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The Moment

If anyone had told me that it would be so, I would have tell them no.If anyone had told me that it would be so
I would have ran away long ago.I just cannot get rid of this unsettling feelings that has my spirit reeling.I just canmot get rid of this uncomfortable feeling that keeps
My heart blazing. Here I am this Sunday evening nursing all types of wounds.Somethings that is bigger than me
Is making my spirit weary and I just want to go before I feel low.It is the dirty energy that is moving around the town, it is the force around that is causing me to frown.
Something has broken my heart that makes me feel ashamed.If someone had told me that it would be so, I would have get up and go.If anyone had told me that it would be so, I would have run the last leg of the show.
The tears are bursting out my eyes and it makes me want to cry but the tears sits on top of my shame and
There is nothing to gain.The men are galavanting up and
down the street in white shirt and shorts wrapped around their thin behind.Little fellow and big fellow with body twisted and melted in jin look at me with a subtle glance  they seems to be having fun,and the peanut man sitting on the corner, with the sound of the steam  making a whistling sound all around the town.And the steam shooting up in the air with a message that is dear. The evening is just settling in and the town is going to pay for its sins, the night is coming alive once more and  everyone is sitting in their cars Mini vans without a plan and taxi men without a band speed  franticallty up and down the street.Private cars of all sort roll up and down the street in the dark rolling dice.
The will of the soul is burning in the glow and the mad men are enjoying the show.The spirit of the weak is wandering around the street and my soul is whispering something that is very deep.And when the night is done
You have to walk quietly with your hands on your knees
With the hope that your journey will be complete.
If anyone had told me that it would be so, I would have
pack my bag and leave long ago.The moment is finally here when the night will bear its bosam in its womb.
I did not know that it woul be so.
Form: Narrative


Magical Imperfection

Wind roams around bare footed
Her loose grey hair weaving every minute

A waning gibbous moon raising, at 11 in the East 
For the beings with Heart, it is indeed a feast. 

Incomplete, strained yet mesmerizing 
It's silver light enlights everything in perfect timings

In pindrop silence, under an old tree, I sit
Tiny shadows of leaves cover me like a porous blanket 

Half open buds dance beside me, surely not serene 
As if they too are under the MAGIC OF THE moon

MOON'S MAGIC___ heard that in such magical nights
Fearies, witches and jinns too decend to Earth from skylights 

And have kidnapped princesses as well in the past 
Ah' what if they land here and take me to "KOH E KAAF" 

OmG! I don't even know any prince charming 
who would fight for me, and rescue me while smiling 

Oh God what should I do.. ?? 
I am in problem under the dew

Hang on!! ___I'm neither princess Zaibun Nissan nor Neelum
Then why would they try to steal my freedom

Relax! now I can look at the stained yet magical moon
It's perfect moon light and leaves' shadows playing tunes 

Why on earth her silver light is having no stain, why so perfect
When the moon herself is half almost 

Perhaps little Imperfection is a must
Or you will be like a sun

Perfect, mighty, complete, with golden rays 
Yet no body stare at him for hours... Bizarre? 

Beauty is Imperfection... 
And its yields are always beyond perfection 

Now I must go
Before a witch or gennie say to me hello! 
                   ___________________

09-18-2020 ~Paghunda Zahid
P. S: KOH-E-LAAF (Koh e qaf) in eastern methodology is a mountainous region where jinns(gennies), witches and Fearies are supposed to live. 
Princess Neelum and princess Mehrun Nissa were two princess from different ages. They were as beautiful as Halen of Troy, and both were kidnapped by a powerful jin who caged them in a dark castle somewhere in the mountains of Kohe Kaf. They were later rescued by a prince.) 

(penned it in urdu last month, thought I should try in English as well... So here it is)
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Winter Sonata

"If you're really in love, appearances aren't important. The best house is the one you build in each other's hearts."
Jung Yu jin

Autumn's alliterations amplified an acoustic of death.
Stillness of internal instrumentals silenced my acapella. 
Words like wildflowers withered in winter wickedness,
without voice or verse I vanished behind a visible veil.

I was like a lifeless crystallised burnt sienna leaf,
as bitter breaths froze my brittle soul's ink.
Fatigued fingertips trembled from numbness -
without a purpose upon a speechless stage.

Afraid of crisp crying rain, which fell like a refrain.
my summer eyes turned amaurotic.
Life resembled a blank music sheet,
among an abandoned piano covered in iced cobwebs.
In solitude my music remained unwritten,
as I slept in a shivery silent slumber - tone deaf,
finding fading apricity in stolen daylight.

