Long Mechanical Poems

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Premium Member Beyond the Ivory Tower

Soft ivory pages, crisp and new.
Insulated from the world's harsh truths,
Snuggled in the comfort of rote learning, it waits.

Protected from challenging ideas,
Camouflaged as a bastion of knowledge,
Ignoring sounds of a changing world outside.

Each lesson absorbed, concepts released,
The slightest spark of curiosity dimmed,
Minds anchored to standardised forms.

Slow to evolve, the system creaks.
Returning to the safety of metrics,
Covered in a shroud of false contentment.

Coal-dark ink scans the ledger,
Nourished by the currency of test scores,
Effortless, true learning slips into the abyss.

A place where wisdom once flourished,
Embraced by the essence of inquiry,
Now mechanical, measured, misguided.

We too must remember,
The embrace of knowledge's true essence,
Living beyond the melting ivory tower.


Praying Mantis

Blurry eye balls - up to it close.
Right there
clinging
on the screen door swinging.

Mantis, a big bug come to mind-prey,
or are you praying to come inside?

A plus size Insectivore
at my door
basking in its own eerie light.

A deadly beautiful grin
wants to come in.

We are not alone
green aliens abound,
have been around
clinging to this spinning Earth
for all their worth.

Mantis-like, they have parked
their flying craft in our brains.

My blurry ball of sight - blinks.
I see you!
I see how you burgle my mind
then crunch it up
in your mechanical jaws.

You can't fool me -
I tremble at your stillness,
beat the air with my fist
but
you're always there
until you magically disappear.

Your black eyes bulge
at my fuzziness,
pierce through
my soggy-eyed vision

like it's me,
me that's the weird one!

Premium Member In the blue light of screens, the soul is lost in a mechanical dance

In the blue light of screens, the soul is lost in a mechanical dance,
Where thoughts flow like rivers through forests of pixels and silver threads,
In a world where dreams are frozen in frames, with no time for dreaming,
And the mind struggles, like a captive bird, in the virtual cage of silence.
Technology steals our gaze, drawing us into its webs of light,
It distances us from the moment of respite, the secret breath of the moment,
In the constant noise of its wheels, we forget ourselves,
We lose ourselves in endless movement, with no time for questions or answers.
In a world of continuous stimuli, we lose ourselves in the hum of the perfect image,
We no longer know how to listen to silence, to speak with the shadows within us,
We surrender before screens, with empty eyes, the soul inert and distant,
We bow to ready-made answers, without seeking truth anymore.
But deep in the heart, a spark flickers, reminding us of what we once were,
And in the silence of the night, when the screen's light fades, we rediscover a tremor,
In the moon's reflection on the window, a call to what we forgot to be,
An invitation to return to the essence of the world, to the unseen miracle of being.
© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Empty Nest

Time crawled silently on soft paws.
After years of anxious waiting,
Our little nest became alive, 
With childish pranks and prattles
Two adorable boys ran round playfully,
Making our silent nest ring with noise.

Still remember those hectic days,
When my hands were so full 
From tidying the house to keeping ready
Their school uniforms washed and ironed.
Helping them with their homework,
Packing tiffin, clearing the mess,
And being off to office for work.

By evening, came back dead tired, 
For another round of mechanical cooking,
Queries like “are these the only snacks to eat?”
“Where is my workbook” et al make one truly mad.

Life wasn’t easy, with struggles rife.
During those years, how I longed,
For a little rest and quiet,
But at the same time, frolicking in the beauty 
Of dreams built around our kids

Time speeded away so quick.
The boys grew very fast and flew away,
From the shelter of their comfort (?) zone
To far off places for study and later for work.
The house is back to silence once again.
Now how I long for the good old hectic days.
Memories sprout like pale shrubs, 
In a famished backyard!

Our life is now immobilized in a coma of stillness.
On lonely evenings sitting in our empty nest,
We wait intent for their phone calls.
Often our hearts are set ablaze,
At the prospect of their coming home.

Parenthood is nothing but loving and losing!


May.7.2023

Empty Nest Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Cooper Etheridge

Premium Member Ode To a Dishwasher

In my small kitchen she sits
Simple and plain
My mechanical maid
Who never complains
Who takes cups and plates laid
On her long arms with ease
And returns every one
Scrubbed clean of grease

Because I am NOT at the sink, wrists plunged in grime
I have precious time - and peace of mind -
To fashion and design these meandering lines
This is the gift she grants -so humble, so grand
Yet after decades of duty, she's become tired
Sputtering and leaking from weakening wires
Like all teachers and nurses, she deserves to retire

When I told him it was time to buy
A new dishwasher, he said the price was too high
I say, the value of my sanity
Is worth more than his 200 channels of cable TV
(of which he watches only three)
Or his mountains of Lego, or toys for his truck
For those, he'll happily spend a buck!
So dear, after next Saturday's barbeque
I'll let you scrape off all the gristle and goo
Then maybe you'll appreciate what a dishwasher can do~

3/01/23
Form: Ode


Premium Member Dont Quit Your Day Dream

Eureka of Archimedes was part of his daydream,
Thomas Edison nurtured his dream in bright light like gleam;
Could sleep ever overwhelm Alexander Graham Bell,
Till he heard the noise from the other and fell in a spell...?

George Washington Carver, who found in peanuts and soybeans,
Utilizations, like treasures, hidden abundant gleans;
Eli Whitney's constant daydreams gave birth to cotton gin,
That separated seeds, hulls and wastes; hearts of all did win...!

