the door of uncertainty

seemingly undeniable certitude and conviction
handle hinges slats panels lock and key
maybe a cat flap for escape towards illusions

a trap door of revolving gates
sometimes we are framed by cemented beliefs
of what remains perspective and opinion

seeking for external validations
we fail to search for what is inside
stay on the threshold of immobility

minds need lubricating agents 
rust prevention or sometimes a chisel
to determine what certainty is

a conundrum delusion of impermanence
which steals happiness and adventure
of open-minded investigation

there are moments however
when we can crawl out of a window
or simply break through walls 

self-made incarceration is futile
and the chains shackling us
are the ones we crafted ourselves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Crandall Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 6:20 PM
interesting poem..."the chains shackling us are the ones we crafted ourselves"!
Alex Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 6:50 AM
"a conundrum delusion of impermanence" - A grand metaphore. A beautifully written poem. Congratulations!
Neumann Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Thank you so much. Kind wishes, Kai
mysore Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 3:51 AM
Refreshing write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Neumann Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Thank you very much. Kind wishes, Kai
Ibeh Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Kai, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this poem of profound depth and intelligence. I really enjoyed it!.
Neumann Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 12:17 AM
Thank you so much. I enjoy your contests. Happy Easter and kind wishes, Kai
Goldsmith Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 11:42 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Have a wonderful spring day and Blessed Easter..........
Neumann Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Paula. I appreciate that. Kind wishes XXX
Empress Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 11:23 AM
Dear Kai, Your words woven here in such a profound manner emanates wisdom and understanding, acceptance of what life is and consequences of all choices sometimes we make. Especially in lines such as “seeking for external validations we fail to search for what is inside stay on the threshold of immobility” the depth in those words as well as the ending with “ and the chains shackling us are the ones we crafted ourselves” one of those lines that needs to be framed! Couldnt have said it any better! Pleasure reading your poem! Best wishes for the contest! Thanking you also for my placement in your afterglow contest! Your prompts are inspiring and different! Sending you light alway
Neumann Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Thank you so much for your comment. XXX
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