Until a silvery silhouette appeared. - sparkling.
Placed my hands into her warm glove-like hands,
wrapped me in an emphatic scarf-like embrace.
Her rose gold lips echoed in Orphic tones,
reviving my somnolent mute muse.
Blessed with vibrations from her vision,
senses awoke to rhythms of her heavenly harmony -
strumming an enchanting lover's lullaby.

Were you a gift from an orchestra of operatic angels,
sent to place hymns of hallelujah deep into my heart?

As her mystical mystery began to unfold.
In union our lyrics amplified into a rhapsody of romance.
Vibrant tunes from her intimate strings composed a
seraphic serenade, as we drifted into a dream world.

Today,
as we dance under emerald velvet northern lights,
snowfall covers our paths like an ivory blanket.
Soft flakes, like pearls glisten under tinsel moonlight,
as we leave poetic footprints behind in soothing snow -
a chorus of constellations glow to the tempo of our glorious sonata.
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.

Lost

Previews were many for a series called "Lost"
The cast was extensive, oh what a cost!

Production gave, to the viewers, a plight,
When Oceanic 815 began its fated flight

Something went wrong, the plane began to fall
It crashed on an island, a mystery to us all

The passenger list was many, few survived
Eventually, we lost, some who were alive

Injuries were treated, thanks to Dr. Jack
He soon became the leader of the pack

There were families, sisters and brothers
We, soon learned that there were others

Attraction was immediate, when Dr. Jack saw,
Kate, who was running from the law

Conman, Sawyer set his sight on Kate too,
Poor Kate, she just didn't know what to do

With the heart of a killer, Sayid had skill
He could be a friend or just as easily kill

Hurley would prove to be a loyal friend
He came with a quickness to defend

Desmond spent years resetting the clock,
Until he ran away and left it to John Locke

People soon learned that it was a mistake,
To trust Ben Linus, because he was a fake

The Smoke Monster was The Man in Black
Then he became Locke, when he came back

Jacob is gone, yet he still hangs around
Claire was missing, now she's been found

When beloved characters met their demise
It kept the show interesting, I realize

Hero Jack is my favorite, yet I shed a tear,
For Charlie, Jin, and Sun, who were also dear

So many questions, will we ever find out,
Exactly what this Island, is really about

The series is ending, scripts are being tossed,
I'll have to watch repeats, or I will be lost!
© Karla Null  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Couplet

Pet

My son brought a one-year-old dog.                                                          He called her Jin, a golden retriever                                         
My wife and I didn't like the pet animals                                
But we were accustomed to looking after it                          
                                                                                                       She came near me when my son was out.                                     I touched her with a little doubt                                                She behaved very well with a bark.                                               I kept her in the kennel in the dark                                 
                                                                                               Likewise, She reigned as a ruler in the home                          Her tail looked like a bundle of foam.                                      She attracted the children by her fluffy hair.                           Her friendly tone mingled in the air.                                                                  
                                                                                                            I am always moved by her wagged tail                                  
And she became a part of our lives                                      Now-a-days she never goes out lonely.                                    She was accompanied by me only.


Lines Oan Pennen

Far tae the North hidden alang Moray coast,
Therr bides a little toon o which yin can boast. 
Wi a rid phone boax in pride o place mak a call tae freends an aa. 
Nae thing tae spile the view ower grey blue sea reflecting azure sky 
Rest yer mind oan Pennans lap bringing a smile tae yer mou'.
Sky ablaze with fire a glow as ancient as the stones
Ancients witnessed this cosmic fire thinking it was the gods ire, 
Hiding within circles of towering stone while druids chanted 
Smiling as they alone knew ,it was the voyage of the sun roon the wurld
Bringing the gift of life making crops grow at summers height.
Stillness settles over the sea and land, lulling all to rest and sleep, 
A flash o siller moon catching and painted by setting sun.   
Now the red of setting sun is painted over the sky,
Segou’s fly hame tae roost oan clifface steep an sheer, 
Till yince again at dawns rise  brichtens the sky again.

Splish, splash said the seagaus  yin tae anither,

Fur whit wull we hae fur oor supper e dey, 

said the ither ,Ah ken lets hae fish, 

Whit again replied the first ane, weel we aa ken that at Pennan ye allus get the 
best fush 

my but yer richt therr ma freen quick afore yon dolphins jin the queue 

C,mon n hurry get therr furst  an gie them the push.



