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Premium Member Run Through My Mind

Give me an idea that I can use
and built on for the future.
Run through my mind and find something kind
overlooked to help me to endure.

Give me fables and legends of old;
all the enchanted stories.
Find something kind and run through my mind
supplanting negative memories.

Give me not only wisdom to see,
also the courage to lead.
Run through my mind and find something kind
to say to my fellow man in need.

Give me all your sorrows and the pain
that you’ve saved from your brothers. 
Find something kind and run through my mind
with the hope that I can bring others. 


POETIC FORM: ZaniLa Rhyme
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ZaniLa Rhyme
The following is an invented poetic form for which I have written several examples over the years. The ZaniLa Rhyme is a repeating form with an inverted refrain. It is, in essence, a syllabic form created by poet, Jan Turner. It consists of at least three 4-line stanzas; or six per the original design. It has 9 syllables per line in lines 1, 3 & 4, with the 2nd line having 7 syllables. The rhyme scheme: ab (c¹.c² –Internal Rhyme) b. The metre for L3 is: /**/ … /**/
Line three is a repeating line throughout. It contains leonine verse, divided into equal portions (syllable count), separated by a conjunction (which might remain static), resulting in the nine-syllable count. The title is derived from the first half of this line. The same line is repeated as the third line in each stanza, but the two sections of the internal rhyme are switched around in each following stanza. Thus, the line is repeated identically in each uneven numbered stanza, and the turned line, in each even number stanza. In the example, I have written it in italics and boldface for ease of reference. 
Each stanza starts with the same opening words (underlined for ease of reference) but continues with a different ending which is unrhymed with any part of the stanzas—it is progressive in its statement and carries the momentum of the poem forward.
Form: Other


Premium Member Lost My Freedom Once Upon a Time

I took it all for granted. The sky, the stars, the wind, 
the flowers, the grass, the trees.
I expected to see my friends every day, 
it was boring, dull, humdrum, if you please.
In my mediocre mind-set, I was walking to a friends’ house, 
not enjoying a breeze.
Not paying any attention to the sky, the wind, 
the flowers, the grass or the trees.

When I am grabbed from behind, very hard and fast, a murderer’s plan.
I am wrenched off my feet, and thrown into a hard, cold, uncaring van.
Chloroform is placed on my face, and I think I am going to the promise land.
I am out like a light, at the mercy of a non-writing rock and roll band.

I awaken on a firm mattress in the corner of a dark and dank cage.
Hey! Long-hair yells, she is awake. Let’s make her write us a poem or a page.
I sit up and glare at the four identically dressed men whose plan in unhinged.
If they think I am writing anything for them, they should try and think again. 

You are our prisoner, one tells me, in a really snotty, uppity way.
Yes, you can have food and stuff, but you are going to definitely stay
Until you write some songs for us, and they better be a hooray
Or we can get rid of you, for we are musicians, and we do not play.

They kept me for six years, when I never saw a park, dog or the sun.
Caged in a day care center with a bunch of two’s 
would have been quite a bit more fun.
Wrote many songs, about a clever woman who tricked her captor 
into letting her run,
But she got caught up in their drama, 
this intelligent slippery songwriter of one.

For years I did not see flowers, trees, or anything I used to not see.
Beauty I used to take for granted, and not care about, 
obtuse, I could be.
I did not see the stars, the sun, the snow, the moon, 
or my maniacal mean cousin Lee.
Prisoner until I had written songs for them, 
magic number six hundred eighty-three

Written 3-23-2019
Contest:  Freedom to nothing is something
Sponsor: Deliah Ventura
Form: Rhyme

What Shall I Do?

Oh my God, these different ways,
Leads to your home.
I don’t know that is direct to you.
If you met me in a way,
How shall I recognise you?
What language do you speak?
There are different languages,
If I shall be unable to understand you,
Then 
What shall I do?

Oh my God, identically, 
There are changes and time is changing, 
Seasons are growing and dying,
Their merits and de-merits,
Also has changing my features.
You came centuries ago, if I believe,
What should be your new features?
What is your colour?
If you have different colour?
Then 
What shall I do?

