Senryu About Saturn

Saturnian dreams;
I feel its heartbeat,
While riding her rings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:04 AM
One word - magnificent! I love it!!!!!
Kiser Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 4:11 PM
Wow, thanks and I'm glad you love it.
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 7:00 PM
gotta fave it. BTW, your avatar is my precious cat's face that died of cancer after 18 wonderful years we spent with her.
Kiser Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Thanks. Mind passed in 2012 of congestive heart failure; something common to manx's and calico's. It seems as though she's been gone forever. We do miss her warmth.
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:59 PM
wow, this is amazing!!!!
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