Otiose Poems | Examples


Premium Memberwhere no light penetrates

     where no light penetrates 
       the musty chamber of an existence
     gazing, otiose, in contemplation
 
     of erogenous zones 
       of paralysis and moans
     of the evaporation of bones… 

     the spider and its cobwebs beckon
       dust stirring like breath
         tick-tock of tears
Categories: otiose, dark, fantasy,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberThe Yearning Soul

Regardless of my mother's death,
One hope, obduracy, and words otiose breath

The wheels of progress never stop turning
The times shift, and my sad heart is yearning

The world continues to burst forth in beauty
To regain faith, one can never flout divine duty

Lemons had just started to turn yellow
The sky is azure, and there are plains in view

Conjointly to the bewildered trout
Somehow, the spark of passion faded out

Even as yearning is freed from restraint
I saw years slip by without one complaint

There is still plenty of love in us to pass around
I can stand with my feet sustained on the ground

And savor the peaches as a warm embrace
Where the imprint of love may leave a trace.

Written: May 26, 2023
Categories: otiose, appreciation, death,
Form: Couplet


Sol Invictus

Hollow odes lament where waves crash depthless

Oh! How ocean lacking light spills woe so!

Lackluster grays wail unkempt longingness

Lone stander bleeds the dreams of times ago

  

 O'er the screaming wind, a seagull's bleak cries

weeps of cloudiness usurping the day

Heaven's warmth obscured, and now coldness vies, 

overwhelming where vast emptiness slays

  

Left purposeless, wavering dark takes hold

looping tight a lynch-like corrosive noose

Otiose life sucks vim where sharks enfold,

wrecked in sunless abyss of night let loose

  

But Sol, unconquerable, beams once more

and the lighthouse sings, full of birds from shore!

  

(6/10/18)
Categories: otiose, allusion,
Form: Sonnet

Premium MemberGracias Gringos

Folks must be happy in Guatemala

   With tax money frittered by Kamala

      Will she visit the border
 
         To 'stablish peace and order

             Or is she just Joe's otiose* wallah**

(*Serving no useful purpose)
(**A person in charge or employed for a particular purpose)
Categories: otiose, humorous,
Form: Limerick

Premium MemberIn the Hollowed Hush of Heaven

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLCHXfkGOIw
In the hollowed hush of heaven the whisper of a soul 
and in the lit up room of stars an angel's karmic face   
Two feathered wings aloft deliverance her goal 
while one is seized on earth, the other portal graced 

An otiose moon assembled a duty of the night 
shadows of the 5th dimension casting in the light 
prying dreams of splendor identity of life 
immortal as the sun her beauty, sharp as knife 

Relinquishing the feel of metal grates and pain 
she soon portends her destiny before she goes insane 
we need to catch that train she whispers in her ear
and suddenly she's up floating without fear 

In the hollowed hush of heaven, an angel talks to God 
while a stretcher is removed, the sky turns white to chalk 
two feathers wings of might she doesn't need a prod 
volte faced attuned and free she flies, to new EPOC.
Categories: otiose, death, life, light,
Form: Quatrain


Noblesse Oblige

Painstaking plumes of surest gait
To wield diamond steel over fate;
With slow pair of wit-guarded lips,
As otiose words sway great ships. 

Invincible flair and exacting knack
To stand out from the frothy pack;
Ochred with all blue-penciled skill,
For nabob’s dimwits do mimic still. 

With the far-scanning aquiline eye
That fowls unborn miles like a spy;
Plus an ear for tiniest voices tuned,
For idlest vowel by vagaries ruined.

Gigantic empathy for pinched souls
Hewn down by lot’s inclement fouls;
Felt tear for fellow wayfarers stung
By blunt luck's blade rashly swung. 

A little but constant sacrifice betimes,
For bereft chum eschewed by dimes;
Or even total strangers in want of bail
Out of a jinx along existence’s icy sail.
Categories: otiose, allegory, anxiety, blessing, care,
Form: Didactic

Beneath Life

Constrained by the sober exercise of judgment,
And dignified by deliberation and privacy.
I yanked my soul out of its secret chamber, 
And held it to the mirror of my eye.

To see it like a star or moon against the sky, 
But it dwindled to alarmingly small dimensions.
Fate had turned and twisted a thousand ways,
From the standpoint of expediency.

Fumbling and stumbling in helpless incapacity,
I'm greeted with an alloyed chagrin and gloom.
Then I heard a wordless voice,
In language terse yet familiar.

It wasn't a loose and otiose statement,
Unaccustomed tears threatened my seared vision,
I'm overshadowed by a fretful anxiety,
By this innocuous thought, I'm skulking beneath life.

