The Grammar Years

The Grammar Years


On that train an hour ago, 
though he did not see me,
I saw a teacher I had years ago,
a proper man was he

who in the margins of my papers
wrote short sermons in a script
so perfect and so neat
they looked like samplers.

But on that train an hour ago
I glowed in exultation when I saw
his index finger pluck
a small erratum from his nose.


Donal Mahoney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 21, 2010 at 7:47 AM
I wish you a day of love, sunshine and inspiration beyond your wildest dreams Donal. Thank you for sharing your poetry today I got a chuckle from it. Love, Carol
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