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Premium Member i fell asleep during Toy Story 5

we were bombarded for half an hour.
pepsi, popcorn and upcoming movies blowhard
gaudy and ostentatious and galling
my son asks, 'when is it going to start?'

jet-lagged to infinity 
i was woken up by an onscreen scream
or it might have been the last trumpet

after the movie i go to the bank and the
clerk doesn't know what i'm talking about
high time hoodang and deposited cash 
  
on the radio that morning the new prime minister
is applauded and cheered into number 10
he wants to shake hands with everybody in the country 

there are no birds in our garden

Galling Waggle

Galling Waggle reminds me of the Epstein's brobdingnagian files

The Coat Check Line

We waited for the coat check
Since our winter garb is bulky
And schlepping it around could make
Us feel a little sulky.

The Met was far from crowded
Yet the line was barely crawling.
We inched along impatiently;
As members, it was galling.

At last we made it to the front;
No claim checks were presented.
Instead, you tapped your number
On a keypad; none dissented.

When we were set to leave,
After a lovely afternoon,
We lined up once again,
Our crawl repeating much too soon.

But as we zipped our jackets up,
I noticed that adjacent
To the line we left was one where
Not one person was impatient.

For it was meant for members,
Which describes our situation.
Had we known about it sooner,
We’d have saved some aggravation.


Premium Member Un-known'

Un-knowing i write..Of un-known plights..? On a pightle
Of troth.' Against the bile.. Galling just those few.' Where
I come across.' The law is dead.' Salvation is instead.' For
A time such as now. He has fulfilled His vows.' Then a point
Will be reached.' All will be taken' all the heavens then to be shaken.' Nations will be lamenting.' Yet their sovreignity
Is taken.' Given to the vile ones.' The visceral spewing guile
Ones.' They smack all in the face.' Your tears show strong
The trace.' Of the power the abusers.' Who scorn the world
Who break and tear, yet who can? Dis-abuse who hears.? Or cares.?

Too Much

Sadly, she felt happy all of the time,
not a pinch of depression or anxiety
or any doubt, nor questioning
ever entered her life.

Of course this pissed off the rest of us.
She was impossible to put up with for long.
It wasn't natural, it was galling,
intolerable.

Kind?
She was very kind, helpful and ever attentive,
always considerate; it drove us crazy.

The best we could do is avoid her,
keep her at arm's length,
pray for her simple soul, commiserate,
try to understand.

Somewhere In Between


When Reality Hits A Homerun, Situations Get Real
Defending My Heart, I Refuse to Kneel
My Dragon, My Beast Please Help Me Heal
For The Rejection Was Not A Prescient Projection
Like a Tainted Injection
Creating Injuries to My Purported Soul
Damn Burnt Bridges, Forfeited Toll
Thank You For Teaching Me That Your Love Was Inconsistent
Causing a Galling Dent
Seeking Selfish Ambitions making My Feelings Irrelevant!
Went On Ahead and Ignored Telltale Signs
My Emotions Now Apathetic, Feelings Expatriated, Re-directed, Reassigned!
I Guess Life is Poetry, The Ups and Downs
My Story, My Song
Verses of What Could Have Been
In The Darkest Dark, In The Luminous Light
I Exist Somewhere In Between!


Premium Member Trapped by Thoughts

An eaglet raised with barnyard birds
will never soar to towering heights.
Though armed with wings designed for flight
It will never reach soaring height.

Thoughts are like wings designed to soar
They’re active every waking blink.
But how you choose to use your wings
can help you cope with what life brings.

So many souls are trapped by thoughts
Of worthlessness and “Never will.”
The hurtful words that they were told
like prison bars, their thoughts still hold.

Sad thoughts trap those who are depressed,
these thoughts like weights, press on their chest.
Dark thoughts like clouds hanging so low,
seem bent on snuffing out life’s glow.

Self-centered thoughts ensnare the vain
and bind them with a galling chain.
These selfish thoughts leave ugly scars
and traps the soul within their bars.

When men with minds greedy for gain
and thoughts of wealth possess their brain,
many do things that are insane
to satisfy their thirst for gain.
 
If you do not control your thoughts
 they will one day bind you with knots. 
  Let noble thoughts your mind adore
and they will make your spirit soar.

Premium Member BIRDS GATHER ON ELECTRIC LINES KEEPING THEMSELVES WARM Terzanelle

"BIRDS GATHER ON ELECTRIC LINES
 KEEPING THEMSELVES WARM Terzanelle "

Those the little birds warming themselves warmth
on standing electrical and telephone lines
together side by side one by one doth---
~
The bird’s stance summer breathless leaves
adjoining, aligned, snuggle so steadily
gathering amidst buildings homes, and eaves--
~
Giant rush of big galling winds so gust
 soar ever so high above skies freighting 
fluttering flapping of feather wings thrust
~
leaving flying in groups from grounds gaiting
talons feet embrace lines like humans lust
every so closed close in distance like dating
~
a mixed the couples birds pairing flaring
up so high tens of feet so very high light
above the somewhat warm grounds staring
~
beaded eyes nestled small birds encasing
shares bodily heat keeps from frozen plight
winter cold so the birds warmth embracing
birds on electric lines all day and night



12/23/2023
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2023©

Just Too Much

Sadly, she felt happy all of the time.
Not a pinch of depression or anxiety
or any doubt, nor questioning
ever entered her life.
She was just happy.

