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Premium Member My Painted Slowed-Down Longins

Beyond the window, the radiant holly has withered.
The weary evening is losing its face;
I slice it into thin slivers like Mom’s cake—
so it might last a little longer.
When, as a boy in springtime, I pruned the vines
in silence alongside my father, a startled little owl flew out
through the skylight near the chimney.
A wistful ache still lingers in my heart.

GOD SPOKE OVER ME

a leafless branch with me 
but that's not what God did see 

God spoke over me 
of me He poured into 
God spoke over me 
now restored and renewed 

for I'm a branch on His tree 
a limb poised for prosperity 

God spoke over me 
of me He poured into 
God spoke over me 
now restored and renewed 

fruitful purposeful 
I longed to be 
saturated with godly abundancy 
pruned fine-tuned 
precise in Christ
ready to be filled 
In this new life 

A leafless branch was me 
but that's not what God did see 

God spoke over me 
of me He poured into 
God spoke over me 
now restored and renewed 

a new creation in Christ 
living an abundant Life

God spoke over me 
of me He poured into 
God spoke over me 
now restored and renewed

God spoke over me 
of me He poured into 
God spoke over me 
I'm now restored and renewed

Premium Member Wounds we mistake

With blistered hands we reach for the things that are sweet, 

And gather the ashes that fall at our feet.

We barter for things that decay,

And cry when it all gets swept away.

We hide from the heat,

Believing every sting is our defeat.

Yet, these earthen vessels are broken before being filled,

The stone must be struck before the waters are spilled.

Our small comforts we guard and we run from the rod, 

We mistake our wounds for the absence of God.

We forget that oil is pressed, 

And the soul must be emptied before it finds rest.

The branch must be pruned before blossoms appear,

And joy that we seek is bought through the tear.

So open these hands that have clung to the clay, 

And shatter the jar for the dawn of the day.


Garden Tree

I didn’t plant that garden tree
But thinking, I just let it be
I knew I should have cut it out
But felt within to let it sprout

And so, as seasons came and went
I pruned this tree, its bole I bent
Around the gable of my shed
But left the limbs above my head 

The years passed by and I grew old
I hated heat and shunned the cold
My garden work became a chore
As summer days my patience wore

But resting underneath that tree
Allowed me time to watch and see
The beauty of my garden wrought
And all the neighbored friends it brought

A bunny comes to taste my beets
While shaded so, I rest my feet
A bumble-bee’s contralto thrum;
A promise of much more to come

Badgers, robins, the house finch red 
All come with hopes of being fed
And I, too tired to wield my hoe,
Am glad I let that elm tree grow.

Premium Member Hope

What is hope, ask a bee in cold winter days,
she hangs around the pruned rose bushes,
with the hope that someday the spring will come,
and the flowers will bloom again in the garden.

What is hope, ask the blue bird pair in early spring,
they work diligently to bring every twig and grass,
to build their nest in the corner nook of my house,
I see the hope in the eyes of this lovely pair,
They are dreaming of a happy home for their family.

What is hope, ask a lonesome soul,
When the uncertainties linger around in mind,
hope is the only refuge to calm our fears,
When the loneliness sends one in depression,
the hope of a companionship overshadows the despair.

What is hope, ask a human being,
our life is a sand castle of hope on a sandy beach,
with the lingering fear of drowning in occasional high tide,
our destiny, our future, and our own survival,
hangs around the magical hope, the hope that is the eternal inspiration.

Fragrant Flower

I memorized your metaphors
As you laid me down
And beheld my beauty,
Studying every contour of my leaf.
With gentle urgent hands
you pruned
the cherry-colors of my bounty.

You pressed your face against my petals
Aromatic and entrancing,
I shivered when the warm air
Escaped your lips,
Delighted to taste my nectar
And the dew upon my trembling petals
Showed the efficacy of your masculine touch.

That visit to my garden where you
Plucked me,
From the land of exotic floral,
Like the scent of a fragrant flower
It remains celestial.


Gardens

When a flower doesn't sprout, it's easy to want to dig it up and start over.
It might be dead, or maybe it's too weak to grow, but it is important to remember:
growth takes time.
Some flowers are late bloomers,
Some need to be cut and pruned to thrive.
Not all flowers grow in the same conditions, but that doesn't make one flower better than another. 
Because at some point, they all bloom,
and they are beautiful if you have the patience. 
Care for your flowers.
Let them grow.
Watch their beauty bloom, as yours will too.

Premium Member Death of A Rose’s Dream

We are like rose bushes pruned by various things
Some, cause and effect, like the death of a dream

Defining moments in how or if we move on
Do we live despite defeat and become art
Something beautifully flawed yet uniquely inspiring 
Like a rainbow after a dark violent storm

Will we choose to reflect the light or the onyx cloud
Both have a purpose and a violet value
For what is light without darkness to compare
Even in failure one can be victorious

A hero who sacrifices self that others may live
Can reflect light despite the darkness of death
The womb to his body is as a thorn from life’s rose
The demise of his dream gives rise to others 

Light enters you and your soul is transformed
You become part of the fertile grounds 
For a larger dream to become reality
From a seed to a bud and perhaps a tree of life

Light which will enter you, facilitating your victory 
For in tribulations your soul lives on cheating death

Premium Member I Am A Bonsai Willow Tree

I am called 'the ancient one' among my peers,
known for my sweeping limbs, as if they weep.
I was taken from the bank of the River Sugen
when my tender roots were still quite young.
From Nature's arms, I was carefully replanted,
nurtured and shaped by the one who cares for me.
He's gently pruned my limbs to keep me healthy
and taken me outside to absorb morning sunlight.
I am proud to be a specimen of Japanese culture,
a miniature version of my Asian flora ancestors.

