The Breath Of Summer: Saturnian I

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Poetic Form: Personification/Saturnian

Inspired: 2024 August 07

Image: The Old Guitarist painted by Pablo Picasso druing his Blue Period

Saturnian: Old Versification form, quantitative and accentual.

LEGEND

U = Light, - = Heavy, UUt = Light/Heavy, || = Caesura, X = Verse End

EX:

A stretched gloaming tethers creation in a

U - - U || U UUt U U - || U - X

daystar's wake ... askew parts The Old Guitarist

U U - || U UUt - || U U U U - X

ebbing lambent stars strung to a yarn of spring ...

U - - U - || UUt - U || UUt - - X

The Old Guitarist Painting By Pablo Picasso 13 - Full Image

A stretched gloaming tethers creation in a 
daystar's wake ... askew parts The Old Guitarist 
ebbing lambent stars strung to a yarn of spring ...

'Tis the volley of calendrical crasis 
poised to a youthful Einstein that subtracts from 
the sum and substance whence summer makes a splash ...

The advent of an enchanting star dulls a
chant that the Khanate only stains upon its 
Golden Horde smolders beneath befriending clouds ...

A whiff that slights Aurelius' bearings yet
still trifles a chalk absence to the presence
of cheese that embellishes the languid tracing ...

The shallow space of bards decreed a crowning 
flock of teary favoring san tissues of
lissome verdancy choral ode vibrant charms ...

Worshipped effervescent microscopic dew 
bringing into being just one bell prayers
bearing fruits of promise in globule water ...

Petrichor emanates to a hoverance 
wisp claim as wandering brevity stands still 
amidst a sonder of souls ventured threshold ...

Gold beams glimpsed a bevy coup of a vast crest
as the dripping stalled in evaporating
stares chase a clinked rainbow flaunts with ... creation.

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