In the Hollowed Hush of Heaven

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLCHXfkGOIw In the hollowed hush of heaven the whisper of a soul and in the lit up room of stars an angel's karmic face Two feathered wings aloft deliverance her goal while one is seized on earth, the other portal graced An otiose moon assembled a duty of the night shadows of the 5th dimension casting in the light prying dreams of splendor identity of life immortal as the sun her beauty, sharp as knife Relinquishing the feel of metal grates and pain she soon portends her destiny before she goes insane we need to catch that train she whispers in her ear and suddenly she's up floating without fear In the hollowed hush of heaven, an angel talks to God while a stretcher is removed, the sky turns white to chalk two feathers wings of might she doesn't need a prod volte faced attuned and free she flies, to new EPOC.

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Date: 3/28/2021 5:30:00 AM
Lovely writing and vision... enjoyed. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/27/2021 11:00:00 AM
I have to admit I was gobsmacked by the flow and the imagery, Mystic. Such a beautiful work, deserving of praise.
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Date: 3/27/2021 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Milt, glad you enjoyed it. This one came close to the heart for me.
Date: 3/27/2021 9:30:00 AM
WoW! Mystic, The hollowed hush of heaven line inspired you to write an amazing poem. Good content, imagery, and rhymes. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/27/2021 2:54:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Alexis, I think this morning I had a eureka moment. :)
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