Gimme A Break Poems | Examples


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The Beginning of a Different Angle

Evil angel why does you run from pain? 
Evil angel what is going on again?
Evil angel why do you fear the coin toss.  
Evil angel what would happen if you got tossed?  
Any outer, stout, pouting white powder, 
Could take you to some cloud? 
Gimme a break for crying out loud... 
Age will bring fables, 
Some despise those that lie. 
The next page will be stable, 
Yet you must still attempt to try, 
The force is unbalanced, 
But we aren't watching Star Wars, 
Sure, you have some talent, 
Yet, this next period will draw its sword... 

Eve must have heaved, bereaved, while leaving the lot...
A Dom realized the change when, 
They both fell fruitless when they got...
Caught up in it, 
Sick of it, 
Sticking to the , 
That only through the pits, 
One forgets, 
It is very, very sick, 
I quit... 
Tick Tok tick 
Just for another little bit, 
When the world gets twirled around again, 
Then sticks to the drip, 
When there are no more fits, 
While getting lit.  
...

Gimme a Break

You can break a promise, break a toy,
Break a rack in pool;
Break a tennis player’s serve
And even break a rule.

Break a horse to saddle up;
Take a break for lunch.
Break a glass (at Jewish weddings);
Listen to it crunch.

Break a habit, break a heart,
Break your back by lifting;
Break your neck and break your fast
And break a line by shifting.

Break up laughing, break-out stars,
Break out with some zits;
Break a losing streak and break
Your taffy bar to bits.

Break dance, break-up, break a bone;
Break a record – wow!
Break your train of thought, just like
I’m going to do – now!

A Sliding Slice of Precious Peace

Gimme a break, Drake
In the space I own 
In May, June or July to rake
In tonnes of peace without the groan

That serves no useful purpose
In the scheme of strategies I adopt
To rid my life of the toxic venom from the hind legs of your platypus
In circumstances and settings you co-opt

Cruising without aim into a dead end
From which I stray to preserve the serenity 
I earn in peace urns that mend
Fuses, plugs and valves in the sovereignty

In which I fly aloft
The rocket propelling me to Venus
Where in tandem with Hermes and Cupid I climb aboard the loft
Where love once lived in pomp and splendor until fuss

Turned the tables
Crushing hopes I nurtured
In my thoughts, feelings and plans sauntering on gables
I thought you and I cultured

With a view to consolidating pre-nuptial plans
We’d painstakingly built 
In the absence of adversity guns 
That vowed we’d never fight the good battle to the hilt.


Kit Kat

Gimme a break from the long day at work.
A piece of mind that doesn't fly by soon as it starts.
Not of discrimination but of a demanding boss.
Time but a snap of a bar.
Gimme a break from negative interpretation. 
In terms of being under appreciated.
A smile that encourages the rest of the day to come that much faster.
The commercial before we continue our regular scheduled programming. 
Gimme a break before our stature completely seperates.
If only for a moment. 
To savor a taste stumbled upon in bulk.
Complex in the pieces we give of ourselves.
Chocolate covered us wrapped in orange.
Fully appreciated in standout appearance.
The smile brought to my mouth.

Toothache

A little boy comes up to me
And said mister your tooth hurt
So I said yes just little
He had black hair wore an avengers shirt

His mother said leave the man alone
But he didn’t hear a word she say
He was the main attractions
Here In the dentist office today

He went by a Trinidadian lady
Who offered him a candy?
He shook his head nooooo
And said that give you cavity

Then he was back to me again
Mister you have very long hair
And he did not hear his mother
As she told him come over there

So mister if your tooth hurts
Will they give you a new one?
His mother said is he bothering you
I said oh no he’s just having fun

It’s silly how I end up here today
Guess I was too greedy last night
My stomach full but not my eyes
Just had to have another bite.

But who can blame a guy
For enjoying a well done steak
I know it was greedy of me
But I’m only human gimme   a break

I know it’s not broken
But you may think it’s dumb
I think a bone from the steak
Might have hurt my gum

So now I am here for hours
Still in a lot of pain
But the time is going fast
As this boy has us entertained

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