Disobedient Poems


Premium MemberA Disobedient Prophet

Once a prophet who is now anonymous in name,
conveyed the Lord’s word, but later brought himself much shame.
If not disobedient, he might have won some fame.
He fell as prey to another man’s mendacious claim.

Ten of Israel’s twelve tribes would choose Jeroboam
over the son of Solomon, King Rehoboam.
Only tribes of Judah and Benjamin stayed loyal
They did
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Categories: disobedient, bible, religion,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberThe Lord was able to deliver me from a plot by demons Q and A and commentary

Q  Because of my relentless and persistent 'wool gathering' were Satan's
     demons actively plotting 'to put me out commission due to my willful
     acts of disobedience?

A  Yes

Q  Did God reveal their plan to my home-care worker and did she reveal them
   
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Categories: disobedient, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Prose


Premium MemberNaughty Johnny

Naughty Johnny's behavior still shocks us
When we try to correct him he mocks us
"My rude behavior
I greatly savor
Just for you, I'll become more obnoxious!"




1/8/2023

Image credit: Wild Child by Jason V from Getty Images Signature via Canva Pro

"Obnoxious" means extremely unpleasant, offensive, or distasteful behavior. What can parents do to address obnoxious behavior in their children?
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Categories: disobedient, child, parents,
Form: Limerick

Premium MemberNaked and Disobedient- What

Where am I and why am I in the still;
Standing naked unaware that I am even here;
The man next to me said if I do I’ll be as God;
That’s not how He (God) told us though;

So I’d listened to the stranger;
As he spit-out his lies;
I believed what he was selling and to my surprise
I was
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Categories: disobedient, analogy, anxiety, confusion, forgiveness,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Premium MemberDisobedient Naked In the Garden-

~And God said we are his children God said where are his children we were naked alone in the garden all things are ours we raised the lands I named everything I am Earth king while in the garden the father told us and could eat of anything but of a certain fruit bearing tree
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Categories: disobedient, adventure, analogy, anxiety, character,
Form: Dramatic Verse


Premium MemberMama Don T Cry Over Me a Disobedient Child---

MAMA DON T CRY OVER ME A DISOBEDIENT CHILD---

Mama don't cry
Wipe these tears from your eyes
I'm your child
Yes, I was born in sin
You and daddy brought me here

And I've tried
to be good as I should
But this, these choices I find
Are to hard and I sometimes pick the wrong ones

Oh, na na na na la la
My,
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Categories: disobedient, absence, cry, encouraging, endurance,
Form: Lyric

Nafarmaan Nakhalf Baitay Ka Noha-- Elegy of a Disobedient and Evil Son

BeAdab gustakh jab aulad ho jaye
Chain sukh maa'n baap ka barbaad ho jaye

Cheen le budbakht jo walid ka sarmaya
Jeete jee kion baap na barbad ho jae

Aasteen ka saamp that beta nhi the woh
Maut ae usko woh barbad ho jae

Baap kee jo he raza Allah kee bhi he
Aashna is qaul se aulad ho jae

Maa'n ke hee
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Categories: disobedient, child, emotions, evil, family,
Form: Nazm

A Disobedient Conscious

Questioning the darkest hour,
Forgetting the corruptive power.
Seen only at the bottom of the sea,
or in the next galaxy.

Don't know where to turn,
Sensing your stomach burn.
Your conscious doesn't want to obey.
Will you stay or die?
A fountain of tears to cry,
But no goodbye.

The maze
A secret gaze
Transformation phase
All take days
To forget about,
And to remember,
When it's oblivious.
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Categories: disobedient, confusion, introspection, life, mystery
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberA Disobedient Prophet Part Ii

Another prophet living near the town of Bethel
was enlightened of the events by his sons quite well.
This man determined this stranger as someone to know.
He then asked his sons, “On which road did this prophet go?”
After the sons told him, he said, “Saddle my donkey.”
The Bethel prophet then embarked on a short journey
until he encountered
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Categories: disobedient, adventure, religiongod, old, home,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberA Disobedient Prophet Part I

Once a prophet who is now anonymous in name,
conveyed the Lord’s word, but later brought himself much shame.
If not disobedient, he might have won some fame.
He fell as prey to another man’s mendacious claim.

Ten of Israel’s twelve tribes would choose Jeroboam
over the son of Solomon, King Rehoboam.
Only tribes of Judah and Benjamin stayed loyal
They did
...
Continue reading...
Categories: disobedient, adventure, religionwords,
Form: Rhyme
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