Saturnian Poems | Examples


Premium MemberThe Breath Of Summer: Saturnian I

A stretched gloaming tethers creation in a 
daystar's wake ... askew parts The Old Guitarist 
ebbing lambent stars strung to a yarn of spring ...

'Tis the volley of calendrical crasis 
poised to a youthful Einstein that subtracts from 
the sum and substance whence summer makes a splash ...

The advent of an enchanting star dulls a
chant that the Khanate only stains upon its 
Golden Horde smolders beneath befriending clouds ...

A whiff that slights Aurelius' bearings yet
still trifles a chalk absence to the presence
of cheese that embellishes the languid tracing ...

The shallow space of bards decreed a crowning 
flock of teary favoring san tissues of
lissome verdancy choral ode vibrant charms ...

Worshipped effervescent microscopic dew 
bringing into being just one bell prayers
bearing fruits of promise in globule water ...

Petrichor emanates to a hoverance 
wisp claim as wandering brevity stands still 
amidst a sonder of souls ventured threshold ...

Gold beams glimpsed a bevy coup of a vast crest
as the dripping stalled in evaporating
stares chase a clinked rainbow flaunts with ... creation.
Categories: saturnian, analogy, extended metaphor,
Form: Personification

Premium MemberAn Existential Curiosity, Night Fantasy

The hour of night unfolds before me like an origami shadow 
and suddenly the stars outsource their light, the moon her glow 
That dark and endless sky before my eyes is holding me in silence 
sheltering my quietude with queried thought I ask, who are you ?
Dark shadows moving with paranormal photo lights 
every planet in the sky including Mars ignites 
Saturnian golden shades of amber filament bright 
the hour of night unfolds giving me wish bullions of gold. 
Far beyond reach the innocent child of wander that I once was 
has left her stationary world of earth, her Alcatraz 
that jet black place of deep that knows no boundaries calls 
to me, you are who you say you are ! 
Luminescent angels of beauty and grace they hold the golden cup 
belonging to Pharaohs of yesterday, Divine intermediaries 
who brush through my soul like the breeze, airflow from heaven
an existential curiosity arises once more,  where are we ?

December 29, 2022
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Categories: saturnian, appreciation, beauty, fantasy,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberSaturnian Piscean Finding Peace In Pieces

Think I had long yet to try something new,
So puzzles, jazz, and blues will have to do.
I go about sorting pieces by each of their own hue,
In hopes of solving before I tend to what’s due.
Categories: saturnian, spiritual,
Form: Quatrain

Premium MemberLil Nova

As quasar mixes the starry dust,
a newly formed planet en route’s a must;
new universes revealed beyond black holes
captivating stories are yet to be told.

Tiny newborn sails saturnian seas,
a Venus flyby in Saggittarius is a breeze;
absolute magnitude in glimmer sails on by,
soon new space he will occupy.

Whoops!  Now dodging meteor shower,
a bruise or two won’t slow his power;
he’s on his very own spiritual quest
for new horizons where he will rest.

He’ll take his place amid the fold,
his travel stories yet to be told;
to tinier planets that he will meet,
he’ll even brighten eclipsing binary.

He’ll take his place in man’s Ephemerides,
oh the astrologers he’ll guide with ease;
to alter man’s future by their birth stars,
providing them with fascinating memoirs.

No planet in any galaxy,
will mess with this star’s alchemy.
He’s on a mission, this tiny young one,
his planetary cycle for millennia will run.

When you spy him there in your glass eye,
be sure to shout, “Hello, Goodbye”,
as he races across your galaxy,
you’ll marvel at his pageantry.
Categories: saturnian, appreciation, poems, poetry, space,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberJupiters Secrets

On the edge of infinity’s threshold,
I stand in observance of Jupiter.
This swirling planet, 
from the moon speaks to me
through centuries of travel;
light-years of secrets
yet to be unlocked.

From the present to the future,
visions unfold in my third eye,
as if the planet were a soul.

I stand here on the moon, waiting
observing and shadows of previously
inhabited planets in unknown galaxies,
fill my mind.

I am Argonian, Saturnian, Plutonian,
Zardonian...my past lives meet
as one in this moment.

Clearly, planets are immortal souls.
Categories: saturnian, people, planet, poems, space,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberSaturnian Dreams

On Saturnian nights I rise; 
homing in on apogee and perigee, 
my soul rises.

Free-floating energy mingles, 
with crackling static; 
my body feels nothing and I feel no body.

Crystalline ice in hydrogen milk,
can float my soul forever; 
safe in its womb, am I.

A celestial merry-go-round; 
Saturnian rings spin Saturnian dreams; 
they lull me to sleep.

On Saturnian nights; 
etheric body in flight greets many souls; 
who’ve gone before.

A classroom of grace, it is; 
a spiritual recharging station;
Saturnian nights invigorate all of my senses.

A soul in flight on a Saturnian night; 
hears symphonic lessons, 
in staccato verbiage.

I awaken from Saturnian dreams; 
a new spirit in an old body; 
with wider zest for life.  
The Saturnian centrifuge,
 brings much clarity.
Categories: saturnian, poems, poetry, space, star,
Form: Prose

Surfing On Saturn's Rings

Surfing On Saturn’s Rings
Floating on the outer Phobe Ring with Saturn rising
Out of reach at supersonic speed, above ecliptic's cryptic spokes 
Ready to fill the cavities of meteoroids for surfing at approach
Jet wave propulsion bounding from ring to ring upon my star board
Surfing alien surfaces, curling, singing through the systems swirling wheel
Sailing over micro rocks with glowing tiny asteroids of snow and ice
Into star dust clouds with a myriad of oddly shaped blue spikes
Down between the “D” and “A” Rings where moon particles converge
Pulled from left to right at cosmic speeds to reach its soul
With gravity as the key to force me through
Satellites are stretching, emerging on the deep
My equipment for this system is from Mars
Imports from the far off planet
Made from silver, titanium, and molten crystal beads
A surf board to the stars is starving for a start on micro parts
I come up for air above the “G” Ring, to see the giants staring there
Saturn with Titan by its side, filling in the foreign sky
Weighing down on me with ammonia oceans smiles at my size
On the horizon of Saturnian orchestrated rings
Meteoroids spin, singing on the beams of light
Categories: saturnian, adventure, beautiful, freedom, imagination,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberSenryu About Saturn

Saturnian dreams;
I feel its heartbeat,
While riding her rings.
Categories: saturnian, poems, poetry, space,
Form: Senryu

Premium MemberA Cosmic Vacation

Roller skating on Saturnian rings;
molecular electric friction, 
set my soul on fire.

Undulating gasses danced with icy sparks; 
a cosmic symphony rang upon the ether's; 
the breath of universes was colliding.

Music unheard by physical ears is perhaps, 
the sweetest of all; the heartbeat of God…pounding…pounding…boom…boom…

I like the hot spring soaks on Venus during cosmic vacations; their astral-pore cleansing,
is relief for the pain of mortality.
Categories: saturnian, poems, poetry, space, stars,
Form: Free verse
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