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Choices of Past Forebears

Random chain of events
preceded occurrence re:
guarding existence of me
interminable fits and starts
concerning self destruction
inherent within one measly
self important species.

Yours truly synonymous 
with any chance reader
(of course inclusive those 
untold past multitudes,
who trod upon this oblate 
spheroid preceding one

anonymous groveling, 
middling sniveling modest
*****sapien) pursuant 
upon unknown destination
giving contemplative, 
introspective, speculative...

pause every now and again, 
asper bajillion prior
bipedal hominids, whose 
individual deliberate or
random natural biological 
impulses wrought sons

and/or daughters, whose 
subsequent call, sans their
wild procreative proclivities 
unwittingly begat the
unique chromosomal 
combinations inscribed genes

imbuing each of us with 
transient occupancy to revel,
relish, reckon very finite 
number of orbitz around
nearest star, how longevity 
(till mortality – leisurely

and/or vocationally) 
expended, yet anatomically,
biochemically, physiologically...
linkedin with avast
gamut incorporating 
unknowable determinants sole

fully cobbling wide, whirled 
webbing, (albeit skein
microscopic) comprising 
resultant Deoxyribonucleic
amalgamations, combinations, 
emulations...throughout

untold generations eventually 
giving (swell pregnant)
rise to healthy progeny 
predicated on an uneventful
tragic mishap in utero 
preceding parturition, which

miraculous seminal fertilization 
regarding series of
fortunate events delineating 
quintessentially strapping
robust tot destined (years later) 
to continue human

species, thus I ponder 
tremendous steep odds (analogous
to drawing winning lottery 
ticket), when reproductive
processes diploid propagating 
one after another ongoing

generation, yet in retrospect 
every cellular T-Mobile
chance coupling attendant on 
haphazard spontaneous

buzzfeeding circumstances 
promulgating prolific primal
precedents begetting each 
individual necessitating tenuous

fluke (worm hungers) engaging, 
engendering, engineering... 
(similar to science experiment) 
endowing penultimate on the fly 

fusion between two haploid cells 
impossible to explain convincingly,
(asper in my mind) the notion 
predestination intervenes
likened to invisible hand.


A Rift In Time Part 2

(Please read part 1 first or this will make no sense)

	To the scientist’s dismay, pressing the cancel button was ineffective.  The plunge into his past continued inexorably.  It, however, was not without its benefits.  Henry’s skin became supple and his muscles bulged as in his youth.  His hair returned to the light brown that he hadn’t seen in decades.  For the first time in decades, Henry felt, not just okay, but good and joyous in his renewed youth.  He decided to stop his slide into the past at about age twenty when he would have his degrees and could live his career over again.  If his “other self” was there, Henry would assume a new identity and make a whole different life for himself.  It was an unprecedented opportunity and he meant to make the most of it.  

	Near his birthday in the year 1970, Henry hopefully pressed the cancel button and was rewarded with a loud click.  But instead of gliding to a stop, the time machine accelerated in its journey into the past.  Henry experienced the hormonal rush of puberty and felt adolescent acne break out on his face.  Within minutes, a reverse growth spurt cut his height by several inches.  Soon, he was a young child at play, oblivious to the danger of his situation.  The year 1950 saw a tot and then a cooing baby.  When August 8th passed, the infant suddenly had an umbilical cord attached to a nonfunctioning placenta.  Its two umbilical arteries throbbed desperately, but the return blood through the umbilical vein was not oxygenated, nor did it contain essential nutrients.  

	Membranes enveloped the devolving Henry who now had the “old man” appearance of a fetus. Then he became a blastocyst, ready for implantation in a nonexistent uterine endometrium.  Within seconds he regressed to gastrula, blastula and then the berry-like ball of cells called morula.  Like some weird countdown, he became 64, 32, 16, 8, 4, 2 cells and then a zygote.  

	The paternal half of Henry’s chromosomes disappeared next, leaving only an ovum ready for fertilization.  Even that became an oocyte needing to complete meiosis before it vanished entirely in the immature ovary of Henry’s infant mother.

