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Circle of Earth Elements

Circle of Earth Elements

Air sustains us, providing oxygen for all living things,
Fire is the energy that the radiant sun brings.
Metal a mixture of elements, solid to the core,
Space provides an emptiness, divine mysteries to explore.
Water life’s liquid medicine, fluid home of the unborn,
Woods vegetative properties, give the landscapes adorn.
This circle of earth elements, inanimate substances as such,
All contribute to our planets, magnificent marble's blue crust. 

Written:  © 3/15/16 

Submitted for: Screwed IXV
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 6:39 AM
A beautiful dedication to Earth.... Congrats Sarita, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Milliner Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Thank you very much Teddy!!
Hagy Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Excellent w!rite! I love the earth too
Milliner Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Fleming Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 1:35 PM
Hello, Sarita. I find your little poem most charming...Very nicely penned - A seven! My best regards! :) john
Milliner Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Thank you John, for the visit and the compliments!!
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