Punctuating Poems | Examples

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Premium Member HAIKU POND

My haiku pond sits
in the corner of my garden~  
small as a teacup,  
deep as a breath.  

Frogs sit like syllables  
on lily pad commas,  
punctuating the stillness  
with soft green thoughts.  

Dragonflies skim the surface,  
writing bright, brief lines  
in their iridescent ink~  
three beats, then gone.  

Even the reeds whisper  
in measured cadence,  
counting their own shadows  
as the wind turns the page.  

What’s in it?  
Only what belongs in brevity~  
a ripple, a pause,  
a moment that refuses to hurry.  

Why?  
Because every pond  
needs a place  
where the world grows quiet enough  
to speak in seventeen heartbeats.

Premium Member A DACHSHUND OF MANY FORMS

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I’m like a teapot—short and stout—at dawn,   
contentedly sleeping in the kitchen's first light.  
By noon, I’m a question mark curled on your lawn,  
punctuating the grass with snores.  

Sometimes, I’m a baguette, crusty and long,  
stretched across the couch in a sunbeam.  
Other days, I’m a slipper with eyes that follow along
as you tiptoe past the doggie treat jar.  

I have been a caterpillar, a comma,  
a parenthesis nuzzling your ankle.  
Occasionally, I was your boomerang, mama, 
who returned to you with leaves in my fur.  

But always, always, beneath my shifting silhouette,
I remain your loving Doxie, Fritz,
who sighs when you scratch my belly
even when I don’t have an itch.

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Premium Member Jubilant Tambourine

Play on jubilant tambourine.
Your silvery zills quaking,
quicken rockstones from such slumbers.
Shake, zealous with the spirit, 
punctuating hallelujah,
ringing fresh as a new year.


Premium Member THE NIGHT THE POND HELD ITS BREATH

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The pond froze so suddenly that a duck mid-quack  
found its bill glued shut,  an absurd ice sculpture.  

Mrs. Harlow’s terrier, mid-leap, hung suspended in the air  
like a fuzzy comma,  punctuating nothing.  

The streetlamps blinked,  then hardened into amber icicles—  
even the wind gave up,  curling into itself for warmth.  

Old Man Greeley, halfway through shaking his fist at a squirrel,  
became a monument to irritation, his mittens stiff with frost.  

The children, though,  were the first to notice:  
they pressed their tongues to the icy slide at the park  
stealing the cold for themselves.

Premium Member GHOSTED

He had become as his words
Used in times of desperation 
The last one called upon
A weak fill in for thought
Muttered in an unforced silence
Incorrectly punctuating
A lost moment of life

Block Party

Double-dutch ropes slap the sidewalk -
snap - snap - snap -
braids whip air,
girls jump in, counting
uno, dos, three,
feet flick like drumsticks.
The ice cream truck jingles off-key,
icy lady shakes paper cups,
piragua man shaves ice into snow -
his knife scraping the block awake.
Pastelillos pop in hot oil -
spit, sizzle -
plastic cups clink with rum and cola,
congas crack, maracas shake salt in the air,
horns blare like chisme in heat.
Heels click-clack over concrete -
punctuating each spin,
each swirl of hips.
Whistles split the air -
one from the lifeguard at Jefferson,
two from the men on the corner,
three from abuela
when the coals are hot.
Somebody throws meat on the grill -
ssszzzz -
smoke climbs windows,
neighbors bring foil trays -
yellow rice, ribs, roasted corn -
each dish a downbeat.
Kids yell cannonball,
water smacks back,
lifeguard’s whistle cuts through splash.
Old heads tap dominoes on tabletops -
crack, slap, smack -
hands older than the stoops they sit on.
The block fills itself
the way music fills a drum -
the street hums under bare feet.
Tonight,
the moon will smell like charcoal
and sweet ice.


Premium Member Nothingness


God made everything out of nothing
but the nothingness shows through.
                                  Paul Valery

Only silence wells
in the dark throat of the evening
and anything you hear 
is of the world's making
or your own mind
filling up the empty spaces.

Music is made this way
and poetry, as they try
to give substance and form
to what is missing,
to fill that gnawing void
with a note or word.

Works fluoresce 
as exotic creatures do 
in the dark of deep seas, 
small, faint flickers
punctuating the unknowable
with momentary life.
And so it is,

we are drawn towards
a centre that seems everywhere,
a nothingness rolled
into a ball, the circumference 
of the infinite that resides
within us all.

Premium Member space between silence

the s p a c e between us, 
   is lined with full stops
        and wistful questions~
tucked within "inverted commas"
             of w e e p i n g stars,
  but I'm lost  in 
       suffocating s i l e n c e...

t h i n k i n g 
                 l o n g i n g 
                             d r e a m i n g...
as Y o u,  my beloved
are enough...the poetic pause 
 breathing between 
        stellar heartbeats
                  of the mourning sky~
punctuating promises 
    mirroring the magnetic 
  equations of l o v e ~
               a cosmic pyramid 
  glazed with pearl-dust 
 as herbs of henna 
                  soothe this soul 
   swollen with g r a t i t u d e
sipping midnight mocktails
                    like a dressed devotee
worshipping the aura of roses 
      within serene scriptures ...

