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Unflinching Soul

I am worried 
I am in despair 
I am tensed
I am in low spirits

My song sounded melancholic 
My thought turned pessimistic 
My emotion became lifeless
My life seemed purposeless 

My heart lost its rhythm
Cold shivers rippled my blood 
My pulse missed its beat
Vacuum nested every nerve of my head. 

I started my journey from somewhere to reach nowhere 
I found myself toiling in the sands of dreary nightmare
I continued my cruise on the shoreless ocean
Searching for a home in an unknown destination 

Life seemed to be a battlefield and I transformed into a weaponless warrior
Fighting with an unknown enemy for a mysterious reason

Tears were racing with the valley of blood
Anguish supplanted the graveness of a flash flood
Having fed with very little hope of survival 
I gravely waited for the life's arrival. 

Sailing unchaperoned in the gigantic world, 
I realised that life is a personalized game and the triumph embosoms the unflinching souls.

A Prayer For Mercy


When I'm down in the dumps 
And up against a wall 
Oh God, from afar hear,
To Thee, draw me near!

When I'm in low spirits 
Running high and dry 
Oh God, Look down on me,
Lift me up to Thee!

When things get out of hand 
And I'm shot in the legs
Oh God, take control,
Let me Thy name extol!

When I'm too close to tears 
Beyond any comfort 
Oh God, hear my cry,
On Thee, do I rely!

When I step into a miry path
And out of Your chosen way
Oh God, shine Thy light,
Give me Thy foresight!

When temptations make me fall
And unto Thee I call,
Oh God, have mercy on me,
And wash my sins off me!


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17.11.16

It Grows, It Shows - a Collaboration With My Sister, Sharon

My heart is like a red, gorgeous rose. 
It grows still in the glowing sun. 
It's like a newborn child or son. 
My heart is as lonely as a lake. 
But, there is no mistaking.
That my heart was breaking. 
Maybe I’m in low spirits for humanity. 
Possibly, escape is no calamity.
Escape from cruel reality. 
Now, that's a possibility. 
That opens up the doors of opportunity. 
Open up and it can make us truly free.
There’s no denying that our lives were close at stake.
My spirit within me begins to break.
It’s as if the sun’s shining another direction.
It shows behind clouds of gray affection.
My heart is far greater than poetry and prose.


Strange Sos

Once, in a certain ship that sailed
Storage of drinking water failed

Tossed on the salty sea so deep
Perplexed, the captain did never sleep

Filled with fear, he sent SOS message
To nearby ships expecting salvage

“Lower your buckets where you are”
‘The good word’ came from afar

Although the SOS sounded strange
He ordered, ‘collect water in this range’

The water so collected tasted good
Hearts abroad, rejoiced over that news so good

The sailor knew that a brook there did flow
With good waters to make the weary glow

The anxiety disappeared like mist
That’s touched by the sun’s fist

Extinguished faces lit up
Those in low spirits were lifted up

Today, examine do you like that sailor somewhere
Have a good word for someone you care?

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