Rock Bottom

this poem’s so ultra deep ~ it leaves no room for a name underneath ———————————————————————————————————

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 5/1/2022 10:09:00 AM

Haha very clever indeed. For a second there I thought where the heck is the poem? Thanks for the chuckle :-D You got me! Cheers Anne :-)

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/1/2022 10:54:00 AM

Don’t mind me Anne, I tend to pluck these ideas out of the ether, perhaps the quanta itself, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 4/19/2022 12:33:00 PM

Sublime Clever But most of all ORIGINAL Absolutely love it

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/20/2022 3:36:00 PM

Inspiration is the only true gift necessary and required Thanking you Sir

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/19/2022 1:54:00 PM

I think you wrote one before about how low things can get, and is there actually a bottom, perhaps I had it in mind writing this one, cheers David

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/16/2022 8:08:00 AM

Wow! Beautiful!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/16/2022 8:24:00 AM

Where it came from or went to, I’ll never know! Thank you Chris, cheers David