	Henry Higgins, born August 8, 1950 and died November 8, 1949,  physicist and time traveler is missing forever.
© Elton Camp  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Rain

There’s something ornately comforting, in a downpour of a day’s healthy rain
So replenishing, cleansing, as renewing, the ultimate giver to feed life’s grain

As standing undercover feeling the smaller flecks of the rain against your skin
With the thrashing of rain against the window panes, creating a deafening din

Each drop, creating rivulets that chase each other down, onto the window sill
There pausing, but, for a second in pools before they take their final overspill

God’s creatures sensing mother’s nature ungodly call find refuge in their lairs
Others finding cover from the torrents of rain that caught them, so unawares


Birds tuck their heads away, wait on the downpour of rain to end, its final fall
In this time just birds of silence, you seldom hear them making their bird call

Within the marble halls of mansions, walls glisten with dancing shades of hue
Gun dogs put out of work lie waiting for their prize, there’s nowt’ they can do

Children sit upon window seats watching as the rivulets fall upon each a wish
Their little fingers pressed upon the window pane giving each rivulet a squish

But; nothing can prevent nature’s raindrops falling, so they just watch in awe
Cats on their hind legs each trying to catch the rivulets drops with their paws

There is more than a sense of security, in this day’s healthy downpour of rain
Mother makes hot cups of juice, just in case, from a cold, we all need to feign

Grandfather sits very staunchly before the fire in his armchair made so grand
A tot of whiskey just for good measure, for medical purposes you understand

While dear Grandma is knitting away, totally in tune to the rhythm of the rain
In the hallway standing there idle rests father’s ebony and ivory walking cane

Who has now took himself into his study, sits to reminisce and to have a cigar
It saved just for such a day resting in its lacquered pigmented box of cinnabar

Cooks busy themselves in the kitchen making all the family their evening meal 
Steam rising from the cooking onto the windows panes, does the rain conceal 

Until the steam itself creates rivulets of their own, and the outside is revealed
In doing so, makes the clarity of the day’s rain even more so magically surreal
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Bookends of Eternal Dark

Where were you so long ago?
All those eons before a tot.
In some distant god’s château? 
No. Not there. You were not.

On a shelf of surplus stock,
A soul dressed up in heavens frock.
Perhaps a spirit not yet wrought,
No. Not there. You were not.

Then began your book of life,
It’s made in volumes three.
The past, the present,
And the yet to be.

Will you write only pleasant,
As you pen volume present?
Avoiding matters to disavow,
Parting life’s waves by your prow.

Crashing the crest before the break,
Leaving burst bubbles in your wake.
What great act earns its worth,
And a lasting mark upon the earth? 

Is that mark worth the grind,
Should your labor be realigned?
The train of life rolls on rails of time,
And travel stops at the end of the line.

When that ending word is writ,
The final one that you submit.
When there is no more yet-to-be,
You close the cover on volume three.

The tome is closed. Where do you go?
To the place you were taught?
To some distant god’s château? 
No. Not there. You are not.

Your Book of Life, a mere spark, 
Bounded by bookends of eternal dark.Where were you so long ago?
All those eons before a tot.
In some distant god’s château? 
No. Not there. You were not.

On a shelf of surplus stock,
A soul dressed up in heavenly frock.
Perhaps a spirit not yet wrought,
No. Not there. You were not.

Then began your book of life,
It’s made in volumes three.
The past, the present,
And the yet to be.

Will you write only pleasant,
As you pen volume present?
Avoiding matters to disavow,
Parting life’s waves by your prow.

Crashing the crest before the break,
Leaving burst bubbles in your wake.
What great act earns its worth,
And a lasting mark upon the earth? 


Is that mark worth the grind,
Should your labor be realigned?
The train of life rolls on rails of time,
And travel stops at the end of the line.

When that ending word is writ,
The final one that you submit.
When there is no more yet-to-be,
You close the cover on volume three.

The tome is closed. Where do you go?
To the place you were taught?
To some distant god’s château? 
No. Not there. You are not.

