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Premium Member Soul Of A Moth

My old soul is what I feature
Never asked a reason why
Never tried to doubt the nature
Only feel the urge to fly
I’m a metaphor you might
Recognize in times you follow 
The trajectories of mind
In the dimness of tomorrow
When I’m tired of the flying
See me resting in the shade
Too much rest may equal dying
But I’m not at all afraid
I was born to find my light
Be it deep, or be it shallow
Flecks of sun, or moon at night
Lantern glimmer in the halo
I know that I must beware
Of the flame, but it’s a joke
I instinctively take care
From the turning into smoke
Only freedom is the cause
Of my little fragile life 
Flying over, I take course
To whatever source of light..

DIMNESS



      

        When there is no day,
        when there is no night...

          there is war time...
            darkness of life...!

Premium Member Spawns Dimness

Written: June 16, 2024

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Hope had gray hair and looked downcast,
Amid grieving and fears, hope is obscene.
At night, just a rocket and fanal were seen,
Life disappears into shrouds, leading to a blast.
 
Did the hurling and horrible air have a heart?
A single eye read the unformed wonder or boom.
He was the one who proved the current loom,
The quiddity draws the skies and earth apart.

Lord, my petition and argument are both fair,
What bears devils successful and me a failure?
Revolve their decay if the pair were my jailers,
Chervil-lined banks and curbs quiver with new air.

My sapient wairua creates an Elixir riddle ban,
Hoarding and ignoring nature led to a span.


Premium Member Amid the Feeble Dimness

In the midst of midnight croon 
laden with stars, the sky bends 
refracting light into a spectrum 
of drifting colour mystique blithe. 

Beauteous in a wilderness 
amid the feeble dimness
of old mossy leafless boughs;
owls and other creatures rouse
into emptiness of the night. 

They step out of the shadows
beneath the old resting maple, 
flickering candlelight in hand, 
and fall to their knees on soften 
crackle of dry leaves; a trifle eerie. 

A sudden gust of wind, a chill, 
reap and thresh, a tortured flesh,
kneeling in credence with mournful din. 
Penance will never end for sin 
in the dark hour struggle and shame.


11/29/2019

Scraping the Dimness

Like a prune, it was 
an old year, standing 
before me. You start 
counting the wrinkles.

In shift, you become 
the problem, cannot read 
the jigsaw. It had 
uprooted the faith.

I was terribley upset, the 
birds had not returned 
to the lake this winter; what 
do I do, I was talking to moon.

A new misty morning. I take a 
small foot, set myself in the 
god’s hour and start 
planting the bulbs of tulips.


Satish Verma

Saviour of Dimness

A MIND CAN LINGER
ON ENDLESS THINGS
WHILE A CONSCIENCE
CAN CONCEIVE THE
IMPOSSIBLE

AS SOON AS THESE
TWO TRUSS – 
YOUR HEART BECOMES
UNBALANCED

YOUR SOUL BECOMES
A DWELLER OF 
VILE VIVIDNESS

YOUR EMOTIONS GET
FLUMMOXED BETWEEN
FANTASY AND REALITY

IT LEAVES YOUR BODY 
IN DISQUIET
LEAVING IT TORPID

YOUR ACTIONS 
GET REINED
BY VENGEANCE
YOUR VISION BLINDED
BY OBSCURITY

THE ONLY WAY
TO PROHIBIT THESE TWO
FROM COMBINDING
IS BY TRUSTING
IN THE ALPHA AND OMEGA,
LORD OF ALL LORDS AND
KING OF ALL KINGS….
JESUS CHRIST – 
THE SAVIOR OF 
MANKIND


Dimness

Dimness
Draped in random spurts
Of light and radiance
While your face goes
In and out of my sight
And your words go
In and out of my heart

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