Short Commented Poems

R-ight
O-r
W-rong,
E-very
N-ew
A-rticle

A-bout
L-ove
A-lways
M-oves
O-nline
N-etizens

©bfa043025
Monocrostic (Birthday of Rowena A. Alamon)...

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I am possessor
of some poetic grace!
Sentenced to have some happiness
in commented praise..
But not having it in my pocket
no pecuniary pleasure...
This is the poet's life!...

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Hinted Trump Is Demented

As usual what many  may have hinted,
They all did determine he is demented;
Probable cause;
His small paws,
And on being crazy others commented.

Jim Horn...

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My sister got married in white
Gran commented, “That isn’t right -
You are no virgin bride
That’s YOUR son by your side
You should have kept your legs shut tight!”
...

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A Vibrant, Voracious Viewer

Remember being vibrant, voracious viewer,
Who of people and countries took a tour;
Many commented,
And even hinted,
Trump exceeded what they could endure.

Jim Horn...

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The little things you say
Poets who commented today
Thank you for making me happy
Keep up the good work
Your poems are hardly scrappy
I really like them a lot
I hope they get listed as hot, hot, hot!...

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I would like to thank everyone who has commented and gave me positive feedback. sometimes I get to depressed to even write but then i see that people actually like what i write. Thanks for the motivation.
- Jordan...

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We all commented that the turkey was grand,
somebody saying the gravy was too bland,
we had said Grace,
stuffed our faces,
thank God for pants with elastic waist bands!






11-24-16
HAPPY THANKSGIVING EVERYONE!!!...

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Her movements had him in a trance.
She commented after a glance,
“Since you’ve no resistance;
Maintain social distance
And please keep that thing in your pants!"

(See Daisy Ward’s SIZE limerick for the genesis of this one)...

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“THE ARROW”


this one gave me shit.
that one went to sleep early.
this one asked how I was doing.
that one approved.
this one commented.
that one agreed with me.

love is a dagger 
and
Juliet agrees.


By: Chicano Eddie
10-12-2016...

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Thanks to poetry soup staff and P.D.  for the addition to the number of views of a poem 
added...I had no idea that I had as many views of my work...I thought that most people 
commented at least something if they went to the trouble to read it or look at it...

Sara...

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              hot cup of coffee
              compassionate poet friends
              that's where life begins


               September 27, 2020
                    10:02pm PST



**Tribute to all who have commented and have blossomed into true friends**


...

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These are wha\t you need
In order to begin to write
A dictionary and on rhymes
Then a thesaurus is needed
All these items to write poetry


Then your computer is next
To be able to type your poetry
Then to send your poetry
On the area to be submitted
Then to be commented by poets...

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Hi everyone. Just a note to say I have not commented on your poems because of s set back and  in the hospital.  I thought I would be around on the weekend...but still here.  It will be periodic entries or comments from me for now. But I look forward to my full return. I hope all is well. Thank you

Heidi...

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Stalwart owl on the trunk of a tree
Left behind by a busy family
They forgot a few things on moving day
I scooped him up, and took him far away

Serious owl on my back porch now
Being commented on. Some say “Wow!”
I am so glad he is mine; we are together, we two.
I am excited to say I have named him Who....

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P oems are always read and commented
O n even if I sometimes don't understand the meaning
E veryone deserves a point of view
M ine may be short and sweet or long winded
S howing you I took the time.

R eading does take some time
E veryone  likes your comments
A lways make a comments we
D esire an opinion of any sort....

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Spring is...winter's dream to become... summer. 






© Demetrios Trifiatis
      23 March 2023 

* As always on such an occasion, I would like to share the honor of POTW with all of you, my dear friends who have visited and commented on my poem. I also thank the officials of PoetrySoup for the honor bestowed. Be blessed....

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The wall photo on your FB page
I liked and made a comment,
Which I know you cannot hate
a photo taken in a park that's snowy
in the land where you lived called Turkey.

And commented with a happy smile,

-"all alone in a bench waiting for HER 
to sit by HIS side for always!"..

You liked it too, I guess I made you smile.
..xoxo...

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Hi, my name is Kechi.
Since I joined Poetry Soup
I’ve had new hopes in writing
and I’ve been having so much fun.
You are so wonderful
and warm in disposition.
Hey, how has it been writing
poems and seeing how they’re 
viewed and commented on?
I’d love us to make the
world a better place
through poetry.
What do you think?  



	
Kechi Odibi...

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Boy I just felt like Julia Roberts 
in the movie Notting Hill

Writing platonically in hope to may 
i be presumptuous a pen poet girl

And she commented back

You enrich me

And I haven't stopped smiling
totally and utterly enriched since

So ever so thanking you for your
kindest of remarks B.F

Your's Sincerely

Cheshire Cat...

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Cherish
Oh I commented witness to behold 
you have a beautiful soul
All abundance passionate Flame
You are always known by such this name
Having everything to gain
Flourishing Wildflower
Tempest of Desire
Celestial powers
Awesome to behold
You have a beautiful soul

3/13/20
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr...

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They commented me
So many times
How well I behaved, before they eyes

But at that moment of time 
I didn’t say either a word or two 
Nor I could reply

Instead, I looked at the sky 
And said “O Sky, bring to them this glory---
That no one is ever forgotten 

And now 
And then, they are still 
...in my heart and mind, alive and well-cherished!”...

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While on vacation, I decided it was time to take a break from Poetry Soup, after seven years of being here. I do not know if, or when I will return. In the meantime, I want to thank everyone who visited my poems and commented. I really appreciate you-- being there for me. So many top poets and friends will dwell in my memories. Your visits and comments meant a lot....

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NOWADAYS
Poetry
never was
of the masses,
today
mass media...

   INTERNET
Poetry
never crossed
easily
borders...
today, browse
Cosmos...

   TO VIEW
Poetry
never was
nor will it be
so read...
but ...
visualized...

   FLASH
Poetry
never been so
commented...read
dynamics...

   POST OFFICE
Poetry
never attended
the post office,
but today
is posted...

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I wish to express my gratitude to all those who commented on my short  poem  entitled:On Abortion. Your comments are much appreciated whether in agreement or not. P.S. The comment/reply page isn't  functioning for me at present , so I'm unable to reply to individual comments in the usual manner. I've reported this to poetrysoup but as of yet  it  hasn't been rectified.  Thanks once again.   W.A. CHOLT....

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