But if I shine brighter in life,
Reexamine fate, destiny and my artistic aptitude,
If I fail, die and remain forgotten,
Study the agonies of my conscious failure,
And remember me with this poem.
Categories: otiose, death, life,
Form: Free verse

Selcouth Folly

Wrapt in the otiose aumbry of pride
A glede hythe a quiff will gust aside
Her folly selcouth
Binds her  fast to her wanweird
To speak ever sooth
She is thrawn, my sister, my coëval
Into fell Truth’s ghyll she will smiling fall

Morrow’s dawnsun, rise!
Drown in the throes of today!
Sky dragons, melt away!
Morrow’s dawnsun, drown!
Rise in grief’s eternal day!
Sky dragons, melt away!
Categories: otiose, age, anger, angst, appreciation,
Form: Rhyme

Do I Walk Or I Walk Me

Do I Walk or I Walk Me?


Suddenly I stopped
inspired by a questioning thought;
am I walking or I’m walking me?
Am I a becoming or a being?
The whole system called I or he or she
is a cosmic reality
yet a thirst aided by insight
welled up from inside;
can this really walk or stalk
unless propelled and guided 
by the inner reality?
Is walking an act of mine 
or of the self indwelling?
Stunned by the divide of I and me
I was inclined to embrace the reality
when someone accosted me
asking for something otiose
which compelled me to come back
to the diurnal fact
bewildered!
Categories: otiose, mystery, philosophy, spiritual,
Form: Prose Poetry

For the Uninitiated Impostors

I feel a nauseating revulsion to see scraps of prose
Bundled together in a neatened pile in the name of poetry,
And prizes being awarded for such otiose verbiage
And praises being heaped for such boring coquetry.

Poetry, my dear uninitiated impostors,
Is the language of the mute solemn gods.
You ought to choose your nifty title well
And thus commence your verse against the odds.

Avoid Soyinka’s worn-out style of incompetent blank verse,
Instead, give it the rhyme scheme of the unbeatable Yeats;
The superior verse that one Tom Mboya has never read,
The taste that a Kenyan editor will haul over the rooftop sheets.

Line after line beg the company of some higher Muse
So that you may pen the will of the gods and not your own;
Alliterate here and there though you must not make it your aim,
Then lunge into deeper thought with a deity-like melancholy tone.

And never seek fame for your sacred poetic tasks.
Leave the young to sing your lyrics centuries upon your death,
And remember a great weaver of rhymes long deceased
And pray and wish you immortal blissful health.
Categories: otiose, anniversary, art,
Form: Verse

Irresponsible Enemy

IRRESPONSIBLE ENEMY

When our tears drop 
and stench fire around 
us, 
And fire's enemy 
becomes otiose and 
nugatory,
Then shall tears 
backfire fire's enemy
And after a very scorch 
sunshine
Telling ur the end of 
those former days.

Then shall our eyelids 
close in sorrow
But tears have wiped 
away our sorrows
And our lions roaring in 
joy 
Marking the start of 
new days
And the end to the 
palsy-walsy.
Categories: otiose, history
Form: ABC

Pit and Pendulum

Forgive if I borrow, write and craft some sorrow
Beg and steal, I give you this now and tomorrow
Pen me under stars, pit me against the best
I'll write you a sonnet, put your heart to the test

Cause darlin I gotta know what it feels like
To taste glory, bring heaven from hell's pike
I need to pen a haiku and be through 
Oh you thought that I meant with you? 

Hell, darlin, I am seeking fame and fortune
I'll pull down stars and ink a supernova
This year I no longer stand by till it's over
Pits and Pendulum's buried under sandy dune

Desert? I will cross it then, a thousand times
Water to quench my thirst from otiose rhymes
But yet, I'll pen my name in the stars for it
Bleed heart and soul for it
But you'll find me... at the edge of a razor.
Categories: otiose, on writing and words,
Form: Rhyme

Angel of Death

A million thoughts run through my head,
A thousand words i wished i had said, 
A hundred lines i should have read,
So many things left unfinished, 
Life taken never to be replenished, 
An unlikely angel in the dark of night
Resembling an outre flying kite,
Feel the breeze of freedom
 when her wings spread, 
Suddenly it occurs the captivity in being dead,
Confinement to this addiction
 is much like being ridden to a bed,;
overnight it seems the soul was diminished, 
devirginized without getting kissed,
she appears in an otiose light, 
promising there is no better feeling
 than aboard her heavenly flight,
Once in her embrace the skies turn red, 
she gets a taste and devours like she has never been fed,
 In those final hours astray one has been led,
 through the dark unknown she carries me
 until I disappear in the mist,
rendering me to a state of weakness and deadly bliss;
My eyes see the image of her bad intentions
 but they cannot grasp the truth in sight, 
By sunrise I know she will have won this fight
Categories: otiose, allegory, confusion, death, introspection,
Form: Rhyme
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