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Rock Bottom

You know you've hit rock bottom for sure
when you find your track
in a used record store
under a stack at the very back
of the ten pee CD rack
(does anyone buy them anymore?)
and you know you've hit the all-time low
it's a sure bet
when you don't see your song
in any list at all
on the worldwide internet
rock bottom don't get lower than that
from up to down at the drop of a hat
better to be a has-been a player in the game
than a never-was because
they may have been the best of times
and tho' memories will last
I won't spend the rest of my days
living in the past
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Road To Rock Bottom

Rock bottom is a dark lonely place 
One people will pray to never see
It's overflowing with the lowest lows 
Reminding you of a life full of misery 

The select few who are exiled there 
Forced to travel God's forsaken road alone 
With potholes of pain and lanes of loneliness 
This road is where desperation is grown

By the time you notice it will be too late 
You will be past any chance of any return 
Down this road to a hell on earth 
To a pain far worse then a fires burn

Your friends you had will shun you
And worse yet their family will too
Leaving you broken, lonely and scared 
Because of the things you chose to do

In the weakest moment of your life 
When you need a shoulder to lean on 
The pain will overcome you when notice 
Everyone that you love is now gone 

Once this realization finally sinks in for you 
You'll see you have reached your destination 
There's a chance you get home safely 
Or you will give into deaths determination
Form: Rhyme


No Response

I am at rock bottom so I ask.. 
Are you real? Do you hear me? 

I realize suffering is necessary 
So we may turn to you..
Are you real? Do you hear me? 

I am at rock bottom 
The only place to look is up..
Are you real? Do you hear me? 

I have waited so long in these depths 
Any response negative or positive I will believe..
Are you real? Do you hear me?

Rock Bottom

Best not to be loved widely but deeply.
Not by peers but within oneself.
Love so deeply, down to the warmest part of the Earth’s core.
Rock Bottom.
Pressure so strong, darkness penetrates.
Breaks through the chest, sharpest pain.
Love so deeply, break through the chains.
Climb the stairs from floor to ceiling.
Seconds feel like hours.
Hours feel like days.
But to love so deeply, is to charge through that pain
from the Earth’s core to stars outside the atmosphere
from warm to cold
now from deep to wide
from Rock Bottom to whatever happiness looks like.

Premium Member Rock Bottom

this poem’s so ultra deep ~ it leaves no room for a name underneath 
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Form: Monoku


Premium Member Woke

day one
you woke 
everything you thought you were before you closed your eyes and inhaled the dreams of your twisted line is discovered to be a lie
a falsehood, trickery, fabrication
disappearing behind a cloak of aberration
crawling on hands stuck to scarred wrists
pilfering life from dumpsters of deception
avoiding the glares of incandescent veneer
snubbing red streaked orbs within the mirror

you woke
purity of thoughts
not meant to be shifted, changed, sliced, diced, redefined, realigned
altered by a syringe of soiled crystalline
caressing an ignorant conscious 
boasting to change God’s perfect design
 
you woke
celestial spirits scraping scales from your denying eyes
looking down to discover god created you
to look up knowing
One day, you woke
sober

Premium Member Scattered Light

For days without end my light was dim
Left battle-scarred by war within 
Left heavy by this heart of sin
Left broken by the days begin 

Though the warmth of sun kissed my face 
I chose to wander in the darkest space 
Watching the world in a flurried pace
As what was left all fell from grace 

Held between palm and hand
I watch it fall like grains of sand
One by one without command 
Until the dark in me could understand 

The pieces left could scatter light 
From every angle of every plight 
No matter how the dark would fight 
Each piece reflected hues so bright 

I gathered all the shards to see
The beauty made from my debris
Yes the dark still stirs and calls to me
But the light within shall break me free
Form: Rhyme

Rock Bottom Rockstar

Rock bottom rockstar 
you know who you are
Too many pills and alcohol
Instagram streamed it all

New tour bus and VIP’s
first rehab in Tennessee 
Fell off stage when you overdosed
hit your head was comatose

Biggest fan saved your life
praise the Lord he brought his wife 
Stopped the bleeding just in time
at the House Of Blues in Anaheim 

