Committal Poems | Examples

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why …

why do we careless creatures
hold on so tightly?
tears are not poisonous
they will not etch our face with the
afflictions they carry
but they WILL assuage its acidity -
why not let them roll?
we … are ambiguity’s toys
for love is a whipping post and
an altar, divine …
we allow its words to chain us, unseen
to one or the other
when, in all better judgement
we could allay the flogging and the
flames of infatuation
by simply … letting … go …
yet our fists remain clenched about it
the cable of needs and passions and the
price we pay for them,
firmly in our grip
as we slowly tie it into a gallows
of emotional greed and
committal hubris …
thus …
no matter how many moonrises we
watch trickle thru life’s sieve,
we continue to fall like children for
the hearts we hope to sway
and pay for the privilege with the
dearest of currency …
all the while finding ourselves back in
a purgatory of indecision
weighing love and its costs against loneliness
never knowing which …
is the most …

deadly.
Categories: committal, analogy, relationship,
Form: Free verse

Premium Memberlimbo

why …

why do we careless creatures
hold on so tightly?
tears are not poisonous
they will not etch our face with the
afflictions they carry
but they WILL assuage its acidity -
why not let them roll?
we … are ambiguity’s toys
for love is a whipping post and
an altar, divine …
we allow its words to chain us, unseen
to one or the other
when, in all better judgement
we could allay the flogging and the
flames of infatuation
by simply … letting … go …
yet our fists remain clenched about it
the cable of needs and passions and the
price we pay for them,
firmly in our grip
as we slowly tie it into a gallows
of emotional greed and
committal hubris …
thus …
no matter how many moonrises we
watch trickle thru life’s sieve,
we continue to fall like children for
the hearts we hope to sway
and pay for the privilege with the
dearest of currency …
all the while finding ourselves back in
a purgatory of indecision
weighing love and its costs against loneliness
never knowing which …
is the most …

deadly.






Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, April 5, 2024
Categories: committal, analogy, loneliness, loss, love,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberLackluster Shellacking

Feeling sluggish, shelled.
Lithely lingering in the dust and grime.
Palette grey and dull, devoid of crisp bright hues,
Brushes all furry, frayed, blunt, incapable of fine detail.
Apathy and complacency palls to gloom and doom in my room.
Inactivity and being non-committal, chokes the creative urge, to be stillborn.
But then, words and poetry flood into the brain during sleepless nights.
There's no stopping it. 
Its spell, dispels the squashes, and quells the squishes to splats.
Categories: committal, feelings, inspiration,
Form: Free verse

Committal

Standard bearers lead the Hearse
Past we Veterans lining the road ,
Booted and Suited, at the salute,
In that honoured Veterans’ Code.
We all enter with respect on
This sad and solemn day
Standards precede his coffin  
As we see our brother on his way.

His long faithful service Included
An almost forgotten Korean War,
Now Our Brother Noel is at peace, 
Memories can’t trouble him any more.
We few are here in lieu of those
Who today couldn’t  be present,
The band of fellow Veterans 
We few so solemnly represent.

At the finish of the ceremony
At attention, sad eyed, mute
We stand by his casket for  
One last farewell salute
Just a few years I knew him,
Considered him my friend,
Sadly but with pride I come, 
Here to Parade at his end.
Categories: committal, death of a friend,
Form: Rhyme

Marital Gift Snatched

Monica is her name 
She was mould in modesty
Meek to her motherland..
More matured than nature 

Monica motile with sensation..
Mood to the moon
With money inherited
Majestic and colorful 
Mystical in her morality
Merrymake and smart 

Model status
Melodious voice 
Mild-mannered..
Committal... 

Murderous monday morning
Monica mood turn muddy 
Messy and mournful 
Motherhood engulfed 
For she was molested, 
rape, deflowered, cheated 
and battered.. 

Lost! 
Wicked world 
Life's unfair 
Hatred to humanity 
Marital gift snatched 
Pregnant to unknown 
Monica mourn..
Categories: committal, sad,
Form: Rhyme


Haha'D By Twos and Threes,

What are the remnants of today’s despair?
The unbearable sadness wickedly with intent,
The without pivoting to the realness of in it the context.
Seeming not what is envisioned to be the dispatched,
Developments of self – suckling on to be the for all.

What is of the uniqueness in support,
Through twos and threes and anchored in untested,
The appointments pivoting to the promises blanketed,
Stringing all along for the satisfaction and thrill of self-boost,
In riches and in ego from the to be for all.

What is of the realizations from the day’s count,
The rehabilitation of promises designed to lure through attention,
The today in half term that we still be non-committal and undeterred,
The blockbusting through town classed and egoed,
For them twos and threes inked in greed.

What is the word for tomorrow’s count,
Ghosting through all for the non-assertion of terms following,
The rejections of appointments through creeds and cultures.

For this level of leverage and compensation,
In brotherhood to parties different,
Haha’d by two and threes,
For same woes,
Bad leaders.

Poem by Hudhaifah Siyad Mohamed
Categories: committal, abuse, anger, conflict, confusion,
Form: ABC

If Unexpressed

Voluble, vocal
He didn’t agree
She remained non-committal
He thought, “It’s so dull.”
As he wanted everything
In black and white
Too suddenly
Too quickly
His watch words
Transparency and openness
No roundabouts, no guess
Scared to offend
She tried to mend
Willy-nilly toed the line
Bringing a sparkle
And a shine
To the relationship
Which now seemed
To take off
After the initial blip
Resulting in gushings
And outpourings
Too much
Too soon
Suspense killed
Mystery resolved
Thrill evaporated
Excitement got jaded
Relationship meandered
Before coming to a halt
He wondered
But could not pin the fault
Eventually asked
‘Who messed?’
She replied,
“Things would have been better
If unexpressed”
Categories: committal, relationship,
Form: Didactic

Premium MemberThe Speed of the Metronome

The Speed of the Metronome

Within our hearts there is a pendulum,
a metronome that keeps the pace.
If we listen to the moments pass,
the time begins to race.

