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Written on March 20, 2024

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Although the rose is unadorned by dew, rain or sun… she shines still brighter when all her work is done. ~ quote by poet If often seems that I’m like the gentle rose, When my limbs are pruned, my spirit thrives and grows. Like the rose, my deep roots are the foundation, For when my roots doubt, there is bleak stagnation. Like the rose, my thorns seem rather like a curse, But when looking closer, you see bugs who’re worse. Battling bugs and disease, stems and leaves grumble, I see the naked rose which makes me humble. See the forest for the trees, rose as it sways, Its rambling branches create a silent maze. I feel just like that rose as it blooms with grace, Then finds herself fading with age who’ll erase. If I could tell past sprouts how to make time last, I’d reveal the wonder of One I’ll holdfast. When time has ended and I lay my head down, There isn’t a doubt that His light will be my gown. Like the rose who fades, despite our heavy grief, We know she’ll rise again and it’s my belief… That when she rises, she’ll be more amazing, Much more beautiful as her soul is praising.

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Date: 5/24/2024 1:47:00 PM
Excellent analogy. Beautiful words. Worthy of a copy to keep in purse or wallet, along with picture to remind one to keep their spirits up during periods of uncertainty. Your poem reminds me about our pear tree. Each year the new Fruit is bigger and better than year before. Also like the rose we need tender and loving care. Convolvulus is the enemy of roses here. Without help the battle would be one sided. best regards David in NZ
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:13:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Gina :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2024 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Unadorned" is a beautiful write/quote/pretty rose picture... Enjoy your day/win..............
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Date: 3/26/2024 7:24:00 AM
Your last two stanzas are so uplifting Gina. A beautiful simile. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/20/2024 4:51:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Regina. You are an inspiration.
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