Oh my God, it 's nice,
You are homeless,
Otherwise, a human combats for control,
And nobody cares for you.
You are a riddle for us,
That’s why we keep little patience,
The corrupt leader has fight for dishonesty,
If someone controls your home,
Then
What shall I do?

Oh my God, you cares for all,
You have equal respect and regard,
For all, worshippers and non-worshippers,
If you charged these criminals,
Nobody lefts behind to enjoy your forgiveness,
The prisoners never believe you,
They find the right method of worshipping,
They smudged for mercy,
When they ‘ll become free, never learns a lesson,
Then,
What shall I do? 

Oh my God, you are my faith,
I can worship you in my mother tongue,
I can talk to you as I like,
You understand me and I understand you,
You are only a creator, 
That controls this natural system,
I can enjoy my breathe,
If you stop my breathing,
Then, 
What shall I do?
Form: Verse

1972, Butcher's Corner

Painted ladies 
Platform boots 
Mini skirts 
Stockings, garter belts 

Low slung Vs 
Bubbling over with mottled mummeries 
Hanging around Butcher’s Corner 
On the hook 

The pray orbit 
Slowing down, speeding up 
Slow…gone 
Around a corner, back again 

Red car arrives 
A Tom tentatively 
Extends his index finger 
‘You’ 

Chubby whore saunters over 
Too much sass 
For that much ass 
She leans in the car window 

‘Head?’ 
‘Ten quid.’ 
He scans her lumps, ‘I’ve got five.’ 
‘Go on then.’ 

[We’ll be eating tonight] 

Opening the door 
Pushing the passenger seat forward 
Saying 
‘In the back, stay low.’ 

Ums and ahs; disgruntled, shamed 
Hard times, little pride 
Squeezing titanic thighs in-between fake leather 
Beehive head pressed to the back seat 

Familiar odors filling her lungs 
Milk, cough drops 
Shampoo, crayons 
Telltale signs of little ones 

Nostalgia boils 
Gulping, suppressing tears 
Shoving guilt from her nut 
There’s work to be done, no regrets 

Tires churn pebbles 
Arrival at Rubber John Alley 
Her office 
A life 

His zipper strains a loaded gun 
In under five minutes 
Dirty deed done 
Not even time to soft boil an egg 

With blind ego intact she declines a ride back 
Done for the night, enough flow 
Over the road 
Into the park 

To three little girls identically dressed 
On swings, dangling legs 
Ultra-white socks to their knees 
Giggling
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Dreams of a Winter Wonderland

My home is bleak this evening because of winter.
This outing was fun, yet I hunted faithful cover.
To deter us colds and to wear around the home.
Everybody precisely grasped the cold syndrome.

Snowflakes fall quickly from the lonesome sky.
Bettor isolated influence in the warm sway,
They carefully structure a shroud high ascending.
On top of the enormous, white-encrusted sapling,

I'm accommodated before my splendidly blaring fire.
Additionally, we're glancing slyly out the cold chore.
I long for these dreadful days to instantly cease.
Also, rediscover the initial wonders to increase.

I look longingly on our all-around enriched city.
I admire how much individuals celebrate pretty.
The adornments on the monstrous tree staggering.
Plus, I admire the sparkling star standing as leading.

Isn't it a specific time for one bettor year of progress?
I believe the world will gently ease unsteadiness.
Identically, every conflict will eventually evaporate.
Winter snowfalls and magnificent rainbows may iterate.

Written: December 10, 2021

Winter Wishes Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member The Tallest Tree

We all have two trees, growing within us.
Only one can grow fastest enough to weather the worst storms.
The master gardener plants the root ball, combines the mulch, and the top soil,
taking great care, to see the the two trees are planted identically.
Holes where placed, depth of the trace, sunlight exposure, and supportive rods, to withstand storms, are driven end and small saplings are securely tied.
One tree, the roots grow like wildflowers and cactus. Straight out, and shallow.
The other tree's roots grow straight down, and deep.
One tree's roots represent the building blocks, that attract the spirit.
They are, Kindness, empathy, forgiveness, and real love.
The other tree's roots represent, ego, prejudice, jealousy, and arrogance.
The master gardener, waters and fertilizes them the same, and monitors their growth.
When the time is right, the tallest tree is transplanted into a vessel. 
The shortest one, transplanted to a greenhouse, to grow to normal height.
The trees within us, are unique and have leaves like fingerprints. 
Once their height is accepted, birds seeking a place to nest, find their branches, strong and sheltered.