Some swing to the left; some swing to the right,
while others just stand still in the middle.
Some can’t take sides or cause a row.
They are totally non-committal. 

We know the pendulum’s swinging,
and time is tick tocking away.
But, we can set the speed of the metronome,
slowing down the pace of the day.

5/24/17
Categories: committal, age, day, time,
Form: Rhyme

In the Shade of the Setting Son

Not at once, but gradually at my feet
random leaves, brown and brittle
carpenters diligently march in 
leaving my bark somewhat non-committal

Furtively, up grow the undesirables
the weedy weeds and the pesty pests
erstwhile friends in the summer sun
the heavenly snag inviting inquests

Wounded tree under forest affliction 
how to water; too little, too much
scarred by the bear claw and lightning strike  
yielding to the woodpecker, chickadee and bluebird clutch

Where only warmth now lingers, the flame once fired 
stands the smiling woodsman cleaning his plate
glistening against my trunk in the wink of a rising sun  
a sharpened ax waits and waits
Categories: committal, death, life, metaphor,
Form: Quatrain

Laugh At the World

Laugh at the world right now
Twisting emptying shell we wonder how

Time after time wars come
Deep loss post weapons hum

Countries losing blood refugees flee
Welcoming nations have been key

Lost so much finding so little
appears peace warrants asylum committal

Demagogues, wolves in sheep skin
Spewing rhetoric making heads spin

Leading blind still sustain lying illusion
Smart few staving off logical conclusion

Yes we assuredly must laugh
Reading in tears world's epitaph
Categories: committal, sympathy, war, wisdom, world,
Form: Couplet

Unrisen Horizon

Take off the glasses and 
look at it closely, the infant 
universe of the ? 
receding age.

I said, weapons should not 
be allowed to speak, cheating 
the all terrain of 
humankind.

The legality has to be 
defined to earn the daily 
bread for impregnable 
hunger.

Whatsoever, there was no 
precedence to take the occult
into the homes of non-
committal voices.

You become the temple 
without god, who was 
waiting at the gate.


Satish Verma
Categories: committal, art, universe,
Form: ABC

Premium MemberIt's Hard To Follow Through

Life is filled with trepidation
For both the young and old
But with a little dedication
Following through will take hold

Just follow through, your told

Remember when learning to bat
The ball went sailing by
Dad said there’s nothing that you lack
Just follow through and it will fly

Just follow through and it will fly

When a cute girl got your attention
And you had a chance to meet
How to ask her out, was the question
Just follow through; she’ll think you’re sweet

Just follow through; she’ll think you’re sweet

Then college was a load to manage
Too many choices blew the mind
Though was told to get an advantage
Just follow through; don’t fall behind

Just follow through; don’t fall behind

I was on the edge for marriage to begin
But afraid to make that committal
Yet, she’d follow me through thick and thin
Just following through answered the riddle!

Following through answers all riddles!
Categories: committal, nostalgia, philosophy, , cute,
Form: Ballad

Companion

Companion.
Comparable, compassionate compatibility.
Committal, compound or common availability.
Glorification panoistic or repudiation ability. 
Inattentive, inappreciable, impudent cruelity.
Repletion straggled and monolith joky stability. 
Licentious, monolatry rendering ostensibility.
Categories: committal, caregiving
Form: Name

So and So, So Much.

So and So, So Much.
 
Not so much as out of touch
as such
more so so much untouchable.
 
Nor so vague as unguessable
the intangible
more so or less the language
we re-touch
the blurred outline with

Not so much as unguessable
the soft luggage
more so that ill-defined
as much
more so the ephemeral baggage
of its mist out lined
to blind
 
As much as so much pretense
to be clear
the tongue loves whispers
with so much of truth
in as much of inhalation
yet so much as much joy
it speaks
and more
but does nothing less.
 
Not so much as out of touch
as such
more so so much untouchable.
 
So sleeping the selfish makes so much satisfactory
and as such so much of life
to live your life
is all that is made so readily.
 
 The amplitude is empty 
as such left as it was
by an unaccounted for yesterday
and yesterday when so much was left to be that much
but never more than that
as such.
 
Not so much as untouchable not so much
more so
as completely and utterly 
out of touch.
 
So sleepily the selfish makes all so much
and thinks that is all so much
satisfactory.
 
Such an ill-defined love
by non committal.
Categories: committal, introspection
Form: Free verse

Anonymous, Thy Love

The warmth converging over to you now,
denies that not a drop of it shall leave
as hearts have done in merriment conceive,
one's sanity to lose it or allow:
Contained in words the overture from source
has filled a sigh and sent it on a breeze,
whilst tempests urge it shudder no remorse
and neither shall they pardon your release.
I hear the thoughts surrounding you the next
whoever sends committal like I've owned
hath sworn a thousand words which now protects
the sanctuary paradise postponed.
Whilst perishing the thought I have to find,
your deep encrusted love which has been mined.
Categories: committal, lost love, words,
Form: Sonnet

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