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The Beautiful Days

When I think back on the tattered pages of my life, I find so much sadness and sorrow. But there was a time way back when life was truly perfect, before Susan was killed by a truck walking home from school one winter day. She was six and I was four and we were sisters who were loved very deeply. Our parents were hardworking and wonderful to us. But that day changed everything, nothing was ever the same. I can remember quite far back, it seems amazing that I can recall being fed in a high chair, the train was coming and I had to open my mouth. I can still hear mother laughing when I got food all over my face. She liked to dress the two of us like twins. I was big for my age and Susan was small for hers. We were adorable, everyone said so. Many days we went for walks around the neighbourhood and sometimes we played in this beautiful wooded park that had a pond with ducks and swans. I remember we would put our feet in the cold water and shriek our joy. Sometimes we went to the beach dressed in our blue satin swimsuits and everyone said we were sweet with our shiny hair and of course, we adored the attention. I recall going to a fair with games and rides. We had ice-cream and candy floss and went on amusement rides. We especially loved the ponies. Once I was photographed by the local newspaper with the caption, "tot enjoys the fair," I still have that photo of me with a big candy floss in my face. We had dolls and teddy bears and grandma gave us a real tea pot and cups to to use for our tea parties in the back yard, she even made us peanut butter cookies, oh, it was lovely. Dad made us a little table with two chairs and a cupboard for our dishes. We would dress up in grandma's old hats and stuff and even invited the cat, it is a beautiful memory. Then Susan died and I had two of everything like clothes, teddy bears, dolls and toys. Life was never the same. _____________________________ March 31, 2015 Poetry/Prose/The Beautiful Days Copyright Protected, ID 03-658-687-31 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Golden Days, sponsor, Rob Carmack, Judged 04/2015 10th Place

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Date: 4/18/2015 3:22:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/11/2015 8:18:00 AM
Sorry for the loss of your sister and best friend...Thank You for sharing a part of your life, congrats BTW :)
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Date: 4/9/2015 3:08:00 AM
and though we grieve, we still find beauty in deep love.. how wonderful is this, constance!..my two brother passed on early as well... congrats on your shining win...
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Date: 4/9/2015 12:25:00 AM
Oh my, BW...such sadness for you, but you are so blessed to be able to express your hurt and sorrow so beautifully in your prose. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win. What a sad write!
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Date: 4/5/2015 4:58:00 AM
So much sadness. You find the strenght to write and in all it's beauty still I can't help but taste the salt buried deep in your wounds. These are the writes that true artists are made of. Yet again I can not help it when I shed a tear that rolls over where a smile should be.
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:58:00 AM
Touching Costance, truly touching.......I so know the loss of a sibling so young. May your inner self rest, knowing, "what you bind on heart, will be bound in heaven ' Peaceful days to come dear poet......Much love, james
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Date: 3/31/2015 10:38:00 PM
Really sad Broken wings ! Wonderfully penned ! Gl in contest!
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Date: 3/31/2015 10:01:00 PM
Oh, how sad for you to lose your sister at such a young age. I'm sorry for your loss, but the cherished memories you keep are beautiful...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/31/2015 6:38:00 PM
Such a sad sad story - you brought the whole tale to life with your vivid imagery - the line about you having two of everything made tears form in my eyes :-( Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/31/2015 6:27:00 PM
Such a sad sad thing. What tragedies in your life, Constance. Do you know the wonderful poetess here named Monterey? She also had her dear sister die when they were children, and she suffered countless other losses. I think it makes you both very strong sensitive poets!
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:16:00 PM
You had extra material but loss the companionship of a dear sister..I enjoyed reading your prose..Thanks for the visit to my page..This one reads like a winner..Sara
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