Your Book of Life, a mere spark, 
Bounded by bookends of eternal dark.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Beautiful Days


    When I think back on the tattered pages of my life, I find so much sadness and
sorrow.  But there was a time way back when life was truly perfect, before Susan
was killed by a truck walking home from school one winter day.  She was six and I
was four and we were sisters who were loved very deeply.  Our parents were
hardworking and wonderful to us.  But that day changed everything, nothing was
ever the same.

     I can remember quite far back, it seems amazing that I can recall being fed in a
high chair, the train was coming and I had to open my mouth.  I can still hear
mother laughing when I got food all over my face.  She liked to dress the two of us
like twins.  I was big for my age and Susan was small for hers.  We were adorable,
everyone said so.  Many days we went for walks around the neighbourhood and
sometimes we played in this beautiful wooded park that had a pond with ducks
and swans.  I remember we would put our feet in the cold water and shriek our joy.

     Sometimes we went to the beach dressed in our blue satin swimsuits and
everyone said we were sweet with our shiny hair and of course, we adored the 
attention.  I recall going to a fair with games and rides.  We had ice-cream and
candy floss and went on amusement rides.  We especially loved the ponies.  Once I
was photographed by the local newspaper with the caption, "tot enjoys the fair," I
still have that photo of me with a big candy floss in my face.

     We had dolls and teddy bears and grandma gave us a real tea pot and cups to
to use for our tea parties in the back yard, she even made us peanut butter
cookies, oh, it was lovely.  Dad made us a little table with two chairs and a cupboard
for our dishes.  We would dress up in grandma's old hats and stuff and even invited
the cat, it is a beautiful memory.  Then Susan died and I had two of everything
like clothes, teddy bears, dolls and toys.  Life was never the same.



_____________________________
March 31, 2015


Poetry/Prose/The Beautiful Days
Copyright Protected, ID 03-658-687-31
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France


For the Standard contest, Golden Days, 
sponsor, Rob Carmack, Judged 04/2015

10th Place
Form: Prose


Premium Member Just Saying My Piece

When Poetry Soup becomes infested with partisan rubbish, 
It will be difficult for liberal, creative poets, like me to flourish 
Who seek a safe place away from the maddening ignorance 
Of those people who continually despise political difference 
For those who are angry and want to say the nastiest things 
Do you have any idea what hurt your insatiable blather brings? 

For some who don’t consider me a red-blooded American patriot, 
I fought for the U.S. of A. in uniform when you were still just a tot! 
I would rather die on the altar of honor than continually be castigated 
By followers of a “wannabe” dictator who every day prevaricated 
And sought to drag our country down into the muck and mire 
Continues, to this day, stoking his sycophants’ hatred with fire.

Selecting a political putdown of President Joseph Biden for Poem of the Day 
Was surely inappropriate if Poetry Soup administrators wish to say 
The site maintains neutrality when it comes to political discourse 
It encouraged poets, in their remarks, to choose up sides, of course 
Anger and vitriol hurled toward us who are of more left-leaning mind 
Will likely now become commonplace for those who are not so inclined. 

Frankly, I despise clicking on a poem I think will be worth reading 
Only to find, instead, an anti-American tirade of invective leading 
To put-downs against our president, the vice-president, and first lady 
Half-truths and conspiracy theories that, for the most part, are shady 
If you are unhappy with the free and fair election that turned out your man 
Then, every chance you get, go vote and change the system, if you can! 

Our country is not, I think we’d all agree, a perfect democracy 
We have lots of problems and crises – that's plain to see, but, 
We now have a leader who cares about doing what is right 
A man, who in short-order, is ready, committed, and willing to fight. 
I have travelled the world over, north and south, east and west 
Freedom to flourish in America is head and shoulders above the rest! 


Written:  April 4, 2021 (edited)

Awarded Poem of the Day on Poetry Soup
April 5, 2021

#38 on Best New Poems on Poetry Soup
April 6, 2021

Premium Member Is There Happiness Without God

Do you think you'd be happy if there were no God?
Well, I wonder if that could be true?
It would seem to suggest that your life has no meaning,
If so, are you sure, that is OK with you?

Though simplicity’s something that I give high praise,
Does the absence of God bring it on?
And a universe singing, “I’M ALPHA, OMEGA,”
Make you want to dance, exercise your baton?

