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Premium Member Twenty-Twenty

A brand new decade, now we face!
	Year Twenty-Twenty, let's embrace.
Pray our mistakes we can erase
	with better dreams to find and chase-
and stronger faith to grant us grace.

Let's relish life- slow down the pace-
	our paths of happiness, retrace-  
with friends and loved ones, interface
	more often now, for just in case-
tomorrow they cannot outpace.

Make Twenty-Twenty a showcase-
         a brotherhood with every race-
all hate, with love, try to replace.
	This country, honor, not disgrace-
united strong, support our space.

A brand new decade- now in place!


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: First Time Here - Monorhyme
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Judged: 01/15/2020
Form: Monorhyme


The Father of Lies

A week after Christ found me, I showed Him my back
I think now I know how the devil attacks!

Get caught in his net and your heart will turn cold!
Quick! Harken to me and don't say you weren't told!

He speaks like a poet much better then I 
He studied through ages to make up his lies

He will serenade you just as soon as he's able
He sings like an angel! Not a demon, an angel!

He doesn't come nigh when you're strong in your faith
But the Devil is patient, he watches and waits

He prides himself planning mistakes you will make
And once you have made one, he's right in your face

He's reeling you into a one-sided fight
He will tell you you're evil and he will be right

He wants to do battle with you and not Christ
When he finds you alone, he thinks: Isn't this nice!?

If angels defected from heaven to him
Than we cannot imagine the danger we're in

But we can go where he can't go, to the foot of the cross
Where our souls won't believe the accuser of God
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The After Effects

Swelling waters rage across the land; 
two foot, three, four…water-tantrum’s take their toll; 
capturing houses and cars.
The collection grows with every storm.
Tempests wage their war on unsuspecting trees and crops;
limbs whirl about the airways. frantically.

Four legged’s seek the higher ground for, safety’s sake; 
hurricane is a non-discriminatory beats; 
attacking everyone and everything in its path.
Whirling, swirling wind-tops, cut through land, neighborhoods, cities and forests; 
flinging debris like a child throwing a temper-tantrum.  
A spoiled brat in a rage.

Land will renew with time, cities will be re-built and birds will populate woods, 
forests and parks once again; provided that, 
hurricane tantrum does not repeat itself, too soon.
Nature’s children can be fussy and destructive to, 
people who upset the natural balance of things.
Everything that exists has a purpose; 
from the cockroach to the human.  
When each does it’s part, a balance is achieved.

Kill the rats off and the pests that feed off of them;
infect dogs, cats, livestock and even homes.
Frack-crack the earth’s crust-to-the-core and 
tectonic plates slide too far; 
carcinogens flood water and wetlands;
killing off billions of lives.  
Man, mammal, bird and fish…all gone.

Obliterate the trees and you obliterate oxygen; 
obliterate oxygen and you…extinguish all life.
The human beast has, an uncanny ability to do as,
they please; never considering the consequences of,
their actions.

It’s so easy to blame nature’s other children for,
human carelessness and mistakes;
Preaching about responsibility while avoiding it.

Premium Member Practical Uses For the Eraser

What in heaven's name would we ever do, oft' I wonder,
If not for the humble pencil eraser to correct our every blunder!
Plaudits to Mr. Hyman Lipman for his inventive intellect,
For patenting this mundane gizmo for our errors to correct!

A pencil eraser is also useful for musing bards to chew on,
While striving to concoct verse when their cleverness is nearly gone!
I've even observed folks surreptitiously cleaning both of their ears
With a pencil eraser that would cause alarm to an otic doc and his peers!

A weekend golfer's pencil is sans an eraser and for good reason I suppose,
Otherwise, with certain "adjustments" to their scores they would all be pros!
In this enlightened and technological age, correcting mistakes is much neater.
No eraser needed - just click a button on the computer called a "deleter!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
(© All Rights Reserved)

Honorable Mention in the "Rub It Out" Contest - June 2010
Form: Rhyme

Speaking Salvation

there's so much that you need to learn, i want to show you how,
i'm glad you understand my views, you can put them to practice now,
i didn't say it would be easy, some days you'll see old patterns rising,
but at least the light of truth has been shown to you, they'll  be no more 
compromising,
do you honestly see where i'm coming from? love can easily turn into infatuation,
do you see how deep your affections can get? it can block your concentration,
the reality of a situation can hide under a rock before your very eyes,
and no matter how hard you'de like to see the truth, the fantacy tells you lies,
i want you to live by my standards, i want to protect your heart,
people react sometimes with unintentional behavior, their views are not very 
smart,
there will always be more to face in your future situations,
but you'll handle them with grace and poise, i give you my sincere dedication,
keep your focus on me, keep me close to your heart, i'm right here by your side,
so when you feel the pressure building up, your mind and your heart won't collide,
this takes practice, but i know you'll succeed, and i know how much you love me,
the grace that i've given you will take you to new heights, and you'll put no one 
else above me,
what the world sees as shameful, your eyes see different, there's beauty in every 
soul,
and they'll see the beauty i instilled in your heart, your smile will never grow old,
you can't run away like you used to, your love grows for me in leaps and bounds,
the relationship you have gained with me over time has placed your feet on solid 
ground,
there will be no more sinking, you'll change each day in your behavior,
even while making mistakes, you new i still loved you, and now i've become your 
lord and savior,
people will see the difference, and now your doing it ultimately for me, 
you don't care as much of what others think of you, you know your heart my eyes 
can see,
if they happen to notice a change, you would give me all the credit,
these words you write upon these pages, i will author and i will edit,
you thank me all the time for this wisdom, on a daily basis,
your writing is not purposed for your recognition, you want everyone to receive me 
and read this.
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Sha'Carri