Of course this pissed off the rest of us.
After 10 minutes in her company
our sociable smiles would fall apart.
Anger would arise in us like a vengeful dragon.
She was impossible to put up with for long.
It wasn't natural, it was galling
intolerable.

Kind?
She was very kind, helpful and ever so attentive,
always considerate; it drove us crazy.
She was relentlessly optimistic,
'empathy' was her middle name.
Did she know nothing about this sad, bad world?
Did she ever contemplate all the hate?
Was she just bonkers?

The best we could do is avoid her.
Keep her at arm's length,
pray for her simple soul, commiserate,
try to understand.

Premium Member My Angel

Winter weather surely torments
Grey skies and rain I do lament
Dreaming of snow softly falling
Seldom happens it can be galling.

To wake and find dream come true
Snow white meadow what a view
Pristine, unmarked waiting for me
Worries dissolve experience glee.

Decided snow angel I will create
Arms and legs plough crystal flakes
All is frozen enchantment divine
In winter meadow I lay supine.

Day has been perfect got my wish
Glorious hours with nothing amiss
Saddened when Angel melted away
Memory's safe of a perfect day.


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Why bother looking at lists if you find them to be galling?
Frankly, I find one with such an attitude to be appalling.
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Premium Member Signs of the End

Prophets, Seers of YAHWEH tell me
what the end time signs will be.
Stunning signs in heaven you’ll see
perils pervading land and sea.

Stars of heaven like leaves falling
prophets false for worship calling 
famines, plagues, the nations galling
strife, commotion, mankind bawling.

Earthquakes, wars in divers places
People, awake, turn your faces
to the one who made the races
and bestows his saving graces.

When you see the signs in heaven
stars like leaves from heaven falling.
People, awake, turn your faces
to the one who made the races.

Premium Member When Deep Darkness and Shadows Race To Fore

When Deep Darkness And Shadows Race To Fore

Heartache is oft an invisible cut
Within the silent and deadly new field
Black boulders bring amidst deepening ruts,
Calamity, which oft one finds no shield.

Flung from sticky webs of hideous dark
Into the depths of an innocent soul
Unrelenting,  to make a galling mark,
Its newborn despair taking wicked toll.

What to do to stop such dark woe-some flow
Destroying past happiness with its veil
Injecting agony as a new show,
Whilst poor soul often slides past gates of hell.

Dawn's welcoming sun is no longer seen
Nor those bright golden beams that heart so cheer
As despair casts forth its shadowy sheen,
Lost hope, becomes sad shades of looming fear.

Robert J. Lindley, 
10-13-2021

Note: 
Sometimes the gate opens and dark invades..

They Took Him

They Took Him
By Sy Roth

They took him and squirreled him away.
Those Sophists, 
Deniers of the terror they could construct
Where he no longer saw the human side of himself.

Half man, Quasimodo of the bells,
Left stranded in the bell tower.
No one to call to
Tintinnabulation orphaned from humanity.

Left in his bed only to dream
Or bury his nightmares
Whisked beneath his bed in a heap
Dreams cohabited with the dust bunnies.

Silent, sinister hopes left tangled 
In a macabre kerfuffle--
Jacob and his Angel
In a struggle to exist.

They took him and he saw only this reality,
The ward in which he lived
A husk of humanity blown against a galling wind,
Crushed against unforgiving walls.

And he languished in his diapered world
Waiting for his eyes to heal
And his twisted lips to unfurl
Waiting to greet a new morn 

Away from the cycle of existence.

Wistful

Great thoughts once kissed my lobes
Before blank despair her flags raised;
And brimless hope reigned as globes
Of full-shining stars in glowing cased. 

Now see what dismal desolate shells 
Melancholy sulk where dreams stood;
Wherein arid future's unavailing wells
Barren gape amongst vipers’ broods.

Kind heaven upon my oblations smiled
Many long years dead when luck shone,
And winds favorably blew like lilacs wild;
Erst when juvenility lit bright hours gone.

Present times repugnant drown in bile
Hastily milked from some putrid reptile,
Their galling pungency outlasts high grit
Cowards laud in bold battles’ heroic writ.

If fair fortune's rotations should bring
A morsel of past’s elusive sweetness,
I’ll one dozen more grateful carols sing
Than did my lips under boyish harness.

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