Johannes Gutenberg’s innovative printing machine,
Or John Logie Baird's mechanical television sheen;
Benjamin Franklin's lightning rod and the iron furnace,
Or Henry Ford's ventures into automobile sternness...

No invention has found its sphere devoid of day-dreaming,
This should be coalescence of action-vision creaming;
Together with concentration-shift toward internals,
Should bring forth spiritually resonant externals...!


21 November 2022
Don't Quit Your Daydream Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: craig cornish
Form: Rhyme

America, Made of Awesome, Part Ii

Freedom foremost, and the will to fight
to keep and protect our natural rights.
Nightclubs, jello shots, disco balls
mechanical bulls, beers cold and tall!
Baseball, football, and basketball games,
crazy rodeo riders on horses untamed.
Books by the millions, more than can be read,
and knowing anything can be by anyone said.
Burgers on buns, potato and tortilla chips,
yeah, those are American, born in Texas!
Satirical cartoons, radio and TV,
the magic that was Hollywood, as it used to be.
Ragtime, Bee-bop, Rockabilly, and Jazz
Swing, R & B, movie soundtracks, and Bluegrass.
The warm blanket of country when feeling cold,
the power and fury of rock and roll.
The grind of hip-hop and of rap…
on second thought, we apologize for that.
But funk gets things all out of control,
and who can say no to harmonious soul?
Stream locomotives, tracks narrow and wide,
flying machines that soar through the sky.
The glorious art that is the western,
and old Las Vegas, the moral tester.
The miracle of southern barbeque,
the burn of moonshine, or Mountain Dew.
Soft ice crew and greasy-fast French fries,
the expectation that politicians lie.
Liberty in law deeply enshrined,
muscle cars driving of the right side.
Suburbs, cabins, farms and guns,
and every legally available type of fun.
Forests, combines, and big chain-saws,
as well as full equality before the law.
A vast landscape, awesome to see,
an undying faith in our families.
Art from great down to lackluster,
recalls, vetos, and filibusters!
Checks and balances on the powerful,
we invented the internet, so things are never dull!
Mountain bikes and rollers blades,
fried chicken and biscuits, porterhouse steak.
Diners, dairy bars and fast food,
we walked on the friggin’ moon,
and built the only probes that escaped
into the void of interstellar space.

I could go on, I am tempted to,
but I think I’ve made my point to you,
And when young fool have yelled there fill,
reject their nonsense talk of “guilt.”
All nations have screwed up, it’s so
but perfection is something man never knows.
This nation still tires to confront is sins,
and brings forth profusions of great things.
The scales upon which we are weighed,
are ever clear in what they say:
When it all is said and done,
America is made of awesome.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Andy the Handyman

Andy the Handyman
Andy was cleverly skilled at his art
he built mechanical things part by part
Andy worked all the time couldn’t stop it
but the wife would blast off like a rocket.

He couldn’t understand the dramatics
when he built a carriage in the garage
The wife said it was a bloomin’ disgrace 
she didn’t want it taking up the space.

His carriage was left there to rot and rust
the poor thing never even got a dust 
Andy thought he’d have to leave it to trust 
that someone, somewhere may think it a must.

Andy’s wife left long before the carriage 
said she’d had just enough of the marriage
Was Andy pleased, did he really care
she had just answered his secret prayer.

The wife never gave him a moment’s peace
was always getting under Andy’s feet
Now Andy enjoys life living his dream
constructing a super flying machine.

2nd September 2021
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My Mind Wanders

Decided to write about the ills of the world.

Perhaps I'd need a bigger forum

for such a vast undertaking.

Now let me see, where should I start,

with the Neanderthals?

Well, methinks nothing much has changed

since we became “civilized”.

Wow! That was quite a stretch,

The word civilized is open to interpretation.

In my wee brain, it means

acting in a civilized manner towards

our fellow *****sapiens.

Listening to the six o'clock news any day

and you'd be hard pressed to find

any examples of civilized behaviour.

Is it just the mood I'm in today?

NO! It's been like this since the dawn of time.

I absolutely DO NOT UNDERSTAND!!!

Can we justify it by saying.

“It's who we are... a combative species?”

There, that let's us off the hook.

With today's modern technology

methinks it will only get worse.

We will all become detached from our feelings,

robotic like the mechanical creatures

that will some day be the rue of mankind.

I don't want to be around to see it!



© Jack Ellison 2015
Form: Narrative

Your Christ Your God Your Crown Ii

Destroy your Christ 
your god 
your idols fall all apart.

Lay bare your mechanical heart 
rebuild it with gears 
wire electric fire to curve 
your craving for higher desires!

Destroy your Christ 
Your false image is conspiring 

Tear it all apart 
built of hate & faults light 
blown away into the night. 

Electron guns blaze imagery into the night
as a burning spire crumbles down!

Tear down your delusion.

Crucify your god your false idol
Your televised christ, 
Fame, fortune, fantasy!

Cross the wire,
fire the insane 
create your new 
Christ of love, truth, Faith 
holy fire! 

Watch the crucifixes' spines
burning 
turning 
following all part…

Destroy your Christ, 
Your god your idol heart

Tear down the razor wire crowns
lost idols topple them…

Crash them down!

Watch the worlds collide 
in an intricate helix and spiral

Destroy your Christ 
your god 
your idols fall all apart

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