Covert Consciousness

Faint flame emergent from neurotransmitters.
The brain, a torch arranging patterns of awareness,
patterns of recall, encounters, adventures, and ordeals.
Covert consciousness realized in coma patients,
detected in vegetative invalids by the analyzers
of EEGs,  the probers of the mind.

Bedridden with no signs of life,
These sufferers were long thought braindead.
The only question; when to withdraw life support.
But our deepest traces do often linger with immobility. 
Our hardly perceptible scintillas send measurable signals.

They offer no bodily changes, no responses to cues.
They never give themselves away in behaviors.
Yet, science now knows them as genuine.
Are these the souls and ghosts felt by our ancestors?
Are these the wraiths and apparitions feared
by so many?

Created from the temporal, assembled from
life, is their structure entirely in the mind?
Maybe part of their energy resides in other realms,
places in and out of which they drift at our death.

Accepted for publication: The Opiate Journal, spring 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 10/30/2022 2:32:00 PM
What we don’t know about after death ~ is infinitely more than we do, your verse perhaps taps into the realms of Biocentrism, you ask the big questions Thomas, and give hints towards some real answers, food for thought, cheers David
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Date: 10/30/2022 11:02:00 PM
You are very perceptive, David. Indeed, these are questions I have long pondered and find myself struggling to grasp in some form nearly every day. Thank you for sharing your insights about this poem!
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