On one hand, there’s the universe, other hand’s God,
Is this where we bring logic to bear?
And in choosing a steady state, or a creator,
Do questions remaining just vanish from care?

I won’t try to deny it; the Bible sounds strict,
But then where it counts most, Good Book’s kind,
Christ says “My yoke is easy” and “Grace is salvation,
Is Zoloft the solace that you have in mind?

I say these two positions rest wholly on faith,
So it seems just one side has a prayer,
The Agnostic is only one seen using logic
But tempted toward laziness in this affair.

Seems a Christian and Atheist worship same God,
Their God’s FAITH (neither one has a clue)!
So then where is FAITH’s virtue “God” finds so appealing?
It’s door to your heart, though it’s frozen dark blue!

Tell me if God exists, is it smart to play dumb?
You could join Pascal’s club and just bet!
But then God (if He’s God) would divine you are hedging,
And likely repelled by your playing coquette!

If my thinking is right, then Agnostics aren’t safe,
Christ likes souls either cold or quite hot,
It’s lost souls who are lukewarm, that bad taste embody,
They rarely attract like a child or a tot.

Though space-time may contain the truth, can it be true,
If creator, how could it be pure?
It is probably best if you rise to occasion
And hope God is real though you cannot be sure.

Who can prove with no doubt that God doesn’t exist?
How could space-time exist with no plan?
To find joy without God feels quite oxymoronic
If truth is not real, how could joy speak to man?

Both our postulates have the same fault it would seem,
Who’s the author of space-time or God,
And what entity gave rise to all we encounter?
I’d swear it's not me! (But I’ve always been odd.)


Brian Johnston
April 6, 2017
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Random Entries From My Diary

"I never travel without my diary - One should have something sensational to read"
...Oscar Wilde, 1891

30 May 48:  I graduated from high school today now thank God I'm free!
No more doggone homework, perplexing algebra or teachers bugging me!

7 Jul 48: Enlisted in the Air Force today!  Good Lord! What have I done!
The sarge said, "Forget Mom, Dad and Susie Q! You're now mine, my son!"

21 Oct 48: Finished basic training today with about a hundred other guys.
I thought it'd be more like a Boy Scout Camp! Boy, was I in for a surprise!

15 Feb 49: Graduated tech school at Fort Warren and sent to the Bermuda Isles.
Quite a change for a country boy!  Water, water everywhere for miles and miles!

12 Oct 52: Was married tonight at Perrin AFB with Vera as my beautiful bride!
She was very pert and calm, but diary, I was somewhat nervous I must confide!

23 Aug 54: Our family grew by one today! Leanna, a little girl, my fondest wish!
She was measured by a nurse holding her by the heels! Just like measuring a fish!

15 Aug 55:  Boarded a crowded troopship in New York and set sail for Morocco.
Was beset with a bit of mal de mer since the ship was wallowing to and fro!

17 Oct 57: Our little 'arab' Leslie was born today near Casablanca! What a dolly!
She has a hearty set of lungs, but that's OK, she's a healthy little dude, by golly!

11 Jan 68:  Son Mark was born at the Air Force Academy and seemed a healthy tot!
9 Apr 68:  Alas, we buried Mark today at Evergreen.  Boy, do we miss him a lot!

24 Jun 71: My family and I arrived in Tokyo, Japan, to begin our three-year tour!
Japanese is foreign! For "good morning" do I say, "ohio gazamus" or "bon jour?"

1 May 74: Chaplain Porter notified me that I had been promoted to Chief!
Happy day, dear diary!  I've reached the highest rank!  What a blessed relief!

1 Aug 78: I retired today at Offutt AFB, after 30 wonderful years of service!
After wearing the 'blue suit' all those years, wearing civvies makes me nervous!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved

Placed No. 3 in Constance La France's "The Diary" Contest - April 2011
Form: Couplet

I Met a Little Man Up On the Green - a Rhyme For New Year's Eve

I met a little man up on The Green
On New Year’s Eve, and he was two foot two
With quite the reddest nose I’ve ever seen
And eyes as bright as summer skies are blue

‘What brings you here?’ I said. He laughed and lit
A pipe, inhaled a lot and blew a cloud
Of smoke that drifted up where pigeons sit
Up high between the Christmas Lights. ‘I’m proud

To say that I’m a Moonraker’ he said
‘And every New Year’s Eve I come and chat
To ducks, and to the drunks, and to the dead
And listen to the bells. Look, there’s a bat!’

