Remark Poems | Examples

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Premium Member A Remark On A Truism

“We have the politicians we deserve.”
What kind of “we” I’m synched with on brainwaves?
How many “we” are surreptitiously reserved 
For the reunion, in whose family grave?
It’s plain to see what politicians are about
They’re ubiquitous like weather, that brings weeds
To every garden, and they can’t be weeded out
But it’s not good to blame me for their deeds
So I don’t need my politicians and their mob
But surely they deserve people like me
And that’s the awful part of their job
They know it, and demand a larger fee..

Premium Member Along the Way

The raindrops fall into the paper cup of tea
The teabag shrinks as if it could be my remark
Unlatch the green door to the childlike mystery
It’s possible again to enter that old park 
The busts and statues of the gods and greats
And shaded benches in the niches of the trees
There in the memory another alley waits
I haven’t walked on it to see where to it leads
Oh no! Those wobbly slabs I’ve walked before
The seagulls cry, the wind blows up the sand
Then comes the sound of the muted piano chords
I’ve no idea why I hear this again.

Premium Member Words Fail

Words fail to match the beauty of the park
The magic stillness of the early autumn day
Leaves fall across your smile, completing your remark
Leaving me speechless in this colourful decay 
The trees look tall in their patchy outfit 
Lone robin sings somewhere in the height
So shall we go, before the dusk commits
Its usual crime, obscuring the daylight.


Premium Member Snarky Remark

forget everything you know – that shouldn’t take too long

Remark of Good Idea

M-eaning 
I-n 
N-ame 
E-ndorses 
R-emembrance 
V-irtuously 
A-pplying 

G-ood 
I-dea's 
R-emark 
O-r 
N-ote 

Topic: Birthday of Minerva S. Giron (March 06) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Brilliant Remark

J-oyful
E-xpression’s
S-entence
U-ses
S-ensible

S-tatement
O-f
B-rilliant
R-emark
E-mploying
V-irtuous
I-dea’s
L-ikable
L-etter
A-nnually

Topic: Birthday of Jesus D. Sobrevilla (January 09)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic


About Cheerful Remark

M-y 
A-nnual 
R-emembrance 
I-mply 
T-he 
E-ssential 
S-entence 

D-eploying 
E-uphoric 
L-ines 
A-bout 

C-heerful 
R-emark 
U-nder 
Z-estfulness 

Topic: Birthday of Marites F. Dela Cruz (January 08) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Remark of Author

R-emark
O-f
A-uthor
N-icely

Y-ields
E-xpression's
Y-early
E-xciting

P-oem
E-mploying
R-emarkable
L-etter's
A-crosric
S-alutations

Topic: Birthday of Roan Yeye Perlas (April 29) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Birthday Remark

D-ivine
A-uthor
I-mplements
S-imple
Y-early

R-egards
O-r
B-irthday
R-emark
E-mploying
G-reetings
A-t
D-elightful
O-ccasion

Topic: Birthday of Daisy Robregado (November 25) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Remark and Like

F-abulous
R-eader
E-njoys
D-elightful

P-oem
U-sing
R-emark
A-nd
L-ike

Topic: Birthday of Fred Pural (December 31) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Brains and Righteous Remark

R-eader
O-f
X factor
A-bout
N-ice
N-ame's
E-xcellent

D-esign
U-ses
B-rains
A-nd
R-ighteous
R-emark
Y-early

Topic: Birthday of poetess Roxanne Dubarry (October 04) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Most Amazing Remark

M-ost
A-mazing
R-emark
I-s
S-aid

A-s
N-ote
U-ses
L-esson
A-bout
O-bedience

Topic: Birthday of Maris E. Anulao (March 11) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Constructive Remark

C-onstructive
R-emark
I-s
S-howed
T-o 
Y-our

M-ind
A-s
N-ice
C-omment
I-s
O-btained

Topic: Birthday of Cristy Mancio (May 28) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Visualize,Scrutnize and Remark

Sitting on the chair ,combing her lustrous hair
awaiting for her love to caress her,
lost in the thoughts of their togetherness.
But suddenly the room turned dark,
 she heard footsteps and through the
light from the windows she could see a shadow
she jumped on to her chair with fast pounding heart
and felt a tap on the shoulder,freaked out
looked at the person--
it was her BOSS who woke her up from her fantasy,
looking furious ,asked her to finish the project.


PS:
Written for the contest:Visualize,scrutinize and Remark
 Written Date:11-3-2016

Premium Member Lost Hope Visualize, Scrutinize,Remark Contest

What rising doubt does cast such fear
     That wills I dare not sink to feel,
     But take to heights above harms reach
     From that first step to tempt my fate.
     I cling to pain, this bond so real, that knows,
     This is my next best chance to fail.

     03/05/2016

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