Premium Member Playing Hooky Showed Me My Power

Lee and I are identical twins. We look, sound, and are dressed identically.
It is 1958 and we are heading back to school from lunch. 
Sing-song Lee thinks it is a normal May day; I realize it has more potential.
We are not going back to school, I tell her.  Her eyebrows start to brunch.

She screams and wails, I have to cover her tell-tale mouth.
She is the dutiful one, but then I remind her of one thing.
I am playing hooky and I am not doing it alone, so I turn her south.
She shakes her tears off, knowing I have her; there is no more sing.

I have been the leader for a long time, boss of sister and brother.
Lee has no idea how to flip me for this role; I am firm like grandpappy.
We return to school later trotted there by our very angry mother
Who has switched us about six hundred times, and is not happy.

Why don’t you ever try and be the leader? I ask Lee, mad now.
I know it is because she is terrified of me, kind of gives me a wow.
She is way too afraid to tell me this, I realize as I shower. 
I sleep well that night, recognizing my ultimate twin-leader power.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Stone Twins Silent Laugh

Being an identical twin means you do not have a name
For the first eighteen years of your life but keep your happy heart. 
You are called “Hey, you, Twin!” or “Stone Twin!”
Except by your friends who are amazing and can tell you apart.

I could not wait to leave home, so I could wear my own stuff.
My identical twin wanted to dress identically, this was so tough.
I could not wait to get out the door and be called my own name.
I did not tell anyone I had a look-alike, who looked exactly the same.

Now we are older, and we get a kick out of dressing alike.
It takes us hours of deciding, because we can rarely agree.
I like clothes with words, a motto, or moral, or a monster on a hike.
My twin likes to wear florals, old people clothes that irritate me.

We have a twin laugh that is creepy. Our whole family rolls their eyes.
This laugh starts out loud but after a while turns silent, which is cool.
Silent laugh, our children say, not understanding or able to surmise.
That twins have a sense of humor that follows no sense or rule.
Form: Rhyme

Sitting On the Steps of a Church

sitting on the steps of a church
on a brisk autumn day
with nobody in sight
leaves are falling
birds are singing
it is oh so quiet,
and i am off work again tomorrow
once upon a time
a very special lady joined me here
then a very vicious monster quietly 
attacked her from the inside
today will mark year 16
i hold her favorite perfume 
in my left hand
bobby goldsboro is singing about honey
i too am looking at how big 
a certain tree has grown
we carved a very simple poem on there:
'equal love from two
will always reign true
when it comes from two hearts
made of identically similar parts'
that poem is on my mind when i give God Thanks 
for her presence in my life and her overall inspiration
to the man that i am now
though i still curse the very vicious monster,
i still feel Bless Everyday for the time, though brief,
that i was so very honored to share with her
aprecio tu amor siempre, mi dulce ángel.....
© Marty King  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Inconvenient Lives

Self confident
I would feel inconvenient
to be dead,

Yet relieved in freedom
from trimming toe
and finger nails
and receding hair
advancing down wrinkling neck
and softing shoulders.

Although not confident
I could grow
satisfied with fictional fame,
self-grandiosing glory,
I remain curious
how timelessly satisfying might emerge
historically famous fictions,
glories of grandly granted otherwise.

Confiding ancient secrets,
I could feel confluent
intuiting alive
resilience in freedom to survive
culture's soft-spoken rhyming terror
flirting with authenticity
of memory's patterned identity
and difference,
identically coincident.

Faith
masquerading hope,
Light
fading dual-dark air without
within

True life
camouflaging trust's pervasive love
Confident
I would feel false
to grow prematurely dead.

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