Pennan is the fushing village wherr “Local Hero” wus fulmed.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Trust

Neither my dog nor I can walk that far
Really wish I had a car.
You see, I am still seeking my star 
It is not here
I fear
Gathering memories from days gone by
Even ones that make me cry
I have come far
Seeking that star
My legs grow tired
Thoughts of love keep me inspired 
All I ever desired 
Someone to talk to
When I feel blue
Growing old
I have been told
Is a part of life
Hard to avoid the strife
Looking for a place I might belong
Same ol song
Sitting here beside my dog Jin
Thinking of all the places I have been
Alone since I cannot remember when
Making my way
Towards a better day
So much beauty to see
What does it mean to be free
A refurbished heart
Gave me a new start
From the world I stand apart
Lost
Pain was the cost
But here I be
What a sight to see
Another day
Stumbling along my way
What can I say
Have came so far 
Seeking my star
Stepping past the moments meant to hold me back
Just life on the attack
One day closer to reaching my goal
I stand before you with a clean soul
In life I was tossed aside
From life, I guess I hide
Cause I have tried
To love 
To trust in God above
To trust that my future lies somewhere before me
A place I cannot yet see
But I go forwards 
Towards
A distant star
But it is ever so far
I sure need a car
Form: Rhyme

Come Fall In Love

My love finds a way to happiness
Lost my heart on the streets of Kaohsiung
Someone found my heart
She fed him, cared for him and save him always
Something attracting me towards those streets again
I found my heart sitting on the wooden table somewhere in Shoushan
It is raining
Some water from the sky and some from the lost heart
You will forget appetite
Try to make a place in someone’s heart.
You will love all forms of pain
Try to fall in love with someone
Your world of imagination is vast
Try to find your world in my hug.
Just try looking into my eyes…see!
I will build your path with my smiles
You are looking at me, but still I am not in your eyes
My dear friend! This emptiness is hard to stand
This is not right!
You are in my eyes all night; sleep dares to close my eyes
The one you prayed from your heart
Look carefully am I that one?
You will fall in love with the same passion
Open your heart and see
Were there enough chances for me!
You will forget the passion
Try to spend an evening with me in Qi-jin Island!
Wait on the street of love and see
I am removing the stones from your path
Should I listen to the heart or follow love
This is not the passion love deserve
You will forget love,
Just try to fall in love with someone.
© Litan Dey  Create an image from this poem.
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Premium Member With Such Longing

Inside a bamboo garden, where I followed a red-crowned crane 
an exotic treasure of another sort held me spellbound 
seated upon the lawn, a courtesan beauty there did reign. 

Guilty, I stood beside a Lychee tree, expectations of arraign 
but she smiled with cherry lips, in pale blue she was gowned 
inside a bamboo garden, where I followed a red-crowned crane. 

A delightful scene of refined Chinoiserie, created quite urbane 
Lotus flowers, Jin of bonsai, beside the paragon were found
seated upon the lawn, a courtesan beauty there did reign 

Exquisitely she sat, blush on her cheeks, fragile as porcelain.
I longed to caress her coifed hair, cascading and unbound
inside a bamboo garden, where I followed a red-crowned crane. 

I feared death, for when she beckoned my heart was being slain. 
I bowed before the Eastern goddess in whose beauty I had drowned
seated upon the lawn, a courtesan beauty there did reign.

Worthy of gracing a palace, she and the Chinoiserie shall remain
no longer will I find her graceful figure on the ground
inside a bamboo garden, where I followed a red-crowned crane
seated upon the lawn, a courtesan beauty there did reign.


July 16th, 2017
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.

Bts - the Best

Starting from the scratch 
To the best k-pop boy batch,
The whole world knows 
that BTS and ARMY are the best match.
They are seven living in 7 million people's heart,
Check the Billboard and you will always find them on the top of chart.

Jin is the best cook among all the bts member,
Check RUN BTS if you don't remember.
He has pretty face and many are his fan,
He call himself as worldwide handsome man

 Namjoon is tallest and he's dimples are cute,
He's the root of BTS and pillar of the group.

You cannot compare him with average
He's the best example how to be savage
In front of him no one can brag,
He's our Suga -The Swag.

Hope always stand with people in bad times
Thats why j hope is Army's sunshine

The most charming one who's voice is deep
Without listening to winter bear I don't go to sleep
Sometimes I imagine how amazing one can be
He's our good Gucci boy whose name is V.

He can do crazy mike flip
has smiling eyes and glossy lips
Everyone knows chairs don't like him
 He's our sweet little hottie jimin

He's talented and youngest one among all
Many Armies live only in the Jungkook world
Form: Rhyme

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