Howard Kerr Poet Than-Bauk

Gaping Hole - Bt

Blue soul whispers 
nightmare toll on 
ice cold pier stroll

Date created and submitted : 3rd January 2031

  Contest : Bauk Than  - Than Bauk

Sponsor : Charles Messina 

NB This is a story of grief and loss.
Sensible language is a requirement for this contest.
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Total # Syllables:	12


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Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2025 at 8:15 PM I really like this and the short forms you used. A very belated congrats

Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 5:12 AM Wow! Had to reread several times to get the affect! Worth it! Congratulations!

Charles Messina February 15, 2021 at 9:32 PM Nicely done, Howard. Congrats on your win!

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2021 at 4:43 AM Way to go. Enjoyed reading your icy stroll. Thanks for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara