swim
Great Spirit resonates through him with divine echoes

Wolf is reflection
The unbound imagination
All levels of existence and beyond are creation
Otherworldly nirvana is mathematical vision of perfection

Premium Member All Black and Smoky

Long-winged smoky wisps curling up
Now drifting like wind driven clouds
Then swirling like cobwebby curtains
Screaming sirens outside the house
Circling about darkening the hamlets

Outside the room shrieking of sirens
Windows seemed miles away
As he came near the window 
All he could see was acrid smoke
Devilish red flames burning his skin.

Pitter patter of footsteps coming up
Making his hairs stand up all around
The knot of fear grew bigger & bigger
The remains were all black and smoky.

                     ++++++

=======================
Date 12-10-13
5th place win
Dr. Ram Mehta       
Country Music
Contest: Groove it by nette onclaud

Premium Member Smoky Beach Walk

A small wave beach,
Tiny shells of ages past,
Washing time again
To dry next day.

Fairy fires glow
In concrete rings,
A driftwood sizzles
As it sends smoke out.

An ants cliff rises
Above clam mounds
That bubble under water
As the lapping grows more frequent.
Then still rippling notes
Orchestrate the winds.

Smoky Eyes

It's only the time,
That I come to mind,
When smoke gets in your eyes.

Then you come my way,
Taking time from your day,
To visit, and make someone smile.

When I look for you,
All I have to do,
Is look for that smoky design.

You probably don't know,
How my trust for you grows,
Everytime that your glance catches mine.

And when we're in the midst,
Kicking back just like this,
My everything feels resolved.

Although sometimes I do get blue,
Thinking I can't have you,
I'm still happy that you're in my life.

It is no surprise,
How I breakdown inside,
Everytime I can't see past the smoke.

So, I'll stay content,
With all I can get,
With one glance from your smoky brown eyes.

END

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