In the Shade of the Setting Son

Not at once, but gradually at my feet
random leaves, brown and brittle
carpenters diligently march in 
leaving my bark somewhat non-committal

Furtively, up grow the undesirables
the weedy weeds and the pesty pests
erstwhile friends in the summer sun
the heavenly snag inviting inquests

Wounded tree under forest affliction 
how to water; too little, too much
scarred by the bear claw and lightning strike  
yielding to the woodpecker, chickadee and bluebird clutch

Where only warmth now lingers, the flame once fired 
stands the smiling woodsman cleaning his plate
glistening against my trunk in the wink of a rising sun  
a sharpened ax waits and waits
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Godwin Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Creatively written, Grant. An enjoyable poem that touched me. All the best ... CayCay
Norwood Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 10:29 AM
thank you...your comments are reminding me that i need to do a better job of commenting on other peoples writes too.
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