Let the dog out
who needs its opinion?
Let’s talk editing,
start with the first line -
no,
start at the first word,
the human mind is not equipped,
to produce brilliant ‘first words.'
Consider ditching,
a few exuberant adjectives,
if not controlled they will breed.
Imagine you only have
$5 of original things to say,
be economical,
or the poem may well be
under-valued.
Run it through a spell check...
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