Overblown Poems | Examples

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Succotash

I am not a Succotash man.
There is only so much my pallet can stand.
Each portion belongs to its own.
The hype of variety way overblown.

People tell me to change it up
To toss it around inside the mixing cup
To chew and enjoy all as one
Finding pleasure with a garbled chum

For me, I see too much strife
With the heavy-handed spices of life
Swallowing mysteries too hot to handle
Vicariously living in a lurid scandal.

There is only one meal chosen for me.
It’s the one I long for constantly.
A divine dish made from the Chef above
The meal I speak of is you, my love.

Premium Member The Four Seasons

The four seasons are each wonderful on their own
but when they are shoved into one day it can be overblown
Sun, wind, rain, and snow 
all dramatic and putting on a show

Good Grief

It begins in barricading,
Anger, fear and then persuading,
Keep on beating,
Hearth and heating.
Face looks red and
Head overblown with intense containment.
I bubble up with the thoughts,
Sighs and shock at what they’ve brought.
Though hope of formation is lost,
Cascading thought of being
Part of such that, not conceding,
Is hurt of needing,
And creates a darker cushioning
For me to rest my head.


Premium Member OBSCURITY


undisclosed
   & overblown
flickering
      black 
nocturnes

a
   pervading
       disposition
sensitively 
     expressed

a
  vague
   muddled 
      yet
trivial
         picturesque 
conquest
   of
      light
in
  simplified
    stylization
of
  frozen
    moods
abiding

Premium Member For the Story

Like a dog digging bone, I hunt stories
Write orgies from words known
With syntax like old men's drone
And metaphors overblown

Premium Member admiring my stuff

Pink cat with yellow polka dots
Orange and blue striped kitten
Female faeries with caramel skin

Beige elf man riding a horse with hearts
Why didn’t I make that a unicorn?
Overblown yellow daisy with a pretty face

Purple and yellow dragon wearing knee high boots
This was strange even for me
I smile at my painting from 2017, liking it more now.


Premium Member Show me but dont tell me

I do not live in Missouri
But I want to be shown
Those who are in a hurry
Often give facts overblown

I cannot be told to believe in this or that
My experiences are vast, decidedly phat
I will make up my own mind if you please
Some of the stuff I read is gleaned out of cottage cheese

The Corona Blues

The Corona Blues (Revisited)


So sick of being stuck at home
Just want to get out and roam
Can go nowhere without a mask
Can’t do my weekly tasks
I got the lowdown Corona blues


Get high all-day
It’s the only way
I can deal with the stress
Of all this mess
I got the lowdown Corona Blues....


Some say it's overblown
That really makes me moan
That statement is so untrue
Follow the rules on what to do
I got the lowdown Corona Blue.


Seems now people don’t listen
As this virus mutates and glistens
Some ignore the fact it exists
Do the wrong thing and take risks
Yeah,  I got the lowdown Corona (Covid-19) Blues


Just a little humor to lighten people's moods a little


w.t. Bacon/ASFJr & Fond Kiser
5/23/20  & 5/23/2020
Revisited 12/30/2020

Premium Member The Seven-Day Reign

Behold, a servant became king!
In Tirzah, he made a killing.
While the army was away-
Behold, King Elah's doomsday!

Zimri came and struck him dead,
Baasha's sin came to a head,
None were spared belonging to him,
Zimri killed all of them.

His rise in status would not last,
Earth shook due to this contrast-
No change in nature his undoing,
A fool pays for his misdoing.

Omri comes to claim the throne,
Zimri's support was overblown.
His doomsday choice is suicide,
Fire was kindled - Zimri died.

Behold, the parade of evil kings!
Omri and Tibni, the offerings.
Omri's support provided the win,
Encouraging Israel to sin.

Exalting oneself is foolish,
And planning evil is ghoulish.
Such a king can only feign-
Behold, the seven-day reign!

Premium Member claus schwab

this dark spirit goes upon decitfull 'mistle-toes' to tell deep lies
In kind disguise, with gutteral tones, this overblown' and
Foetid canker, consort of bankers, necropheniaic black
God forsaking.' death will take him, into hell for such awaits him'

Premium Member Don Fell in Love

Don was heartfelt, honest and sincere
When he fell in love with Miss Lynn McVere
She was flamboyant, redheaded, her ego overblown
Not her! Said his family, you are pure and home-grown!
She is as fake and strange as you are real
But Don could not change how his heart could feel
Falling in love was easy; he loved Lynn true.
They stayed married a record number of years, sixty-two.

Premium Member weird even to us fowl

I have heard of crows and crones
But these old geezers are overblown
over dressed with suits that squeak
beady eyes, scrawny necks, and beak

are they from the barnyard then?
Their necks all wrinkled to their chin
I have heard of crows and crones
But these are ugly as crawdad gnomes

it’s weird you say that said the chicken
they are abnormal roosters, hearts a tick’n
we call them Slim and Slam for fun
They walk real slow, neither can run

They appeared out of nowhere in the fall
They are scrawny and weird added pig Paul
They do not talk, whistle, peep or talk
Weird to even us fowl, added the chicken hawk.

Premium Member Lone Zone Andaree

With Divine, my physique and psyche are knit
I feel it, though my eyes can't see it.
It's a voyage from the known
Its zones are unknown.
Thirst-filled quest!
Lone!
Zest-filled test!
Midst gale and cyclone
Though darkness is overblown,
My soul's consciousness is brightly lit.
With Divine, my physique and psyche are knit

Premium Member Those Bygone Years

Know a sweet lady who was once a nurse
In a home for retired folks
A perfect personality to take care of the aged
Such tender caring she evokes

Her sweet loving nature was a perfect match
They must have really adored her
A tender loving soul with a heart of gold
A one-in-a-million type girl

Honoured by her friendship and dear sweet love
Fortunate to have met this charmer
Would sure love to spend a couple of evenings
Talking, some nights in the parlour

Hearing sweet tales bout these elderly folks
Their long and interesting lives
Tales of a joy with their dear loving families
Loving husbands and dear sweet wives

For some, their memories are all they have left
Abandoned, forgotten and alone
Such a sad and unhappy way to end a life
Golden years can be overblown

So if you have folks tucked away in a home
Please visit these precious dears
One day you'll also be thankful for those visits
Talking about your bygone years

Premium Member Words


                     Words 
            pompous, overblown 
  complicating, decorating, fluffing 
 Read, Research, Culture, Modification
      clarifying, stripping, owning 
               direct, succinct
                    Message

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