Immobility Poems | Examples

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EXPLORATIONS

transformed
   harmony
manifold
in
  appearance

an
  unthinkable
    observance
steeped
  in
     sensibility

rigorous
intimations
  actualized 
in
   allegory
of
   deliberate
oracles
in
interpretative
   openess 
discrete
  &  unmistakable 

manoeuvred 
  immobility 
of
   single
      moments
pure
  essence
   in
     visual
        contemplations

Premium Member the door of uncertainty

seemingly undeniable certitude and conviction
handle hinges slats panels lock and key
maybe a cat flap for escape towards illusions

a trap door of revolving gates
sometimes we are framed by cemented beliefs
of what remains perspective and opinion

seeking for external validations
we fail to search for what is inside
stay on the threshold of immobility

minds need lubricating agents 
rust prevention or sometimes a chisel
to determine what certainty is

a conundrum delusion of impermanence
which steals happiness and adventure
of open-minded investigation

there are moments however
when we can crawl out of a window
or simply break through walls 

self-made incarceration is futile
and the chains shackling us
are the ones we crafted ourselves

painting oblivion

Painting of Oblivion

The canvas is uniformly white.  
As a screen depicts nothingness
And there is immobility.
 A red dot appears
When a mass of void moves
Into life in the form of a life
A beast or a man?
The mystery is no one knows.
Why this randomness occurs


Premium Member the world embraces me with silence

the horizon is motionless in its red and purple hues
snow-topped mountains are shushing us with silent lips
the immobility of this presence does not hesitate to bring stillness
I look into the water’s depths; all the wildlife must be sleeping

there is not one tiny splash; this well-worn dock placates me
this is a place for eagles, but no bird is flying; the air is soundless
a meditative place, a Zen place where I could sit and emote
so I do, crossing my legs on the edge of the dock, stilling my soul

a tiny breeze barely whispers her secrets onto my face; I smile
feeling all-powerful in this sacred place, loaned to me by the Master
thoughts I could have never conjured anywhere else come to me
I begin to solve my tiny problems as the world embraces me with silence.

Never Be Me

precipice

and the granite unmasked 

not my heart in immobility


Injustice

Disguise of righteousness

Not my soul in perpetual quake


Punishment

That which he doled smiling 

My body he forced, never will be...

me

space travel

Space travel 

When I can't sleep 
in the night
I close my eyes 
see a myriad 
of stars
some of them are red
but mostly blue
I continue my odyssey
through the galaxy
when stars  
are a rarity
and further away
a wall of nothing
a space that has
no ending 
a fear of a vacuum
ghostly immobility
where nothing matters
never did


Premium Member MIRO in his own words PT I

intuitive
  memory
a sense
   of
      form
in
my
  own image
expressed
thru
   colour
immobility
of
   presence

detaiiste
   reflective
      minimal
perspective
  contrasted
sparse
&abrupt

Premium Member Difficult life

Difficult life


Life is life, hmm, yes, if we are still alive
This is a question only, a question, what is life
And what's for, and why? Freedom or jail?
Independence or freedom?
I don’t know
I don’t know
This guy is just a simple thinker
Nothing else
But then the question is stayed, and no answer
Still no answer
Empty the answer’s box
And the life gone
And no answer
I am dying like a silly boy


No, that’s so far, so far
Death isn’t upcoming, my future is a flyer
Just fly
Hmm, so the life flyes

Flying, moving, walking, running, flowing, streaming, progressing, leaking
So, life is opposite of the immobility
So the move is the life



Not exists
In every moment life is gone



Life is difficult? 
How? 
I never get that
Always gone

Premium Member The Scream - Ekphrasis On An Edvard Munch Piece of Art

Oblong outlines of a soul
Stretched in elliptical misery
Redefines the perfect circle
To a breakable volatile tautness

Loosely cloaked in sheaths of epitonic blue
Draped upon the shrinking body to hide a terrified world 
Dressed in swirling ominous patterns of anonymity
To be lost within the deepest abyss of fatal fear

