Metal(A) Poems | Examples


Premium Member One Last Tear

she feels her mother’s warmth 
it is so peaceful here
a heartbeat reverberates
steady and secure
floating in her sanctuary 
she softly moves, aware and alert
suddenly...a violent jerk
harsh cold metal..a foreign sensation 
then pain...excruciating pain
oh God, she is so helpless!
before she is brutally torn away 
from her precious little life
...one last tear




Written on 2/3/2019

Circle of Earth Elements

Circle of Earth Elements

Air sustains us, providing oxygen for all living things,
Fire is the energy that the radiant sun brings.
Metal a mixture of elements, solid to the core,
Space provides an emptiness, divine mysteries to explore.
Water life’s liquid medicine, fluid home of the unborn,
Woods vegetative properties, give the landscapes adorn.
This circle of earth elements, inanimate substances as such,
All contribute to our planets, magnificent marble's blue crust. 

Written:  © 3/15/16 

Submitted for: Screwed IXV


Rage of Sauron

With a honey-tongue and heart of gall
      A coiled serpent poised to strike
      Beneath his speech and quiet ways
      A beguiling dagger hidden close
      With fell deeds and a heart of hate
      A mind of metal, a soul of steel
      Poisoned words, venom sweet
      Illusions are not often real

      Tongue submissive, spirit bold
      Dark as a secret left untold
      A greater lord, a greater thane
      Who shall be ruler once again

Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter