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Erratum Domini

ERRATUM DOMINI There must have been some terrible mistake! A fault in records or in time continuum Check my birth cert. for a counterfeit or fake! They got wrong the name or date at very minimum True I recall sleep in Morrison shelter for a duration Ration books, powdered eggs and friend: ‘Al’ the young GI But perhaps that was in a previous incarnation To account for so much time passing by Told my mental age and acts are immature Though the body has moved on a way ahead My taste in music ends round 1994 And I like retiring early to my bed But I’ve so much still to learn and yet to do I’m not ready to tell the grim reaper: “welcome here!” So it must be a non-fatal misconstrue That I’m rapidly approaching my umptieth year

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Date: 4/29/2018 9:59:00 AM
I can well relate, Geoffrey, to how this aging of the body whilst the inner me is still in his 20's might seem like God made a mistake, but I expect He has his reasons , like curing our youthful vanity?. (Might I ask-- do the clues suggest you grew up in post-war Britain?)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/29/2018 10:59:00 AM
Thanks for your response, L.J. The clues don’t lie, but I have to include war years too.
Date: 4/20/2018 5:38:00 AM
I totally agree with Cecilia, and second her sentiments. An excellent poem Geoffrey, but show the Grim Reaper the back door please.....Maria :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:19:00 PM
I enjoyed every line :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/18/2018 4:40:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen.
Date: 4/17/2018 9:46:00 PM
Erratum for sure. The Grim Reaper needs a holiday. A most pleasant read, Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/18/2018 4:40:00 AM
Yes. Give him a break! Thanks, Line.

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