Eiderdown Poems | Examples

snow hiku

winter’s snow
is pillow-soft eiderdown . . . . 
fields pristinely gleam

Mad Dog

It was grandma’s last winter.

I watched her hurry outside
to split enough wood so her old kitchen stove
would burn through the new storm
she felt gathering
along the horizon,
its first eiderdown already afloat
on the twilight
settling over her white garden.

From nowhere
a dog tormented by visions
plunged through the drifts
and laid ahold of her leg.
She hacked half through its neck
and crawled to the house,
dragging the axe in her blood-trail
lest she lose it in the snow.

She bandaged her wound at the sink.

My breath frosted the pane,
and rubbing a hole
I peered through the gloom
at the scarlet peony
blooming ‘round the dog’s matted head.

The thickening whorl of snow
gently tousled its fur,
tucking it in
until spring.

Bed

Pillow
Eiderdown
Feather filled futon
Cuddly cozy comfort
Silky smoothly sumptuous
A lovely lavish luxurious lair

Lost in You

Im hairline
lost in the scent of you
delirious shared moments
yet under your eiderdown
lies a self centred heart
eagerly searching the next victim
I don't want to feel your pain
Id rather be a stream
that flats past your jaded chase
yet somehow prolonging my fear
you ve changed

Ivory Flakes

Pearlescent specks were sprinkles in a sky
that would have been dark but for the white
of those ivory flakes I saw
twirling so tranquilly down.
Swirls of serenity  -
those pearls of the night
filled me sweetly
with delight
before 
bed.
When 
I woke,
I looked out
my window to
see what night had brought.
While I had been buried
in dreams gone unremembered,
dull barren land of December
lay enfolded pristinely beneath
a beautiful argent eiderdown quilt.

thrush

The fledging  thrush appreciate
their Mothers rung
Fresh worms
Fleet less they aspire
to fly
Secure in nest
an eiderdown of feathers
they hang onto
every tweet
mindful their day will come

Deciduous

Deciduous 9-9-24
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Deciduous

Artic flares beat upon my dark cocoon
I come in silence to hide from the dark
To bind my wounds with sunlit afternoons
Wrapping my pain with loneliness, so stark,
In isolation like a sinful moon
Spinning silken petals, a newborn ark
Whiplashed by regret’s compulsive rune
And bear the weight of fear - forever marked.

From a single thread my world hangs upside down, 
A maze of anguish, labyrinth of tears,
Fluttering in restless desolation,
When a song of grace like softest eiderdown
Peels away each petal from nascent spheres 
To fall away from a new creation.

Halcyon

Halcyon – 10-6-23
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Halcyon

Across the still and placid lake
Halcyon drifts
 In misty cloaks of tranquility
   Stitched with twilight patches of contentment,
Bits of unbound moonlight
Bow 
      In courtly minuets
           On adagio waves
Then lightly skim the face of the shore
 With twilight fragments
   Of fading mauve
As velvet vespers of soft chimes
Calm the ghostly wraiths of torrid afternoons
           With dusky balms,
To slowly stumble into mantles of lavender’s eiderdown 
  Wrapped in shawls of gently rocking barcaroles
As doves and nightingales
 	Sing remnants of dawn and dusk
                 Into lyric seams of rounded swells 
Capturing serenity in the cloth of fading light
 Shedding calm shadows on untroubled waters.

The Bottle Garden

Humbling foliage, sprinkled in a bed
A quiltlike pattern, reflecting heaven’s eiderdown,
In notes, like a musician playing out the ballad
Restoring hope in pieces - in precious leaves,
Stems resolving to color the heart in reprieve
Heterogeneous knowledge in the awing power of leaves and stems,
Plants who live to silence every darkness – hushing
Even the pain and fear, awakening inspirations so rich and dear

An Undertaking

In the middle of the night
When everything is still
I awoke to hear a tapping noise
On the window sill

Tap, Tap, Tap
And tapping once again
I cowered under my eiderdown,
Hoping it was the sound of rain.

My imagination
Was running riot
Who expects visitors
In the middle of the night?

Can it be the Grim Reaper?
Checking up on me
Who could hear my heavy breathing?
And visited me to see

If it was time for the collection
Of another soul
Perhaps his nightly selection
Needed to reach a goal.

I was cold
Shivering and shaking
I wanted to be bold
But that was too big an undertaking,

Help me, please,
Where did that word come from,
Please don't tease
I'm not feeling fit and strong

I'm getting weaker
And this night goes on and on.
Praying that Grim Reaper
He has got tired of waiting and gone.

My heart has stopped pounding,
My breathing is steady
I feel warmer
And my eyes feel heavy.

Where am I?
I'm lying cosily in bed,
Oh, thank goodness
I must have dreamt that I was dead.

Maybe

I'd rock you in the crook of my arm until you fell asleep 
And read to you a fairy tale about lambs and goats and sheep
And when you stepped off into dream I'd place you on a bed 
Of eiderdown, and cover you and kiss you on the head
A kiss so tender you wouldn't know I'd even placed it there
And when you woke perfume from orchids would fill the bedroom air
Then I would sit down at your feet, guitar and scores in hand
And play for you sweet melodies until you slept again

Autumn Meadow

Dogwood leaves in shades of rust and Merlot
quiver in the first glow of  morning light
A squirrel dances with it’s own shadow
under a veil of Oak leaves in  mid flight
Trees dance with the magic of a Twelfth Night
Crisp air fills with sounds of Autumn birdsong
blue sky and stillness  sunlit days prolong
Suddenly leaves are whirling, raining down 
an orange afternoon sings a torch song
Still meadow rests in rustic eiderdown.

Write a DIZAIN poem on the theme of NATURE:
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Written October 26th 2022
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Autumn

I haven't had a smile in a long time
Autumn took my heart and its chime
Serenade gone with its sublime
I see its golden leaves go forth in rhyme

Autumn took my heart and its chime
And stole my sunshine to come in the spring
I see its golden leaves go forth in rhyme
Leaving tree limbs bare as Robins Sing

And stole my sunshine to come in the spring
Good-bye, good-bye faintly smiling
Leaving tree limbs bare as Robins Sing
Scarlet eiderdown layering autumns ring

Good-bye, good-bye faintly smiling
Serenade gone with its sublime
Scarlet eiderdown layering autumns ring
I haven't had a smile in a long time



9/8/2022

Star Wishes

Stars wrapped in eiderdown sky 
between cloud ruffles peering,
scintillatingly displayed celestial ornaments 
on which craving souls suspend heart wishes, 
yearning satisfaction 
as ardently as star worlds shine.

Copyright, May 8, 2022
Bite Size Poem No. 43

Just Hibernate

Winter bends low to blow gusty breaths, cold,
out of his northern lair beyond the warm
of summer’s enfolding. Capricious, bold
he plans his escapades of icy storm.
Clutching for a covering, nature gasps,
trembling in a landscape grown terrible;
ice-brittle moisture ricochets and rasps
on soft skin with rough strokes unbearable.
Firesides signal soft, cozy indoor dreams
of warm nests stitched in quilted eiderdown;
we bequeath outdoors to winter’s dark schemes 
to clothe the green world in dismal brown gown.

Three months to hibernate; he will retreat
before a stronger sun and winds grown sweet.

Copyright, November 18, 2019

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