Rock Bottom

I was told rock bottom is a sad place,
a land full of misery and disgrace.

Rock bottom wasn’t bad at all,
I had quite a joyful ride taking that fall.

Lessons were learned in that enchanting city.
It taught me how to be grateful and not to wallow in self pity. 

Everyone  should visit Rock Bottom  once or twice.
It is a great reminder of how amazing it is to be alive.

The most dazzling sight can be found at Rock Bottom’s pit,
just tilt your head up and you can see it.
A beacon of light that will sting your eyes,
rainbows that magically crystallize.

So, If you ever find yourself hitting Rock Bottom,
take heed that this is not an unfix-able problem.
Do not let yourself become distraught,
observe the lessons that will be taught.
Learn from them and let yourself grow,
to that beacon of light with the magnetic glow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gondolf Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 6:41 AM
I like the positive attitude on the downside of life. Well penned, Rebecca. John
Ann Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thank you so much for the Kind words John!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 12:02 AM
This went straight to my FAV list, because I think the optimism that beams out of this poem is something I would like to be able to find and read over and over when I want to read something that makes a whole lot of sense and makes me feel good. So Thank you Rebecca.
Ann Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Karen, i always try to look for the positive in any situation. It is the key to being a happy human being.
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