Do you know where I came from
Do you even understand the loss that birthed bronze and silver before the whole
Do you know discipline the way I had to defeat hardships 
I don't think you can begin to understand because all you see is 10 second clips
Then you think you can Pinterest clip my life like this fantasy board that knows nothing of the color of struggle 
Then they empty the clip of hate inviting others to assume I'm not human
I feel pain, I cry, I smile, I hurt, I love, I make mistakes 
But one thing is I'll always "Be Better"
No blackness could ever cover the shadows of the past, but I will take those lessons ancestors gave 
Knowing their gaze comes with darkness
"I'm not back, I'm better," I'm not black, I'm human, do better
I will never stop sharing HOW BLACK IS GOLD
I am woman, not less than, I am conqueror and warrior, so opinions are less than...
I know it looks easy, but you have no idea what persecution concreted this confidence 
Not to mention the ones before me
Florence gave healing to the nightmares that journey from Joyner
And Nightingale couldn’t repair some of this odium I see 
Yet you still say must be nice to be me
Well, yes, it is but not for the reasons you visualize
I be black woman meaning I be strength that comes from roots that can't be broken
I be everything working against the system
I be the beacon for hope bullets steal from
Better not blink because you may miss it all
But you will not ignore this legacy
So, I'll leave you with this
Sha’Carri hair flip, skin rich, sorry you just starting to notice 
But this glitter was gold long before I held it in my hand
My race was predestined, and I only run against myself 
So, for those who wear the same shadows know greatness sometimes looks like failure, hate, and second place, before it blooms 
p.s. black woman this one is for you...08/02/24

Premium Member Gaping Hole - Bt

Blue soul whispers 
nightmare toll on 
ice cold pier stroll

Date created and submitted : 3rd January 2031

  Contest : Bauk Than  - Than Bauk

Sponsor : Charles Messina 

NB This is a story of grief and loss.
Sensible language is a requirement for this contest.
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Form: Than-Bauk

Tell Me What's On Your Mind

What's on your mind 

What's on your mind 
What's in your brain 
Are there things 
That you wish you could change 
What's stored inside 
What keeps you going 
Let the positive mindset 
Keep on Flowing
You have a vision 
That you can seek 
We make mistakes 
Just don't repeat 
Repeat what's not good 
We all want to be understood 

Tell me what's on your mind
Ask and you shall find 
Tell me what's on your mind 
Ask  and you shall find

Tell me what's behind the laughter 
Is it the lectures that the pastor  
Gives 
In time, you will see 
You can be in the universe 
Break generational curse 
Spit lyrics to a verse 
That you didn't even rehearse 
If you start to think 
Will you put your plan in action 
Or will you let it be a distraction 
Add multiply divide 
Become a fraction 
Find the least common denominator 
You don't have all the time in the world 
How can you make it greater 
Put your mind to it 
And start to excel 
If it's in you 
Keep trying 
Your brain has so much for others to see 
Don't be afraid 
Let It be 
You are amazing 
Yes 
Keep giving it your best 

Tell me what's on your mind
Ask and you shall find 
Tell me what's on your mind 
Ask  and you shall find

Tell me what's on your mind
Your mind 
Seek and you will find
It all comes in time 
Tell me what's on your mind 
Keep God first never give In 
You are destined to win 
(Repeat 1x)


Tell me what's on your mind
Ask and you shall find 
Tell me what's on your mind 
Ask  and you shall find

Repeat until chorus fades 

Written by Concetta Hardnett 
07/10/2023

My toon

I don’t like the rules,
So I just won’t follow them,
They make writing all dry and stiff,
Tasteless Weither it be bitter or sweet,
“Flaws”,
“Mistakes”,
“Sloppy and disorganized”,
That’s how humans are just like,
Just like my poetry and writing style,
Humming my toon as I walk and dance,
You start to notice when you read my work,
Its the Varry toon of someone living and experience,
Once you read this I hope you see,
I pray you hear shat I hear,
The stars of dreamers shining bright,
The cries of the appressed by oppressor',
My style,
My technique,
My varry existence,
MY SHINING SOUL,
It can be mocked and talked down to,
It can be broken down by oppressors,
But even so I’ll write till my last word,
I’ll write till the name Dragonstar means something,
Until my style less  style becomes a statement.
Until my toon is Hurd and Agknolaged.
-Kitsuko Dragonstar 
,

The Widdler


A knife lie in her bed, her hand rests atop the hilt.

The satin maple bed frame lie bare beneath her fingers,

And the aliferous knife lie skin warm in the cradle of her hand.

A pile of gossamer shavings grow on her sheets,

Surrounded by splinters near her pillow-
concealed by soft down.

She awaits the conception of a fish,
Sat in the pillar of her crib.

She pictures she’s an old wiseman, with an Appalachian drawl 
Widdleing on his back porch- rocking on a pine chair 

The bones of her fish turn crimson-
A red herring 
The laceration in her thumb lolls a bright serum

She was stopped by worry, but then she recalled-
That’s what the knife was for anyways

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