Erratum Poems | Examples


kingdoms notes

You stole my far away kingdom
didn't say what for?
Said I didn't have the jurisdiction 
to grapple my own crown

The ice resurrects steely bacteria 
will our antibiotics endure?


I feel all elephantine
the piper is never paid 
My foot prints are all asunder
on ancient sanded dunes

My ship is sinking
The troubadour sings
The innkeeper perilously on the cliff yelps
some erratum does he detect

Premium Member Deliverance ---

over there..>
lost time leaking away

collapse not into temptation
grant me/us peaceful solitude 
deliver us/me from erratum
inert/confined/lost
entangled in a weary knot
buried in dusty debris
suffocated by icy cobwebs
burned & frozen
begging for deliverance
longing for liberation
yearning to be untangled
thunder over water
deliverance?

lost life leaking into the past
<..over here


Erratum

Mightily buoyed by cherished blood,
Brazen struts laxest wit undeterred;
And fair nobles her giddy vinos swill
Oftener than mild sips of ironed skill. 

Sometimes charmed by gilded gold
Slack sense glues tighter than truth,
Icing to death the latter's warm hold,
Though it be sharp as reptile’s tooth. 

Frequent wins heresy’s easy path 
Grand crystalline Heaven’s wrath,
And fleeting mirths procured thus
At last become unmitigated curse. 

Subtly hallowed by saint and priest
Sneaks warped reason’s sliest gist, 
Oiled by figures on oaths deponed,
Sentinels of truth in bold ink toned.  

Featherweight thinking finally weds
Strictest law under unspoken knots;
Neutering the former’s diabolic beds,
Desecrating the other's stern courts.
Form: Didactic

Erratum Domini

ERRATUM DOMINI

There must have been some terrible mistake!
A fault in records or in time continuum
Check my birth cert. for a counterfeit or fake!
They got wrong the name or date at very minimum

True I recall sleep in Morrison shelter for a duration
Ration books, powdered eggs and friend: ‘Al’ the young GI
But perhaps that was in a previous incarnation
To account for so much time passing by

Told my mental age and acts are immature
Though the body has moved on a way ahead 
My taste in music ends round 1994
And I like retiring early to my bed

But I’ve so much still to learn and yet to do
I’m not ready to tell the grim reaper: “welcome here!”
So it must be a non-fatal misconstrue
That I’m rapidly approaching my umptieth year
Form: Rhyme

The Grammar Years

The Grammar Years


On that train an hour ago, 
though he did not see me,
I saw a teacher I had years ago,
a proper man was he

who in the margins of my papers
wrote short sermons in a script
so perfect and so neat
they looked like samplers.

But on that train an hour ago
I glowed in exultation when I saw
his index finger pluck
a small erratum from his nose.


Donal Mahoney


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