I looked and so there was. ‘You’re very small’
I said. ‘Aye, so I am’ he said, ‘but wise
And being small means not so far to fall’
He winked at me. A twinkle in his eyes

Danced like a firefly. ‘And very old’
I said. ‘Aye, that as well’ he said, ‘but not
So old and bitter that my heart is cold’
He offered me his hip flask. ‘Have a tot’

‘I don’t’ I said, ‘but thank you.’ ‘Look, a cheese!’
He pointed. ‘In the water!’ ‘Isn’t that
The moon?’ I said. He laughed. A little breeze
Danced light across the Crammer and his hat

Fell off. He didn’t care. We watched it sink
Together as he sank another dram
Of moonshine. ‘Sure you didn’t want a drink?’
‘As eggs is eggs’ I said, ‘although I am

A little curious.’ ‘You wonder why
I’m here?’ ‘I do.’ ‘One question’s all you get’ 
‘One question?’ ‘Yes. Like why do people die
Why birds at all, or why is water wet?’

I asked him about twenty twenty one
He thought a moment. ‘Doesn’t do to be
Too curious’ he said. ‘Beneath the sun
Is nothing new. You’ll have to wait and see’

‘That’s it?’ ‘It is’ he chuckled. Midnight struck
St. James’s bells, and ‘Look!’ and then a swan 
Did swim across the moon and then, ‘Good luck!’
He cried, and in a puff of smoke, was gone

I sat there for a bit. A little weird
But then it is Devizes. Nothing new
He came along, and then he disappeared
As all the years are predisposed to do

Then I went home to bed. And when I woke
The sun was up, I made a cup of tea
And wrote down every word that he had spoke
‘Is nothing new. You’ll have to wait and see...’

© Gail Foster 30th December 2020
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Rocking

ROCKING
											———————————-
Perhaps near you, too?  Or
You may have a memory 
Of a one separate soul
To the side —
Young and staring ahead,
  Or an elderly life 
Over by the windowed wall, 
    Just beyond the group —

Rocking

…Not to any evident music; nor
In a chair made for rocking; or, perhaps,
Out on a porch’s wooden step; or maybe 
Sitting cross-legged nearby on the floor;
Or away, almost unseen
In a field of tall grass graced with sun;

                Rocking
                                                                                                       Immediately there on the edge 
Of a kitchen chair, rocking
As constantly as breathing
    In and out…

Not listening to the conversation?
Thus, not caring, it seems, about us!
Going on, on, gathering company 
From the tempo of rocking 
An interior transport
To some degree of comfort, which
(If we knew) we might
Envy…
But!
(How, surely…impolite!) 
Right there!  In our including
Space, so out of place!
As maddening as 
someone standing 
To crayon doodles 
On the chapel wall!

Recalling rocking:
The bright, lovely girl who did this
Rocking, everywhere, even
With her thumb in her mouth,
Up to age 12.  Oh, my!  
While adults kept snapping,
     “You’re not a Tot! Stop it!” 
At her from outside the motion
Of her inner pendulum,
In the rhythm of 
The seeking and keeping
Peace…The ebbing and flowing of
Peace…balancing gravity
With hip-tipping inertia
That keeps the rocking working
On the aching, the trials, the noise…

Rocking, so like
Swimming the channel distance
Of the hours spent between 
Here and There.  Of night.  Of day.
Yet, to keep the dreams pouring forth
…Rolling in while even awake…
To refresh
As with the quenching 
    Power of Eucharistic wine
    For heaven’s flights within.

Rocking centers the pulse;
Clears thought;
Calls on the soul; and may
Find life inside lulling, 
To sing then string
All the collected moments into
A crystal necklace of 
Too rare calm.

———————————————————-
12/12/21. (c) sally young Eslinger
Thanks be to God!
Form: Imagism

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