Ciara Cybelle

Her winsome smile belied her secret essence
A temptress and siren 
Given to saturnine quintessence

And I a man of placid and calm complexion
Became ever more umbrageous
With each stranger she offered affection

Ciara Cybelle chose to take her chances
Unconcerned by my mood
Continued her frenzied romances

She swooned at my charm
And laughed at my wit
And yet held to another man’s arm

Ciara Cybelle a nymph out of hell
Twisting a man
With her temptress spell

I had to make her understand
She simply had to see
I must be her only man

But Ciara Cybelle laughed instead
Eyes flashing fire
She brazenly said

The likes of me would never know
The deliciousness
Of the charms she would bestow

On other men she found fairer
Then in a rage
I struck in blind error

And carefree Ciara Cybelle
Lay shattered and still
At my feet where she fell

To the dark waters I fed
The alabaster body
Of Ciara Cybelle dead

Now benthic stillness of cimmerian depths 
Disturbed by the pale lifeless limbs
Of Ciara Cybelle

Now tumescent and water pruned
The once sempiternal beauty
Forever ruined

Premium Member TO THE VINING CHILDREN, VIBING

TO THE VINING CHILDREN…VIBING…
(Apropos Of A Scriptural Inspiration) 

Let us be as the Vines
Of The Gardener;
Let us who have been pruned
With love and awareness,
Have branches sharing fruits
Of Truth, Peace, and Love:-
Indeed, may our branches
Never ever be void
Of His divine wisdom’s guidance;
For we are poets of the tree of life:
Rooted, trunked, branched, leaved,
And fruited with the liberated word:-

As chosen vines of His love,
Let us continue vibing,
Fruiting awareness, inspiration,
Guidance, peace, and love,
Through the seeds germinating
In the creative fertile soil
Of our gardening poetic mind;
And its onederful oneness, 
In its onement of labors of love;
In our blessed poetic gardening
Of divine liberating inspiration.

Premium Member Vineyard of Love

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    I find I thirst more day by day
        for the True Vine, oh, sweet bouquet
            with one drop on tongue, love immersed
                more day by day, I find I thirst


    the fruit is pressed through trials unsung
        love immersed, with one drop on tongue
            yet in the vine we find sweet rest
                through trials unsung the fruit is pressed


                we’re pruned and purged by design
            we find sweet rest, yet in the vine
        into the vine the branch is merged
    by design we’re pruned and purged


                one body, one heart, all entwine
            the branch is merged into the vine
        warmth of Spirit like wine impart
    all entwine, one body, one heart

Wilting flowers

Wilted flowers
Wilted flowers lie in empty fields
Days pass as flies scour,
Leaving the decomposing ideas to be eaten.
The sun flickers as each minute weans by
An empty shell of you left in bloody waters.
A quiet silence crowding the space your words claimed.
The once blooming pedals, scorned by your nectar.
Craving the burn you bring into my veins; no longer able to be muzzled
A type of silent desire for chaos and destruction.
A desire for deforestation.
What started as weeds being plucked,
Turned to mowing down rose bushes.
Muddy boots left on waxed floors,
Destruction on the original wood grain that was once admired by generations.
Floors handcrafted from trees outside of what I wanted to call home.
Someplace silence was peace and peace was expected rather than craved.
Pruned roses left puddles of milkweed
Each droplet going sour the second it fell,
The bitter taste of cyanide leaked out of your pores into its water supply.
Empty plots. Pesticides. Ripped roots.

Garden Tree

I didn’t plant that garden tree
But thinking, I just let it be
I knew I should have cut it out
But felt within to let it sprout

And so, as seasons came and went
I pruned this tree, its bole I bent
Around the gable of my shed
But left the limbs above my head 

The years passed by and I grew old
I hated heat and shunned the cold
My garden work became a chore
As summer days my patience wore

But resting underneath that tree
Allowed me time to watch and see
The beauty of my garden wrought
And all the neighbored friends it brought

A bunny comes to taste my beets
While shaded so, I rest my feet
A bumble-bee’s contralto thrum;
A promise of much more to come

Badgers, robins, the house finch red 
All come with hopes of being fed
And I, too tired to wield my hoe,
Am glad I let that elm tree grow.

Stench

Dark red, luscious apples felled from her own tree long ago
Under the beaming sun plummeted with a soft, aching blow

The sweat drips and plops, scruple over a furrowed brow
Upon the discovery of rot that blackened her plow

“Has the wind gone mad–or am I the one insane?
Dirt and grime, high dry–surely the only way to explain”

Denial among hatred, she could not face–but under the murk, bits
Beneath, the snakes–surly and shabby—placed high their bids

The heat danced faster as the days passed far less paced
Her blonde hair bleached and pruned, but left one space

The temple on her right seemed blank and bruised
As a failed blow far too long past was nearly used

The magazine fell as she begins filtering the rot past her mind
She screams, shouts, yelps and cries, sobs of an animal forgotten by time

“I never meant for this to go–go and blow up like this!
I never meant. . . I never meant for me to hurt our kids.”

Too far from gone she was, behind silken white bars and drenched in ammonia
“I know, my love, but I must leave and forget you—may heaven forbid us, Aurora”

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