Amid the Feeble Dimness

In the midst of midnight croon laden with stars, the sky bends refracting light into a spectrum of drifting colour mystique blithe. Beauteous in a wilderness amid the feeble dimness of old mossy leafless boughs; owls and other creatures rouse into emptiness of the night. They step out of the shadows beneath the old resting maple, flickering candlelight in hand, and fall to their knees on soften crackle of dry leaves; a trifle eerie. A sudden gust of wind, a chill, reap and thresh, a tortured flesh, kneeling in credence with mournful din. Penance will never end for sin in the dark hour struggle and shame. 11/29/2019
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Neumann Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. Very meaningful ...
Barden Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 5:09 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Eve - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 2:41 AM
Congratulations on your top win in John's contest Eve. You already know how much I enjoyed this gem! : ) xxoo
Na Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 7:22 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Eve
Hamilton Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 10:34 AM
This is really well done Eve, congrats on a fine win!
La France Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem!
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:52 PM
- Dear Eve, congratulations so much on your top winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 3:16 AM
Wow Eve, this is profoundly moving and beautiful! Congratulations on your deserving First Placement. I loved the mystery and depth of this write. : ) xxoo
Na Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Eve
Adams Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:43 PM
powerful write, so skillfully penned Eve...congratulations on your win :) hugs
Gaul Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Eve, lovely poetic intention applied here. No wonder you placed so highly! Congratulations on another fine placement, your skills shine so.
Chiri Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Eve congratulations on your win!;)
Foster Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Wow... Extreme... powerful... exciting... scary.... wonderfully written. Ann
Connelly Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 8:09 PM
And so now Eve I've read your last poem submitted. Truly wonderful. I like the use of sonorous sounds that make a poem bounce. Thanks so much.
Sands Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Well written Eve! This is amazing :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Nicely flowing verse, Eve. The first stanza is beautiful.
Cunningham Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 10:35 AM
A brilliant verse you've composed Eve, best of luck. Tom
Green Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Wow, this was really deep my friend. Beautifully written Eve, your talent has penned a winner in my opinion. Best wishes in the contest
Na Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 2:46 AM
Hi Eve well done my friend. I will be back to congratulate you. Thanks for sharing
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