Consider this your wake-up call
give thanks no fatal fall 
Why do you think HE sent her in
you rose up once and will again 

Welcome back to reality
life is short no guarantees 
Learn your lesson 
and count your blessings 

Go tell your story in HIS name
forget about all the fame
Rock bottom rockstar 
You are gonna go far
Form: Rhyme

When I Hit Rock Bottom

when i hit rock bottom

when i hit rock bottom..

i was exalted

i didn't know what to expect

i was depressed and dejected

 

how could i possibly..

how unjust it is...

but i think i should accept it

hitting rock bottom

 

maybe in the near future

this rock bottom where i am now

will be the foundation

of the better me

and a better life for my family..

Rock Bottom Again

And once again it happened,
I took to long to make a choice,
Now I am back down on rock bottom,
I should've listened to that little voice,
The one that kept telling to let go,
Change yourself before it's to late,
But since I have such a hard head,
I've reached bottom on this date,  
Don't feel sorry for me though, 
For now I think its for the best,
I need to get my mind back straight,
And slowly figure out the rest,
I know it's my fault for being here,
I should've changed before I fell,
Since I didn't do that once again,
I've brought myself closer to hell,
I'm not going to lie to you but,
I feel I really need to stay this low,
So when it's time for me to get up,
I'll know exactly which way to go!!

7/7/19
Form: Couplet

Rock Bottom

Stand and flight, or fly and flee,
The two choices we face.

Stand unmoving,
Or fly above.

Trampled by the world,
Torn to pieces by your “friends,”
Your family.
Facing it in solitude,
Going through it alone.

Take to the sky,
Avoiding the stones and javelins.
Finding the strength to continue,
To survive.
But a stone clips your wing,
The exhaustion takes over,
And you’re left free falling
Falling back to Earth,
To hit rock bottom.

The end of the world,
Cold and alone.

The top so far away,
With no strength left to fly,
I lie in the dark and die.

Premium Member At the Bottoms Dropped Out

At the Bottom's dropped out.

I'll write to you 
the end of the story.
The only one i know.
Sundown on a field of dandelions.
No step closer to rapture,
I smiled with no hurry 
when i found myself here,
at the bottom's dropped out.              

It never rests.
not even when it's over.
Like stale conversation 
without bread nor water.
A river martin's graceful flight.
My smile came easy
when i saw you here
at the bottom's dropped out.

Lampblack spills on a white canvas,
like a clock running out of time.
The mood a smile brings on,
it never has to die.
Dustup Old Frisian theological nonsense.
The clouds burst with meaning
at the bottom's dropped out.

Like a sun spot on the Sun
Life stands still
as seasons change.
It’s not worth winding up the long rewind
of a slippery slope 
towards yesterday’s face another time.
Let's have last seen each other here
At the bottom's dropped out.

Rock Bottom

Remembering where you are and have been
Others may not see when you are struggling
Crying in the dark laughing in the morning
Knowing the strength that it has taking you

But there were times when you lost strength
Others tried to help you for you to shun them
The struggle you were facing were your alone
Those mountains were not insurmountable
Once you saw that you could start climbing
Made you muster up a life renewing strength
Form: Acrostic

Rock Bottom

I was told rock bottom is a sad place,
a land full of misery and disgrace.

Rock bottom wasn’t bad at all,
I had quite a joyful ride taking that fall.

Lessons were learned in that enchanting city.
It taught me how to be grateful and not to wallow in self pity. 

Everyone  should visit Rock Bottom  once or twice.
It is a great reminder of how amazing it is to be alive.

The most dazzling sight can be found at Rock Bottom’s pit,
just tilt your head up and you can see it.
A beacon of light that will sting your eyes,
rainbows that magically crystallize.

So, If you ever find yourself hitting Rock Bottom,
take heed that this is not an unfix-able problem.
Do not let yourself become distraught,
observe the lessons that will be taught.
Learn from them and let yourself grow,
to that beacon of light with the magnetic glow.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Rock Bottom

A heavy wheel turned on his life
when he spied on his errant wife.
Their marriage hit the bottom rocky
where he poured bottles of whiskey.

July 17, 2018
Form: Epigram

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