Redondilla Poems | Examples


Premium MemberWith the Lord - the Redondilla Style

~ With The Lord ~
 ( Redondilla )


 With the Lord each day can stand tall
 The Lord is always our  best  friend
 Broken hearts and lives He can mend
 He can help us  each day in  all

 With the Lord by side can pass test -
 He  teaches  about  love  I  know
 Under His loving guidance can grow
 Gods greatest of all! He's the best!


 Dorian Petersen Potter
 aka ladydp2000
 copyright@2017



December.04.2017



So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love.
 1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV)

-“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life.
 John 3:16 (NIV)

 - Rejoice in hope, be patient in tribulation, be constant in prayer
 Romans 12: 12 ( NIV )

-The Lord will fight for you, and you have only to be silent.”
Exodus 14: 13 ( NIV )





 -What good will it be for someone to gain the whole world, yet forfeit their soul? 
 Matthew 16:26 (NIV)




“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain 




~ Author's Notes:

 The ' Redondilla ' is a Spanish poetry form or style.
Categories: redondilla, christian, faith, hope, love,
Form: Free verse

Morning - Redondilla

The morning sky fills heaven azure bright,
and shining eye doth peek to show from height.
Earth's hymnal's opened wide for choral strains,
creation's chorus trolls the sweet refrains.

Birds warble tunes unscored from post and trees,
with early flights of droning busy bees.
The cattle lowing softly need their feed,
and bleating lambs with shepherd cry for need.

It's day's first light and colors wake anew,
with golden beams the palette's plain to view.
Of every shade this sphere becomes aglow,
for "I Am" paints his scenes including bow.

Dew glistens crystallike on flower's face,
embroiders greens and leaves with sparkling lace.
The white capped mountains rise in purple row,
their slopes alive where pine and aspen grow.

Our morning's fine cantata seems complete,
and we do praise this laudatory feat.
The stage's arranged with beauty so sublime,
the Play, Good Morning, shows its scene on time.
Categories: redondilla, appreciation,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberLove - the Redondilla Style

~Love~
(Redondilla)


Love gives it all and love forgive
Love is tender and love is kind
Life better when true love you find
Love can make us feel more alive

Love is great and love is  sweet
Love for sure always comes to mind
Love can't be defined, loves always kind
Love is free loves delicious treat

Of nothing Lord wants us  afraid
Love faith hope and peace thru God spread
With his love heal if wrong was fed
God's love is greater than all said.



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2013



April.29.2016



~Author's Notes:


The  "Redondilla" is an Spanish poetry form or style, with an eight-syllable quatrain rhyming either abba or abab, but in the latter rhyme scheme it is usually called, the Serventesio.

The Redondilla Origin:

Early 18th century. From Spanish redondilla from redondo round + -illa, after French rondeau or one of its cognates.
Categories: redondilla, blessing, faith, hope, love,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberRolling Thunder (Redondilla)

The rumbling sound flashes pass
Heads held high like soldiers in mass
Handles straight as a new lamp pole
These bikers are now on the roll

Soft wind caressing their faces
Holding on, ladies with laces
Gliding with a natural flow
As they go with a rumbling glow

Corners and curbs their hogs traverse
Rolling thunder with such a burst
Riding the shores this afternoon
Coming to your town one day soon



Comments:   The Redondilla is a Spanish form of poetry.  It has four lines with 
eight syllables in each line.  The rhyme scheme varies from aabb, abab, to abba. 
This poem is about the rumbling bikers passing through town.  It’s such a great 
sight to see as they maneuver their bikes in their special way. It's dedicated to 
the rumbling hogs of thunder with non-grumbling, mumbling riders!
Categories: redondilla, adventure, imagination, life, people,
Form: Free verse
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