Visualize,Scrutnize and Remark

Sitting on the chair ,combing her lustrous hair
awaiting for her love to caress her,
lost in the thoughts of their togetherness.
But suddenly the room turned dark,
 she heard footsteps and through the
light from the windows she could see a shadow
she jumped on to her chair with fast pounding heart
and felt a tap on the shoulder,freaked out
looked at the person--
it was her BOSS who woke her up from her fantasy,
looking furious ,asked her to finish the project.


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Written for the contest:Visualize,scrutinize and Remark
 Written Date:11-3-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Your poem has good structure, with a natural cadence that rewards the reader with a smile at the end. Well done, Emile.
Shines Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 11:53 AM
Thank you so much for your comment and have great day :)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Wow super and suspenseful. Imaginative. This boss mus be real demanding. Thumbs up. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest
Shines Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thank you so much :)Have a great day:)
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