Planted like a tenuous girder of iron truth 
On a bridge of no return
There is no departure from excruciating fear
From this wicked self-imposed poltergeist

An unseen force deliberates death
Smothering with tremulous trepidation
Annihilating the essence of existence
With no bond found on common ground

There lies the secret
Within the mystery of a soul’s distress
The exorcism of human strength
As fear brings the will of life to a standstill

7-12-2023

Premium Member Covert Consciousness

Faint flame emergent from neurotransmitters.
The brain, a torch arranging patterns of awareness,
patterns of recall, encounters, adventures, and ordeals.
Covert consciousness realized in coma patients,
detected in vegetative invalids by the analyzers
of EEGs,  the probers of the mind.

Bedridden with no signs of life,
These sufferers were long thought braindead.
The only question; when to withdraw life support.
But our deepest traces do often linger with immobility. 
Our hardly perceptible scintillas send measurable signals.

They offer no bodily changes, no responses to cues.
They never give themselves away in behaviors.
Yet, science now knows them as genuine.
Are these the souls and ghosts felt by our ancestors?
Are these the wraiths and apparitions feared
by so many?

Created from the temporal, assembled from
life, is their structure entirely in the mind?
Maybe part of their energy resides in other realms,
places in and out of which they drift at our death.

Accepted for publication: The Opiate Journal, spring 2023

Premium Member Winter's Agonizing Beauty

Peaked out and everything was covered
White—some things totally invisible—visioning
Helpless immobility burdens, once always conquered:-

Background sunlight caste dull-white shadows
Across whiten, once pale green grass groundings;
Where excited dogs have left frozen scented footprints.

Wow, who would have imagined that warm yesterday
Was, as if fall had challenged winter to show her cold face?
Well, weary winter just burst out in all her agonizing beauty!

And now, here we sit in an even more distancing atmosphere
With its own chilling pandemic overtones of melting running water
Wetting wishful dreams frozen into no-show-snow, slippery tomorrow!

She Came From the Sea

she came from the sea
a determined wanderer

he stood on shore
rooted to earth

she washed over him
filled with highs and lows

his legs were thick trees
unmoving, solid
his chest withstood all
remaining staunch and firm

his immobility angered this female
she attacked him with fury

the depths of his understanding
held him emotionally sound
as her torrent broke over him
scattering in fragments at his feet

covered in her muck
he stooped down
lifting the woman safely
  above all turbulence

he cleansed them both in ocean waves
carrying her the whole way

when clean
he righted her
stood back
asking if he could do anything else

she asked for forgiveness
turning for home

he caught an arm gently
inviting her to stay

so began the story
of two opposites cleaving
    one to the other
night and day, moon and sun
for the rest of their lives

Painting of Oblivion

Painting of oblivion

The is uniformly white
A screen depicting nothingness
There is immobility.
Occasionally a red dot appears
When the mas of the void is moved.
Into the form of life
A beast or a human?
The mystery is no one knows
Why does randomness occur

I Wish Expose All Beauty Existent In the World

I don't ratify this fake party,
I intend to rid it of failure
to the glory...
I don't approve immobility
of our friendly relationships...
I wish warm beds,
and fire in love...
I don't appreciate life
painted in pictures on the walls,
Desire to paint the story of life...
It's not enough for me to contemplate
beauty sparse...nature dead !
I wish to expose the total beauty
which exists in everything... !

Wish You Were Here

They say -
 she's in a better place,
I know it's true 
 with all God's grace,
 those last few years
 were ..., well, you know 
 full of tears
how you suffered so, 
 never once complaining,
 the stroke, the memory loss, 
 unable to see, the darkness gaining
 the immobility, the endless pain, 
forgetting me;
God was kind, compassionate, 
 loving to set you free
 calling you home despite my tears
 but for myself, 
I fear
 I miss you every moment, 
   wish you were here.

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