I Breathe the Beauty of Quietude

I breathe the beauty of quietude:
Solitary walks in parks or woods,
Foliage brushing against one’s feet,
Early morning sunshine through the trees,
With bird calls punctuating the hush.

I breathe the beauty of quietude,
Of cloudless skies and placid waters,
Of soft breeze blowing against one’s face
Or whipping perfumes among the flow’rs  
Gently enough to not let them fall.

I breathe the beauty of quietude,
Of twilight steering the close of day,
Of the stillness about to descend,
The tranquility that the night brings--
Much needed rest for the weary soul.

I breathe the beauty of quietude:
The privacy that can be enjoyed
While in the company of one’s thoughts, 
Unmoved by the world’s many demands
To commune with oneself just for once.

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The Epitome quest


He stepped forward
-Invisible
Slowly dissipated in rhythm with word
She looked around
Searching for a plausible cause

An overly pronounced Ahh
punctuating his appearance
A wry smile trundled across his lips

-there is power in words

and I am Float
and you are Epitome

Someone has stolen a word
and we need you to find it
The only problem no one knows what it is….

Why float, a look of question frowning on her face

I created it-he replied it’s actually my first one
He carried on
We have three days
By that time you need to choose

Choose.choose what, she asked

The words you need on your quest
Courage has volunteered
We can’t find fear
and Whimsy is chasing a butterfly in a field

Premium Member Life and Death

    I hear the stories
      I read them too
    about calm, tranquil deaths
      as heavenward angels take their last breaths… 

   ‘She entered the next world
     surrounded by her nearest and dearest
   holding hands with her beloved husband of 57 years
     a smile of serenity overspreading her face…’

   Aaaaargh! Not for me! I shall not go willingly
     I vow to fight to stay alive until my last hurrah
   Punctuating the air with oaths and imprecations
     ~ Hanging on for my final grasp of this earthly station

Premium Member Incarceration

and then the accused fell foul
of yet another condemnation
without trial
the sentence spoken in anger

shards of bloody mosaic
stick to his bare feet
from where she threw
the glass on the tiled floor
punctuating
compartmentalizing 
puncturing an unspoken truth

superficial wounds already closing	
he wraps a bandage around his heart
squeezes tightly to feel alive
accepts the verdict
though no crime was committed

a scar remains from
what should have been
a beautiful night
and the rope tears into his hands

07th June 2023

Glee Days

“Be happy in the moment that's enough. Each moment is all we need.”
                     Quote _ Mother Teresa


As time brings glee days,
As we sojourn on bloom ways,
Let’s treasure the clime,
For it's a fleeting sublime.

Life is a stage of variant entities,
They come in subtleties,
It’s a walk across meadows,
Nightfall brings the shadows.

Happiness is a choice,
A punctuating voice,
A light that can be reflected, 
As gloom can be deflected.

Like a child on a swing,
Away from life's other wing,
We can walk oblivious of gloom,
Permuting our desired room.



May 24, 2023.
Writing Challenge - B Quotes - Poetry Contest,
Constance La France.

Premium Member Great Poetry

How does one define
great poetry? The best
rhyme in time? A musical
phrase that stays, reverberates
within the catacombs of a Devotee's
celestial sign, lubricating his every thought
as a priest's wine, sipping while he prays, 
saturating his blood with the effervescence
of an all loving, redeeming deity; who knows 
well His creation's need for affirmation, the urge 
to write; so invented He, neat words in sympathy 
to both inspire and delight – 
                                      Or is great poetry 
more antithetical?~ no conscious effort 
to unseal, for never prescriptively hermetical – 
a sacrilege if sanitized like something 
contrived for medically medical; enters the lull 
like a masked virus in the night, awakening soundly
sleeping hands to their inherent flight~ a light
clicked on to feverishly, tappingly, divinely compose; 
such all powerful driving might, pouring
out of every orifice I suppose: from one's mind,
eyes, lips, punctuating backside and
imperfect often grossly ventilating nose....

Premium Member Road Trip

Miles racing underneath lively conversation
Whistling road noises and occasional bumps,
Time passing slowly to our expected destination
As concrete expansion joints create thumps.

Whistling road noises and occasional bumps
Punctuating rhythmic sounds from the stereo,
As concrete expansion joints create thumps
Sense of contentment and pleasantry is apropos.

Punctuating rhythmic sounds from the stereo,
Cool breezes flow from open dashboard vents
Sense of contentment and pleasantry is apropos,
We are enjoying filtered outdoor autumn scents.

Cool breezes flow from open dashboard vents
Moderating the humidity of September heat
We are enjoying filtered outdoor autumn scents
A highly-anticipated road trip is totally upbeat.

Moderating the humidity of September heat
Time passing slowly to our expected destination
A highly-anticipated road trip is totally upbeat
Miles racing underneath lively conversation.

Written September 19, 2022

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